Likhna Mera******

by Pooja on May 16, 2006, 04:06:01 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2006, 03:10:24 PM »
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Pooja ji bahut khoob....

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Shukaria Gesu....

aourat ko apni gazalo main
nadi, hawa, ghata aor fiza bataya
ussi ko kis liye phir a duniya
bandhano mai bandh baithaya
hey Fiza to use mehak jaane do
nadi ko apni zindagi, jee jaane do
ghata hai to use jhoom kar bbaras jaane do
hawa ko khul kar, kuch sanse le jaane do......
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #16 on: July 23, 2006, 05:53:31 AM »
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Thanks Sonu Usual Smile

do shabdo mai kaho to aourat simat jaaye
likho kitabe (books) bhi, to kam pad jaaye
ajeeb dastaan Rub ne is aourat ki banai hai
jitna kaho kam, magar ek khamoshi mai bhi simat aai hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2006, 06:12:11 AM »
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Pankhuri sis your mostwelcome  :oops: .. bahut khoob sis...

aourat ko beyaaa keysey karo mey
maa.. beyti... bahen.. bahow... or bevi sab ek dayre mey ghiri
ajeeb dastaan hai enki jo ek sunsan gangor andheyrye mey meyley
sab ko beyan ker pana mushkil hia
aourat vo hai jo apney gahar ko apney low(roshni) sey ghar mey chirag kerti hai
or aourat ka dusra roop ghar mey andheyra kerti hia

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Thanks Sonu Usual Smile

do shabdo mai kaho to aourat simat jaaye
likho kitabe (books) bhi, to kam pad jaaye
ajeeb dastaan Rub ne is aourat ki banai hai
jitna kaho kam, magar ek khamoshi mai bhi simat aai hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #18 on: July 24, 2006, 02:59:12 PM »
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ahsaas ko shabdo mai utara hai
khud ko kavita mai utara hai
kabh hans kar kabhi ro kar
khud hi khud ko sanwara hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2006, 07:02:48 AM »
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bahut khoob sis....

ajkal es dukh bhari ketab ko bedta koi nahi
khoon sey likhi sihay ab mithti nahi
khud ko ab etna pasijha hia dukhu mey
key her ahhat per lagey key sheyd koi marham laya hai
jub darvaja khula to majak heva ker gaye
jub koi samney na dikha to phir ek or phali ben gaye..



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ahsaas ko shabdo mai utara hai
khud ko kavita mai utara hai
kabh hans kar kabhi ro kar
khud hi khud ko sanwara hai
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niraj_191
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«Reply #20 on: December 21, 2006, 08:01:51 AM »
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Choti choti si baato ka afsaana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya

Dil mai ayye zazbaato ko shabdo mai utara hai
Man mai aai peera ko, dil se nikala hai
Peera aor zazbaato ka taraana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Jhoom kar jab kabhi, koi khayal sajaya
Khud ko sajane ka phir is man mai ayya
Apne khawabo ko shabdo mai jo sajaya
Un shabdo ka duniya se taana phir ayya

Khud ko sajana, khawab-e-hasrat ban kar rah gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Her ek zazbaat ke rang ki holi
Aor duniya ki yah tikhi-mithi boli
Kon kis bhesh mai kheile yah toli
Apni to wahin bhir khali ek jholi!!!

Khali is jholi se, dastan-e-nagma ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!

Likhati hu jab bhi, khud se kheil jaati hu
Apne hi shabdo se, bhed rakh jaati hu
Dard in shabdo mai, mere lahoo se atta hai
Armaano ka rang, tanhaaiyo se atta hai

Likhana Mera, jurm-e-aourtana ban gaya
Likhna mera, duniya kahti hai shayrana ban gaya!!


good words!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #21 on: December 21, 2006, 09:52:59 AM »
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wah bahut khoob likha hai sabhi ne
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: December 22, 2006, 05:24:55 AM »
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Thanks Niraj ji and Tosha
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2007, 07:01:01 PM »
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Nahi hu khud main ajj main
Gum ko wo barsaat aai hai
Her taraf tu hi tu,
Dard ki laher, sannatte sa dard laai hai

Karu tujhko yaad main
Rona magar atta nahi
Such hai yahi tujh bin
kuch bhi mujko bhata nahi
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: March 03, 2007, 03:53:46 AM »
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Likhate likhate kuch bhool jaati hu
socho mai apni hi gheer jaati hu

door hokar bhi kitne pass ho tum
tumhare ahsaas se lipte jaati hu

ek andhiyara charo taraf hai mere
phir bhi teri tasveer hi dekhein jaati hu

jis raah se koi manjil nahi milani mujko
kyun phir ussi raah per chale jaati hu
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2007, 03:51:48 AM »
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Her teri ek kahi baat ka Ikraar kiya
Di jo zindagi tune, ussi se payaar kiya

Chup apni khamoshi se samjhota kiya
Her baar khud hi se maine dhoka kiya

Shayad meri chuppi ne dheere dheere tujhe jallad kiya
Na dekh saka apne garoor main, kaya tune sabka haal kiya

Rub per tha bharosa, her pal ussi ka naam liya
Ab hue raste alag, Ja tujhko apne hi Rub ke hawale kiya
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«Reply #26 on: March 12, 2007, 08:52:06 AM »
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wonderful  Pooja  didi....  dono   poem  bahot  accha  hai........
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Pooja
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«Reply #27 on: March 20, 2007, 01:47:03 PM »
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Thanks Waheed
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: February 29, 2008, 04:04:38 PM »
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Lub per akar shabd ruk jaate hai
Kalam per akar shabd ruk jaate hai
Soch mai pad gai hai yah soch
Kyun hum chalte chalte raah badal jaate hai

Suchai se anjaan nahi, phir kyun khwab sajate hai
Pal do pal ke sukh keliye, jeevan ko tadpaate hai
Hai ek andhiara chaya, kyun aor andhiare mai jaate hai
Soch mai hai ajj Pooja ki kalam, kyun khud hi khud ko dukh diye jaate hai!!
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«Reply #29 on: February 29, 2008, 04:10:38 PM »
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Lub per akar shabd ruk jaate hai
Kalam per akar shabd ruk jaate hai
Soch mai pad gai hai yah soch
Kyun hum chalte chalte raah badal jaate hai

Suchai se anjaan nahi, phir kyun khwab sajate hai
Pal do pal ke sukh keliye, jeevan ko tadpaate hai
Hai ek andhiara chaya, kyun aor andhiare mai jaate hai
Soch mai hai ajj Pooja ki kalam, kyun khud hi khud ko dukh diye jaate hai!!

bahut khoob..
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