Likhna Mera******

by Pooja on May 16, 2006, 04:06:01 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 29, 2008, 04:16:54 PM »
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Thanks Roja!!
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«Reply #31 on: November 25, 2008, 07:06:00 PM »
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likhne ko hai bahoot man main, kalam ne sath na nibhaya hai
ajj phir likhte likhte, yah dil bhar ayya hai
meri tanhaai ne, mujhse kitna likhwaya hai
kabhi mila skoon kalam se, kabhi dil aor bhar ayya hai

dard thumta nahi, kalam rukati nahi, yah kaisa sama ayya hai
maine to kiya tha sab sahi, phir yah kon sa morr ayya hai
hue juda hum saalo se, phir kyun man ajj tadap ayya hai
shayad ajj kahin per baithe baithe, tujhko khayal mera ayya hai

hu kitani nadan, jo yah khayal mere man main ayya hai
tum socho mere baare, maine, apne he majak urraya hai
aii hai ab vida ki tareekh, mere dil ne khud ko samjhaya hai
bahoot ho chuka kheil lekh ka, na jaane kalam ne ajj kaya likhwaya hai
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honeyrose
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«Reply #32 on: November 25, 2008, 07:08:30 PM »
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Very nice pooja.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #33 on: November 25, 2008, 07:12:32 PM »
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shukaria Honey!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #34 on: July 11, 2009, 02:39:00 AM »
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Wah Pooja ji,aise hi likhte rahena,excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #35 on: July 11, 2009, 05:50:25 AM »
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Marvelous .... Bahoot bahoot shandhar tha di.. bahoot gehri feelings hai.. Fantastic.. ..Bahoot Umda Di
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #36 on: July 11, 2009, 07:20:17 AM »
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Poojaji kya khoob lika hai aapne.....
Dard ka dariya he baha diya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati...

Kahani kisi ki ho mujhe to apna he aksh nazar aaya hai
Lagta hai kahani meri rab ne teri kalam se likhvayee hai
Aansoo mere syahi ban teri kalam se shabdo mai dhale hai
Likhna tera mere dil k jakhmo ko firse hara banaya hai
Bhul gai thi jisko aaj kyu firse meri yado me wo aaya hai
Kambakht dil bhi chot kha-kha kar bhi nahi samajh paya hai


Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 07:06:00 PM
likhne ko hai bahoot man main, kalam ne sath na nibhaya hai
ajj phir likhte likhte, yah dil bhar ayya hai
meri tanhaai ne, mujhse kitna likhwaya hai
kabhi mila skoon kalam se, kabhi dil aor bhar ayya hai

dard thumta nahi, kalam rukati nahi, yah kaisa sama ayya hai
maine to kiya tha sab sahi, phir yah kon sa morr ayya hai
hue juda hum saalo se, phir kyun man ajj tadap ayya hai
shayad ajj kahin per baithe baithe, tujhko khayal mera ayya hai

hu kitani nadan, jo yah khayal mere man main ayya hai
tum socho mere baare, maine, apne he majak urraya hai
aii hai ab vida ki tareekh, mere dil ne khud ko samjhaya hai
bahoot ho chuka kheil lekh ka, na jaane kalam ne ajj kaya likhwaya hai
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #37 on: July 11, 2009, 07:28:58 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 11, 2009, 07:20:17 AM
Poojaji kya khoob lika hai aapne.....
Dard ka dariya he baha diya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati...

Kahani kisi ki ho mujhe to apna he aksh nazar aaya hai
Lagta hai kahani meri rab ne teri kalam se likhvayee hai
Aansoo mere syahi ban teri kalam se shabdo mai dhale hai
Likhna tera mere dil k jakhmo ko firse hara banaya hai
Bhul gai thi jisko aaj kyu firse meri yado me wo aaya hai
Kambakht dil bhi chot kha-kha kar bhi nahi samajh paya hai



Fantastic... Anamika ji.. Daad kabool kare..Bahoot Hi umda likha hai .. Wonderful lines... Bahoot Khoob!
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ANAAMIKA
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«Reply #38 on: July 11, 2009, 07:57:04 AM »
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Dhanyavaad.......Sophiji.....

Dil main jab ghaav ho tou peer riss he aati hai...
Sabdo mai likhna kabhi mumkin tou kabhi namumkin
Ye tou Pooja-di ko saraswati ka vardaan hai jo
Bakhubi is tarah likh paati hain....
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«Reply #39 on: July 11, 2009, 08:00:31 AM »
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Yea baat tho sahi kahi tumne.. Sach mea Pooja di tho Kamaal Ka likhti hai..

But I the way you written .. Thats really wonderful..

Kar Dete Hai bayaan Sab Haal- e - Dil
Par Ghaav Nahi Dil se Mitaa paate hai

Taseer bana gaya hai jo Kal Zeene par
Usse Nazre Chah kar bhi hata nahi paate hai

Beh hi jaati hai Ashkho ki tez Daar jab
jab Kisi ko Apne Dil k behad kareeb paate hai
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Roja
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«Reply #40 on: July 12, 2009, 04:11:52 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 25, 2008, 07:06:00 PM
likhne ko hai bahoot man main, kalam ne sath na nibhaya hai
ajj phir likhte likhte, yah dil bhar ayya hai
meri tanhaai ne, mujhse kitna likhwaya hai
kabhi mila skoon kalam se, kabhi dil aor bhar ayya hai

dard thumta nahi, kalam rukati nahi, yah kaisa sama ayya hai
maine to kiya tha sab sahi, phir yah kon sa morr ayya hai
hue juda hum saalo se, phir kyun man ajj tadap ayya hai
shayad ajj kahin per baithe baithe, tujhko khayal mera ayya hai

hu kitani nadan, jo yah khayal mere man main ayya hai
tum socho mere baare, maine, apne he majak urraya hai
aii hai ab vida ki tareekh, mere dil ne khud ko samjhaya hai
bahoot ho chuka kheil lekh ka, na jaane kalam ne ajj kaya likhwaya hai


Again Lovely continuation dear didi..
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Roja
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«Reply #41 on: July 12, 2009, 04:12:41 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 11, 2009, 07:57:04 AM
Dhanyavaad.......Sophiji.....

Dil main jab ghaav ho tou peer riss he aati hai...
Sabdo mai likhna kabhi mumkin tou kabhi namumkin
Ye tou Pooja-di ko saraswati ka vardaan hai jo
Bakhubi is tarah likh paati hain....

Bahut khoob Anaamika
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Roja
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«Reply #42 on: July 12, 2009, 04:13:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 08:00:31 AM
Yea baat tho sahi kahi tumne.. Sach mea Pooja di tho Kamaal Ka likhti hai..

But I the way you written .. Thats really wonderful..

Kar Dete Hai bayaan Sab Haal- e - Dil
Par Ghaav Nahi Dil se Mitaa paate hai

Taseer bana gaya hai jo Kal Zeene par
Usse Nazre Chah kar bhi hata nahi paate hai

Beh hi jaati hai Ashkho ki tez Daar jab
jab Kisi ko Apne Dil k behad kareeb paate hai

Divya... aapne bahut bahut accha reply diya hai...  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #43 on: July 12, 2009, 10:03:32 AM »
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Wah Kya baat Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Kitne Dard Ke Sath Apne Jazzbaaton Ko Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Really Great Words Pooja Ji.. Applause Applause

Anamika Ji & Divya Dear..aap Dono Ne Bhi Kamaal Ke Alfaaz Likhe Hain... Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #44 on: July 13, 2009, 04:47:22 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 11, 2009, 02:39:00 AM
Wah Pooja ji,aise hi likhte rahena,excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahot bahoot shukaria Madhu ji!!
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