Likhna Mera******

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«Reply #45 on: July 13, 2009, 04:47:45 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 05:50:25 AM
Marvelous .... Bahoot bahoot shandhar tha di.. bahoot gehri feelings hai.. Fantastic.. ..Bahoot Umda Di

Thanks Sophi dear!!!
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«Reply #46 on: July 13, 2009, 04:54:23 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 11, 2009, 07:20:17 AM
Poojaji kya khoob lika hai aapne.....
Dard ka dariya he baha diya hai aapne.... Applause Applause Applause

Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati...

Kahani kisi ki ho mujhe to apna he aksh nazar aaya hai
Lagta hai kahani meri rab ne teri kalam se likhvayee hai
Aansoo mere syahi ban teri kalam se shabdo mai dhale hai
Likhna tera mere dil k jakhmo ko firse hara banaya hai
Bhul gai thi jisko aaj kyu firse meri yado me wo aaya hai
Kambakht dil bhi chot kha-kha kar bhi nahi samajh paya hai




Anaamika ji apki lines na jaane kitni baar parri hai!! Apki yah line dard mai bheego gai mujhe "Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati..."

Mere dard se apne jo apna dard milaya hai
such kahti hu Dost, yah dil halak main ayya hai
na socha tha, mere dard ka aaina bhi hoga kahi
par dard to dard hai, yah apki lines ne samjhaya hai

pathar bani dunia her taraf dard he to uglegi
Masoomiyat milegi jahan, wahi to wo kuchlegi
kalam apki ne apka dard jo mujhe samjhaya hai
man mai Peera aor ankho se ashak tapak ayya hai

Khuda kare ki is dard se app mukat ho jaaye
mile hai ansoo jahan, wahan ab muskaan ban jaaye
Ajanbi hu main, chal doogi main bhi apne raste
rahegi dil se dua, Manjil apko sahi ab mil jaaye!!!
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«Reply #47 on: July 13, 2009, 04:57:06 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on July 11, 2009, 07:57:04 AM
Dhanyavaad.......Sophiji.....

Dil main jab ghaav ho tou peer riss he aati hai...
Sabdo mai likhna kabhi mumkin tou kabhi namumkin
Ye tou Pooja-di ko saraswati ka vardaan hai jo
Bakhubi is tarah likh paati hain....

Anaamika ji tahe dil se apki shukargujaar hu ki apne mere liye itne ache shabd likhe, jise parr kar koi bhi apne per garv mehsoos kare... na jaane kitani baar apke yah shabd parre aor kaano ko hath laga ... bhagwaan ji se maafi mangi ki main kaha is kabil hu.. bas ajnabi dosto ka pyaar hai.. yakinan apne mujhe umarbhar yaad rakhne ko ek yaad de di hai apni in lines ke jariye...aor kaya kahu kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai!!
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«Reply #48 on: July 13, 2009, 05:03:16 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 08:00:31 AM
Yea baat tho sahi kahi tumne.. Sach mea Pooja di tho Kamaal Ka likhti hai..

But I the way you written .. Thats really wonderful..

Kar Dete Hai bayaan Sab Haal- e - Dil
Par Ghaav Nahi Dil se Mitaa paate hai

Taseer bana gaya hai jo Kal Zeene par
Usse Nazre Chah kar bhi hata nahi paate hai

Beh hi jaati hai Ashkho ki tez Daar jab
jab Kisi ko Apne Dil k behad kareeb paate hai

Apki Pooja di kamal likhti hai uski yah Sophi sis dhamaal likhati hai.. Mil kar kamaal#@dhamaal.yoindia hota hai...  Thumbs UP

Jitna likha, utna mita, jitna likha , utna bada
zakham hai, dard hai, yaad hai jise khud na samjha insaan

Apno ne diya, kaise diya, issi soch main hua dafan
ansoo mai dooba hai sab, jo ek din tha khila khila chaman

tha kareeb, ab nahi kareeb, phir bhi kareeb
suljha-uljha, siskata hua yeh mera tan aor man

shabdo mai uljhtati jaati hai ab to yah kalam
likhna bhi chahu to kaha tak likhu, ghayal Pooja ki ghayal kalam!!
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«Reply #49 on: July 13, 2009, 05:03:44 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 04:12:41 AM
Bahut khoob Anaamika

shukaria Roja dear!!!
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«Reply #50 on: July 13, 2009, 05:04:10 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 12, 2009, 10:03:32 AM
Wah Kya baat Baat Hai Pooja Ji.. Kitne Dard Ke Sath Apne Jazzbaaton Ko Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Really Great Words Pooja Ji.. Applause Applause

Anamika Ji & Divya Dear..aap Dono Ne Bhi Kamaal Ke Alfaaz Likhe Hain... Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji!!!
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«Reply #51 on: July 13, 2009, 05:08:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 04:54:23 PM

Anaamika ji apki lines na jaane kitni baar parri hai!! Apki yah line dard mai bheego gai mujhe "Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati..."

Mere dard se apne jo apna dard milaya hai
such kahti hu Dost, yah dil halak main ayya hai
na socha tha, mere dard ka aaina bhi hoga kahi
par dard to dard hai, yah apki lines ne samjhaya hai

pathar bani dunia her taraf dard he to uglegi
Masoomiyat milegi jahan, wahi to wo kuchlegi
kalam apki ne apka dard jo mujhe samjhaya hai
man mai Peera aor ankho se ashak tapak ayya hai

Khuda kare ki is dard se app mukat ho jaaye
mile hai ansoo jahan, wahan ab muskaan ban jaaye
Ajanbi hu main, chal doogi main bhi apne raste
rahegi dil se dua, Manjil apko sahi ab mil jaaye!!!



Ek baar Phir Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Pooja Ji.. Anamika Ki Khubsoorat Rachna Ka Isse Accha Jawab ho hi nahi sakta.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. !! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #52 on: July 14, 2009, 08:44:13 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 13, 2009, 05:08:57 PM
Ek baar Phir Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai Pooja Ji.. Anamika Ki Khubsoorat Rachna Ka Isse Accha Jawab ho hi nahi sakta.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. !! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Tahe dil se apki Shukar Guzar hu MANN JI!!
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«Reply #53 on: October 25, 2009, 07:30:54 PM »
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Poojaji...aapki tariff ne tou....Zarre ko aasmaan par bithane jaise misal kar di hai...Tahedil se shukriya aapka....

Dard se dard ko raah hoti hai
Ruh ko ruh ki pehchan hoti hai
Ajnabi kaise maan lu tujhko mai
Jab mere dard ka ehsaas tujhko hai

Masiha tujhsa,jab raah dikhaye mujhko
Manzil sahi mil he jayegi ab mujhko
Man mai ho raha hai vishwaas mujhko
Mite dard tera bhi duaa de rahi hu tujhko



Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 04:54:23 PM

Anaamika ji apki lines na jaane kitni baar parri hai!! Apki yah line dard mai bheego gai mujhe "Main roun ya doobu...kya karu...samajh nahi paati..."

Mere dard se apne jo apna dard milaya hai
such kahti hu Dost, yah dil halak main ayya hai
na socha tha, mere dard ka aaina bhi hoga kahi
par dard to dard hai, yah apki lines ne samjhaya hai

pathar bani dunia her taraf dard he to uglegi
Masoomiyat milegi jahan, wahi to wo kuchlegi
kalam apki ne apka dard jo mujhe samjhaya hai
man mai Peera aor ankho se ashak tapak ayya hai

Khuda kare ki is dard se app mukat ho jaaye
mile hai ansoo jahan, wahan ab muskaan ban jaaye
Ajanbi hu main, chal doogi main bhi apne raste
rahegi dil se dua, Manjil apko sahi ab mil jaaye!!!
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«Reply #54 on: October 25, 2009, 07:42:15 PM »
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Pooja-di Umra bhar yaad rakhne ka vaada karti ho
Aur ab bhi mujhe ajnabi kah kar sambodhit karti ho

Punar-janm mai kaise vishwaas n karu main
Rishta tujhse mera janm janm ka lagta hai

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 04:57:06 PM
Anaamika ji tahe dil se apki shukargujaar hu ki apne mere liye itne ache shabd likhe, jise parr kar koi bhi apne per garv mehsoos kare... na jaane kitani baar apke yah shabd parre aor kaano ko hath laga ... bhagwaan ji se maafi mangi ki main kaha is kabil hu.. bas ajnabi dosto ka pyaar hai.. yakinan apne mujhe umarbhar yaad rakhne ko ek yaad de di hai apni in lines ke jariye...aor kaya kahu kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai!!
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«Reply #55 on: October 25, 2009, 07:52:09 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya aapka Divyaji.....

Aapne bhi bahoot achha likha hai....ye lines dil ko chho gayi..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Beh hi jaati hai Ashkho ki tez Dhaar jab
jab Kisi ko Apne Dil k behad kareeb paate hai"


Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 08:00:31 AM
Yea baat tho sahi kahi tumne.. Sach mea Pooja di tho Kamaal Ka likhti hai..

But I the way you written .. Thats really wonderful..

Kar Dete Hai bayaan Sab Haal- e - Dil
Par Ghaav Nahi Dil se Mitaa paate hai

Taseer bana gaya hai jo Kal Zeene par
Usse Nazre Chah kar bhi hata nahi paate hai

Beh hi jaati hai Ashkho ki tez Daar jab
jab Kisi ko Apne Dil k behad kareeb paate hai
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«Reply #56 on: October 25, 2009, 07:54:31 PM »
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Thanks Roja ji....

Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 04:12:41 AM
Bahut khoob Anaamika
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«Reply #57 on: November 19, 2009, 06:12:32 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on October 25, 2009, 07:30:54 PM
Poojaji...aapki tariff ne tou....Zarre ko aasmaan par bithane jaise misal kar di hai...Tahedil se shukriya aapka....

Dard se dard ko raah hoti hai
Ruh ko ruh ki pehchan hoti hai
Ajnabi kaise maan lu tujhko mai
Jab mere dard ka ehsaas tujhko hai

Masiha tujhsa,jab raah dikhaye mujhko
Manzil sahi mil he jayegi ab mujhko
Man mai ho raha hai vishwaas mujhko
Mite dard tera bhi duaa de rahi hu tujhko





App jab bhi likhati hai dil ko chu jaane wale shabd likhati hai.... maafi chahti hu ki ajj kal Yoindia per na anne ki wajah se itani deri main apko jawab likh rahi hu...
 bahoot bahoot shukaria duao ke liye... jab koi is tarah apna ban kar dua de.. yakin karne ko man karta hai... is baar suni jayegi .. Usual Smile


sahi kaha dost, dard ko dard ki raah hoti hai
jis ne dekha ho safar, us insaan ko us raah ki yaad hoti hai
kaantein chubhe kitne, yah na socha kabhi chalte chalte
bichaye the kisi apne ne, bas itani si baat hoti hai...

na kaho masiha, hu bahoot he sadharan si insaan yah Pooja
bhagwaan ji bhi lete hai kai baar imtihaan, itani si baat hoti hai
Dil se dua dost her janam mai mile dosti tumhaari aor dekhu tumhe khushio main
miol jaaye koi apna, app jaisa, yah bhi khushnaseebi ki baat hoti hai..
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«Reply #58 on: November 19, 2009, 06:14:04 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAMIKA on October 25, 2009, 07:42:15 PM
Pooja-di Umra bhar yaad rakhne ka vaada karti ho
Aur ab bhi mujhe ajnabi kah kar sambodhit karti ho

Punar-janm mai kaise vishwaas n karu main
Rishta tujhse mera janm janm ka lagta hai


hai janam ka Rishta to Pooja nibhayegi
apki kahi her baar sir ankhon per uthayegi
mili hai jo khushi apke in shabdo se ajj mujhko
iska ahsaas her baar lubo per mere muskaan layegi
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«Reply #59 on: November 19, 2009, 06:53:02 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Pooja ji and Anaamika ji,kamaal ke likha aap dono ne bahut dard aur gaherai hai aapke kavita mein,samajh sakti hoon aapke dard ko.excellent creation.keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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