Log kahtey hain: duaaoun mein asar hotaa hai!

by abdbundeli on June 22, 2009, 01:03:35 PM
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Log kahtey hain: duaaoun mein asar hotaa hai:
Seepiyoun mein jo chamak jaaye wahee motee hai!
Duaa na hoti, hijra mein hi mar gaye hotey;
Duaa sey raat guzartee hai shafaq hotee hai!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2009, 01:11:27 PM »
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bahut achi baat kahi h aapne abd bhai.
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2009, 01:18:12 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 22, 2009, 01:11:27 PM
bahut achi baat kahi h aapne abd bhai.
Thanks a lot, poppoetry ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2009, 08:00:40 PM »
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very nice and beautiful creation,Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2009, 06:29:41 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 22, 2009, 08:00:40 PM
very nice and beautiful creation,Abd ji. Applause Applause Applause
Shukriyah, Madhu ji!
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«Reply #5 on: June 23, 2009, 06:30:18 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 22, 2009, 01:03:35 PM
Log kahtey hain: duaaoun mein asar hotaa hai:
Seepiyoun mein jo chamak jaaye wahee motee hai!
Duaa na hoti, hijra mein hi mar gaye hotey;
Duaa sey raat guzartee hai shafaq hotee hai!!

                        - abd bundeli


BAHUT KHOOB ABD JEEEE
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«Reply #6 on: June 23, 2009, 06:37:28 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 22, 2009, 01:03:35 PM
Log kahtey hain: duaaoun mein asar hotaa hai:
Seepiyoun mein jo chamak jaaye wahee motee hai!
Duaa na hoti, hijra mein hi mar gaye hotey;
Duaa sey raat guzartee hai shafaq hotee hai!!

                        - abd bundeli


Bahut accha aur sahi likha hai aapne Uncle ji.
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2009, 07:47:45 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on June 23, 2009, 06:30:18 AM
BAHUT KHOOB ABD JEEEE
Quote from: Roja on June 23, 2009, 06:37:28 AM
Bahut accha aur sahi likha hai aapne Uncle ji.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah pandit ji/ Roja ji!

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