Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 13, 2011, 12:26:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 14, 2011, 07:57:23 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 13, 2011, 12:55:01 PM
khwaish ji...........esa likhne ka kya matlab he ?....

hud karte ho yaar.........rulane ke mood me ho kya ?

is poetry ki tarif nahi kar sakta me .........sach kahu to pahli baar kuch esa pada he jise khudke liye likha kah saku ....feel ho raha  he ki ye apne meri life per hi likh diya.......yakin maniye me is post per fit character hu......

well aaj halat alag he aur pahle se kafi behtar bhi ...

har ek para meri life ke bht se dino ko baya kar raha he
kisi ek ke liye kuch kahna mumkin nahi.........

it is one of ur best creation.........bahot hi umda........behtareen

lajawab.........mindblowing.........aur sach se labalab........

dil le gayi apki ye post........


Sabse Pehle To shukar hai Uss Rabb ka Ke Aaj Aapke Halaat Alag hai Aur Kaafi behtar bhi..

Aur Bhai, Aapka Kin Lafzon mein Shukriya Ada Karoon nahi Jaanta Par haan,Aapke Comments Padhkar Bahutttttttt Acha Laga..Aisa kayi baar Hota Hai Ke Hum kisi ka Kalaam padhte Hai To Sochte hai ke Haan!!! Yeh Mere Par Bilkul Fit Baithti hai..meri zindagi sach mein Yuhi Hai..Apane Inn Ehsaaso Ko Aapne Apni jaati Zindagi Se Jodkar Mehsoos Kiya.Aapka Tehhh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai..

Umeed Hai Aap Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete rahoge..bahut Bhaut Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #16 on: March 14, 2011, 12:22:21 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 13, 2011, 01:00:02 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janab khawahish sahab kya koob kahaa


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«Reply #17 on: March 14, 2011, 12:31:25 PM »
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lajawab peshkesh khwaish ji....
i lyk 1st, 3rd, 5th & 6th one...
waise ye kahna jyada behtar hai ki puri ki puri post hi kamal hai..
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #18 on: March 14, 2011, 12:52:29 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on March 13, 2011, 03:18:31 PM
waiting khwaish ji for kuch aur pal......tongue3
Sorry Anuji..Aaj Nahi Likh Paaya..Kuch Aur Pal Plz tongue3
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«Reply #19 on: March 15, 2011, 06:44:26 AM »
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very very goood khwaishji....

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«Reply #20 on: March 18, 2011, 10:11:31 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 13, 2011, 04:51:45 PM
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Kia khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.. behad gehre ashaar
kahe hai... aur bayaani bhi behad umdaa ki hai... Usual Smile

Dil se daad hazir hai janab

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Parwaaz Ji, Aapka Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya.. icon_flower

Aapki Tareef miljaaye to yakeen maniye, Behad khushi hoti hai aur aapke iss andaaz ka to amin kaayal hoon, jaise aap har ek Sher ko Importance dete ho bahut kam hi log hai jo iss tarah kisi aur ki bhi kalaam padhte hai varna Yoindia mein aajkal takreeban log apna likhte hai aur chalte bante hai..

aapka bahut bahut shukriya.. icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: March 18, 2011, 10:21:47 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 13, 2011, 05:34:40 PM
Bahut khoob khwaish ji..
Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geetji.. icon_flower

Humesha Saath Reha Karo Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: March 18, 2011, 10:35:57 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 13, 2011, 12:26:26 PM
Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Gehrai ho na ho, jab mera yeh dost likhta hai, toh
ankh bhar hi ati hai..Its certainly one of ur best if
not the best..Aur yeh bilkul Rahim ki zindagi se milta
jhulta kalam hai..

Woh la-parwahi wala shaer kya, woh gehrai wala shaer kya,
woh bewaffayi wala shaer kya..Bas lajawab..Aur jaise maine
kaha zindagi se milta hua..

Haan haalat badalte hai, so badal jaenge,
Waqt kay saath hum tanha rehna seekh jaenge,
Haan shayad ek waqt ayega jab woh Rahim ko pukaregi,
Mager sach kahoun Khwaish..Ab hum uske paas kabhi nahin jaenge..!

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Yeh kalam Rahim kay dil main bas gaya..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #23 on: March 22, 2011, 07:59:36 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 13, 2011, 07:05:24 PM
Kya baat hai ..... bahut khoooooooob .... khwaish ji !

bahut umdaa peshkash rahi ...... !

dil se daad ...... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !


Aapne Pasand Farmaya, Aapka Tehhh Dill Se Shukriya Naresh ji,,Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #24 on: March 23, 2011, 08:22:22 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 13, 2011, 09:45:08 PM
Wah wah Khwaish ji,maza aa gayi aapke pyari si kavita ko padke,kya adaaz hai ufffffff,aur Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut dard bhari khoobsurat lines likhi,great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tehhh Dillll Se Shukriya madhuji..

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«Reply #25 on: March 23, 2011, 08:38:09 AM »
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khwaish ji again bhut khooooooobsurat peshkash Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: March 23, 2011, 01:34:56 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on March 14, 2011, 04:23:06 AM
wah wah khwaishji...,. kya kahen hamm...... bas kurban ho gaye aapki is rachna par... mar gaye.... kya likha hai.... ese lagta hai jaise dil khol kar rakh diya ho..... bahut khub....\

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Anju Ji, Aapka Tehhhhhhhhh dillllllll Se Shukriya jo aapne iss rachna ko itna Pasand farmaya..Iss Izaat-afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya anju ji..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #27 on: April 14, 2011, 04:00:26 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 14, 2011, 12:31:25 PM
lajawab peshkesh khwaish ji....
i lyk 1st, 3rd, 5th & 6th one...
waise ye kahna jyada behtar hai ki puri ki puri post hi kamal hai..
bht bht khoob...

Aapka Tehhhhhhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Priyaji

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«Reply #28 on: April 14, 2011, 04:25:51 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah ,,... aapne tho Mere Dil ke ehsaaso ko Lafzo mein utaar diya.. MashaAllah Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Bahoot Bahoot khoob !!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: May 03, 2011, 08:47:53 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 13, 2011, 12:26:26 PM
Main Awaaz Doon Aur Tujhe Sunaai Naa De
Woh Aaene Hi kya Jisme Apna Chehra Dikhai Naa De

Tu Saath  Hai  Bhi Aur Saath Nahi Bhi!!!
Wafaa Ke Naam Par Yuh Be-Wafaai Naa De

Jo Baat Dil Mein Hai Lafzon mein Keh Bhi De
Itna Nadaan Nahi Hoon Ke Mujhe kuch Dikhaai Naa De

Raah mein Chalte-Chalte Rishton ke Maayne Badal Gaye
Aur Kuch Nahi Naa Sahi par Yuhi Jag-Hasaai Naa De..

Main Zakhm-Zakhm Hoon Aur Tujhe Koi Khabar Bhi Nahi!!!
Eh Khuda Itni Bhi sanam Mein Laa-Parwaahi Naa De..

"Khwaish" Haal-E-Dil Sunaata hai Yuhi Iss Mehfil Mein!!!
Kisi Ki Aankh Bhar Aaye,Itni Lafzon Mein Gehraai Naa De

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



kuch bhi baaqi na raha kahne ko abb khawaish...!
manzar aisa na dikha phir kuch bhi dikhaai na de, Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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