~Likh jana bahaut hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on July 14, 2010, 09:41:25 PM
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Meri last post ko bhoolte hue, kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...
Bahaut kuch dil kehta gaya so kuch alag alag ehsaason ko jhorra hai iss nazm main...
Bahaut alag hai, sach kahoun toh khichdi jaisa hai...hehe...

Rote hue chehron ka muskurana bahaut hai,
Ghum ko jhooti muskurahat se chupana bahaut hai…

Mohobat ka toh woh sirf izhar karte hai; dikhate nahin,
Mager mere samne ate hi unka yun sharma jana bahaut hai…

Kabhi woh baat karte thakte nahin the aur aaj dekho yaaron,
Uff aaj toh unka humse humara haal puchna bahaut hai…

Ghareebon ko sam-man toh dete nahin bas thokron se nawazte hai,
Ek amir ka ek ghareeb ke salam ka jawab dejana bahaut hai…

Kuch log tanz karke tareef karte hai meri likhayi ka yaaron,
Sab jhelkar ‘Khamosh’ kuch likh jana bahaut hai…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2010, 11:07:30 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 14, 2010, 09:41:25 PM
Meri last post ko bhoolte hue, kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...
Bahaut kuch dil kehta gaya so kuch alag alag ehsaason ko jhorra hai iss nazm main...
Bahaut alag hai, sach kahoun toh khichdi jaisa hai...hehe...

Rote hue chehron ka muskurana bahaut hai,
Ghum ko jhooti muskurahat se chupana bahaut hai…

Mohobat ka toh woh sirf izhar karte hai; dikhate nahin,
Mager mere samne ate hi unka yun sharma jana bahaut hai…

Kabhi woh baat karte thakte nahin the aur aaj dekho yaaron,
Uff aaj toh unka humse humara haal puchna bahaut hai…

Ghareebon ko sam-man toh dete nahin bas thokron se nawazte hai,
Ek amir ka ek ghareeb ke salam ka jawab dejana bahaut hai…

Kuch log tanz karke tareef karte hai meri likhayi ka yaaron,
Sab jhelkar ‘Khamosh’ kuch likh jana bahaut hai…


~Rahim~

Bahut Umdaa Khayal...Sabhi ashaar khoob lage mujhe....bayaani aur adaayegi bhi impressive rahi.....very nice creation...dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2010, 11:12:22 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on July 14, 2010, 11:07:30 PM
Bahut Umdaa Khayal...Sabhi ashaar khoob lage mujhe....bayaani aur adaayegi bhi impressive rahi.....very nice creation...dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee!
Teh dil se shukar guzar hoon apka!
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2010, 04:51:59 AM »
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   Bahut achhi khichdi parosi hai aapne Raheem ji. Sare Ashaar k khyalaat bahut achhe hain. Aise hi achhi-achhi peshkash paroste rahein. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2010, 08:15:38 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut hi khoob...!!!
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Shukriya Kapil dost, Tamanna jee aur Kasak dil ki jee...Teh dil se shukriya ada karta hoon...
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2010, 10:03:27 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Jazbaat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2010, 10:16:06 AM »
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rahim ji bahut khoob daad hazir hai kubul farmayen.
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 14, 2010, 09:41:25 PM
Meri last post ko bhoolte hue, kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...
Bahaut kuch dil kehta gaya so kuch alag alag ehsaason ko jhorra hai iss nazm main...
Bahaut alag hai, sach kahoun toh khichdi jaisa hai...hehe...

Rote hue chehron ka muskurana bahaut hai,
Ghum ko jhooti muskurahat se chupana bahaut hai…

Mohobat ka toh woh sirf izhar karte hai; dikhate nahin,
Mager mere samne ate hi unka yun sharma jana bahaut hai…

Kabhi woh baat karte thakte nahin the aur aaj dekho yaaron,
Uff aaj toh unka humse humara haal puchna bahaut hai…

Ghareebon ko sam-man toh dete nahin bas thokron se nawazte hai,
Ek amir ka ek ghareeb ke salam ka jawab dejana bahaut hai…

Kuch log tanz karke tareef karte hai meri likhayi ka yaaron,
Sab jhelkar ‘Khamosh’ kuch likh jana bahaut hai…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2010, 01:09:29 PM »
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Shukriya Khwahish Dost aur Suresh jee...
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Amazing Yaaaaar.. bahut Hi Khooooooooob Likha hai.. daad Kubool karo bhai.. Applause Applause



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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan...Bahaut bahaut shukriya!
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