**Log badalte jaa rahe hai** by Rahim

by dead heart on September 11, 2009, 04:55:09 PM
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Salaam..

Yeh meri pichli ghazlon se thodi thodi match karti hogi soch main par lavz alag hai...Bas itna kehna chahunga: padne se pehle aur padne ke bad khud ki zindagi par gaur kijiyega aur dekhiyega kitni cheezein similar hongi iss ghazal main aur apki life main...Koi galti hui ho toh iss nadan ko maaf kar dijiyega...

Maafi chahunga length ke liye...

Zindagi ke woh khubsoorat lamhe kahin khote jaa rahe hai,
Jo kal apne the woh aaj paraye hote jaa rahe hai,
Kabhi maa ke haath ki roti sabse swadisht lagti thi,
Aaj toh bas Mcdonalds ko hi chunte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Ek waqt tha jab beta baap ki godd main soya karta tha,
Baap ki dant sunkar root jaya karta tha,
Phir baap bhi usse mohobat se manaya karta tha,
Aaj toh hum maa-baap ko hadkate jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Ek waqt tha jab hum Khuda ko yaad kiya karte the,
Sahi waqt par namazein adda kiya karte the,
Khud ke liye hi nahin balke sabke liye duaein manga karte the,
Aaj toh bas paison ko aehmiat dekar hum uss parvardigar ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Ek waqt tha jab sab dost yaar sham ki chai saath peeya karte the,
Chai ke saath dilchasp baatein bhi kiya karte the,
Hum saab rais hone ki tamanaein kiya karte the,
Alam ab yeh raha ke sab yahan Rahim ko chorr agey badte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Apni tanhai ko dekh aaj ghazlein likte jaa rahe hai,
Jo chorr gaye hume unpar ilzam lagate jaa rahe hai,
Duniya se mile ghumon se jane anjane toot'te jaa rahe hai,
Waqt ke iss tez raftar se hum apnon se pichadte jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Duniya main gul kar akhrat ko bhulte jaa rahe hai,
Hum hi apne aap ko badalte jaa rahe hai,
Khuda ki qayanat se khilwad karte jaa rahe hai,
Apni safed rooh par kalik pot'te jaa rahe hai,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

Koi hume chorre toh gawara nahin toh phir Khuda ko kyun chorrte jaa rahe hai?
Yeh saab dekh kar ek rote hue kalam se likta hai Rahim,
Shayad log badalte jaa rahe hai...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2009, 05:08:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Rahim..

Bahut Ache jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2009, 05:11:46 PM »
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Arey Khwahish jee apko bata nahin sakta kitni khushi hui apki tariff dekh kar...Sach bataun toh apka bahaut bahaut bada fan hoon...
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2009, 05:17:47 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob Rahim ji.....sachaai se ru-b-ru karwaaya hai aapne.....
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2009, 06:34:15 PM »
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bahut khoob rahim sahab
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2009, 11:10:20 PM »
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Wah wah Rahim ji kamaal ki creation aur sachaai bhi,bahut khoob.mindblowing.
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2009, 04:13:54 AM »
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Rahiiiiiiiiim Bhai.. Kya Baat hai Yaaaaaaar.. Bahut Bahut Hi Lajawab Rachna Pesh Ki Hai Yaaar.. Apni Soch Ko Aur apne Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Bayan Kiya Hai aapne.!! Mujhe Aapki Yeh Rachna Bahut Pasand aaye.. great One.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2009, 03:53:12 PM »
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Shukriya Nikhar jee, Kameeney jee, Madh jee aur Vikas bhaijan...
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