*Ladayi Ho Gayi Hai*

by Roja on January 22, 2009, 02:33:29 AM
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Zamane-ber ki in angdayiyon mein
Burayi chup gayi acchayiyon mein..

Ye diware uti toh humne jana
Ladayi ho gayi hai bhayiyon mein..

Kahi se mil gaya hai kya kajana
Jo ab utne lage oonchayiyon mein..

Pahadi raston per chale rahe ho
Ludak jao na gehrayiyon mein..

Jali hai kaun-si basti batao
Ajab-si bhuu(smell) hai in purvayiyon mein..

Kabhi rote rahe hum bheed mein bhi
Kabhi haste rahe tanhayiyon mein..

Zara tum gaur se dekho toh "Roja"
Kayi parvath chupe hai raayiyon mein....
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2009, 02:57:38 AM »
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her ek line ek se bar kar ek hai Roja... Superb Likha hai... magar yah do line to such main rula gai mujhe..

Kabhi rote rahe hum bheed mein bhi
Kabhi haste rahe tanhayiyon mein..
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2009, 03:13:52 AM »
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bahoot khoob roja....
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2009, 04:31:41 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 22, 2009, 02:33:29 AM
Zamane-ber ki in angdayiyon mein
Burayi chup gayi acchayiyon mein..

Ye diware uti toh humne jana
Ladayi ho gayi hai bhayiyon mein..

Kahi se mil gaya hai kya kajana
Jo ab utne lage oonchayiyon mein..

Pahadi raston per chale rahe ho
Ludak jao na gehrayiyon mein..

Jali hai kaun-si basti batao
Ajab-si bhuu(smell) hai in purvayiyon mein..

Kabhi rote rahe hum bheed mein bhi
Kabhi haste rahe tanhayiyon mein..

Zara tum gaur se dekho toh "Roja"
Kayi parvath chupe hai raayiyon mein....








Wah Wah Subhan allah kya likha janab !! maza agaya rooja ji !!

Aur is ashar ke kya kahene "

Jali hai kaunsi basti batao !!
ajab si boo hai in purva-e-yoon me !!

...............Roja..............

Ye sher duniya ke har shaqs se sawal karta nazar ata  hai !! kya maada aur wazan diya hai ghazal ko is sher ne bhai mahefooz rakhiyega is sher ko aag laga dega mahefiloon me !! Allah tumhare is kalam ko izzath bakshe Ameen !!


Eak Ashar Apki Nazar karta hon roji ji jo sacha-e-mabni hai !! Tawajjo chahonga !!

Ab wo Kaunse Amman ki baath karte hain qadeer !!
ajj bhi kai laashen mili hain viraniyoon me !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2009, 04:40:26 AM »
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bahoot achi lines likhi hai Qadeer ji apne... wah kaya baat hai, do line mai sab kah gaye!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2009, 04:57:58 AM »
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kya baat hai....roja ji   ....

khushiyan jo nazar aati hai insaano mein,
bahut burayiyan chupee hain,in ki parchaiyon mein.
ab toh sirf diware hi uti hai bhayiyon mein,
jannat ke badle,sab jaayege,apni hi khodi huyi khaaiyun mein.
 
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2009, 05:01:14 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 22, 2009, 04:40:26 AM
bahoot achi lines likhi hai Qadeer ji apne... wah kaya baat hai, do line mai sab kah gaye!!!!

Shukriya Pooja Ji inshallah is Lines ko jald hi ghazalka roop donga duva kijiya !! aur apko meri lines pasand ayi to iski qimat usool ho gayi ...Allah tumhe Khush rakhe !! aur apki sunch ko barqara rakhe ye line samjhne ke liye bahoth mudda chahiye !!ahesand mand hai apke ke apne is lines ko samjha aur saraha !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2009, 05:25:52 AM »
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Bahut khoob Roja Ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2009, 05:31:00 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 22, 2009, 05:01:14 AM
Shukriya Pooja Ji inshallah is Lines ko jald hi ghazalka roop donga duva kijiya !! aur apko meri lines pasand ayi to iski qimat usool ho gayi ...Allah tumhe Khush rakhe !! aur apki sunch ko barqara rakhe ye line samjhne ke liye bahoth mudda chahiye !!ahesand mand hai apke ke apne is lines ko samjha aur saraha !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Apki Gazal ka intzaar rahega!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2009, 09:06:50 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 22, 2009, 02:57:38 AM
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her ek line ek se bar kar ek hai Roja... Superb Likha hai... magar yah do line to such main rula gai mujhe..

Kabhi rote rahe hum bheed mein bhi
Kabhi haste rahe tanhayiyon mein..

Bahut bahut shukhriya didi aapne waqt nikal kar hamara
yeh kalam pada aur tarif ki... Thank you dear.
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2009, 09:18:15 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 22, 2009, 03:13:52 AM
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bahoot khoob roja....

Thanks Bhaiya
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 09:22:08 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 22, 2009, 05:00:45 AM
Bohat Khoob Roja Sis Keep It Up...

Thanks majid brother
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2009, 09:24:18 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 22, 2009, 04:57:58 AM
kya baat hai....roja ji   ....

khushiyan jo nazar aati hai insaano mein,
bahut burayiyan chupee hain,in ki parchaiyon mein.
ab toh sirf diware hi uti hai bhayiyon mein,
jannat ke badle,sab jaayege,apni hi khodi huyi khaaiyun mein.
 

Thank you Cara, and bahut accha likha hai aapne bi..Yu hi saat dena
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2009, 09:28:22 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 22, 2009, 04:31:41 AM
Wah Wah Subhan allah kya likha janab !! maza agaya rooja ji !!

Aur is ashar ke kya kahene "

Jali hai kaunsi basti batao !!
ajab si boo hai in purva-e-yoon me !!

...............Roja..............

Ye sher duniya ke har shaqs se sawal karta nazar ata  hai !! kya maada aur wazan diya hai ghazal ko is sher ne bhai mahefooz rakhiyega is sher ko aag laga dega mahefiloon me !! Allah tumhare is kalam ko izzath bakshe Ameen !!


Eak Ashar Apki Nazar karta hon roji ji jo sacha-e-mabni hai !! Tawajjo chahonga !!

Ab wo Kaunse Amman ki baath karte hain qadeer !!
ajj bhi kai laashen mili hain viraniyoon me !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Thank you very much Toopchi ji... aapne b bahut
umda jawab mein likha hai..
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2009, 09:31:23 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 22, 2009, 05:25:52 AM
Bahut khoob Roja Ji

Thanks Rajesh harish ji, saat dete rehna.
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