lag jati hai apno ki hi nazar........soudagar

by soudagar on July 24, 2012, 02:59:14 AM
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kal tak rok nahi pati thi jise lambi dagar bhi
aaj mujhko thaka detaa hai thoda saa safar hii

mohabat karne ki aarzu dil mein hai mere
par dar jata hoon main dekh mohabat ka hshr bhi

is dar se kabhi gour se nahi dekha tujhko
kehte hai lag jati hai apno ki hi nazar bhi

sunaa ghar suni galiyan suna jahan ho jata hai
milta hai dard aur reh jata hai tanhai ka safar hii

mohabat mein judai ki raat itni lambhi ho jati hai
chah kar bhi nahi ho pati milan ki sehar bhi

"soudagar"dil ro detaa hai aakhien bhar aati hai jab
suna deta hai mehfil mein koi dard b hari gazal bhi
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 03:08:02 AM »
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nice...
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 03:15:59 AM »
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kal tak rok nahi pati thi jise lambi dagar bhi
aaj mujhko thaka detaa hai thoda saa safar hii

mohabat karne ki aarzu dil mein hai mere
par dar jata hoon main dekh mohabat ka hshr bhi

is dar se kabhi gour se nahi dekha tujhko
kehte hai lag jati hai apno ki hi nazar bhi

sunaa ghar suni galiyan suna jahan ho jata hai
milta hai dard aur reh jata hai tanhai ka safar hii

mohabat mein judai ki raat itni lambhi ho jati hai
chah kar bhi nahi ho pati milan ki sehar bhi

"soudagar"dil ro detaa hai aakhien bhar aati hai jab
suna deta hai mehfil mein koi dard b hari gazal bhi



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Iss darr se Gaur Se nahi Dekha Tujh ko
Kehtye Hai Lag Jatti HAi aapno Ki Nazar Bhi
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 04:37:33 AM »
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bahut khoob soudagar beta khush raho
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 05:23:03 AM »
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Shukriya gaytri ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 09:58:13 AM »
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Bahut khoob,soudagarji.Bahut achhi ghazal hai.
khaas taur se 3rd sher aur maqta bahut pasand
aaya.mubarakbaad aur  duaaein.
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 11:51:32 AM »
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bahut khub soudagarji
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 12:20:20 PM »
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khoob kaha Soudagar Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2012, 04:25:39 PM »
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Vaaaaaah Saudagar jee
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 04:28:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukria kash ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2012, 04:41:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya saini sir bas yuhin apna sath banae rakhein. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 05:27:27 PM »
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teh dil se shukrya hasan sir
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2012, 02:32:34 AM »
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shukriya mann ji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2012, 01:51:39 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya amit ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2012, 05:16:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aapka
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