*****laut aa*****

by kaushikbhawna008 on July 11, 2008, 04:50:03 AM
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aa laut aa pardes jaane wale
dekh yahan bhi hain tere chahne waale

paison ka kya hai aayega chala jaayega
aa dekh yahan bhi hain tujhpar jaan lutaane waale

din-raat tu mashruf hai gairon ki mehfilon mei
aa dekh yahan bhi hain teri tanhai mitane waale

kuch paane ki chahat mei tu khud ko na kho dei kahin
aa dekh yahan bhi hain tera daaman thamne waale

kyu kar raha hai tu kisi se wafa-farast ki baatein
aa dekh yahan bhi hain tujhse mohobbat karne waale

chamchamti roshni dekh tu kahin bhatak na jaaye
aa dekh yahan bhi hain teri raah mei umeed k deepak jalane waale

tujhe jo chaah hai khushi ki wo har khushi tujhe milegi
aa dekh yahan bhi hain teri aankhon se har ashk churane waale

gumnaami ki bheed mei tu kho na jaaye kahin
aa dekh yahan bhi hain tujhe aawaz lagaane waale
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2008, 05:17:29 AM »
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aa laut aa pardes jaane wale
dekh yahan bhi hain tere chahne waale

Bahut Khoob Bhawna ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2008, 05:20:28 AM »
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chamchamti roshni dekh tu kahin bhatak na jaaye
aa dekh yahan bhi hain teri raah mei umeed k deepak jalane waale



bhawna ji,

khoob likha he aapne. yeh panktiyaan bahut acchi lagi.

Prateek
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2008, 05:20:51 AM »
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shukriya sammual ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2008, 05:21:47 AM »
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shukriya prateek ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2008, 05:47:05 AM »
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Bhawna

Very nice poem !

Bahut achcha laga padh kar !
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2008, 05:53:59 AM »
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thnx for apreciating this poem rajbir ji
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