log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb):Miscellaneous Shayri

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well i've tried to write something as a reply to the following post...

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/tu-kisi-aur-ki-jaagir-hai-aai-jaanegazal-t43620.0.html

it seemed kinda Qawaali... so tried to reply in the same way

n ... n i dont know... but... i applogize for posting this...

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Rasm-e-tehqeer-e-mohabbat bhe nibhaanay day inhen
Log toofaan uthaatay hain, uthaanay day inhen

Tu ne phir khaai hay thokar aye meri jaan sambhal
Raah-e-ulfat main mujhay chhore k rasta na badal
Tu ne ye kis tarha socha k meray “saath na chal”
Raah-e-ulfat main mujhay chhore k rasta na badal

Main Jahaangir ki looti huvi imlaak nahi
Mujh ko jaageer samajhnay ka bhala haq hay kisay?
Meray paaon main ye paazeb, salaasil tu nahi
Paa-ba-zanjeer samajhnay ka bhala haq hay kisay?

Haan agar haq hay meri jaan tu faqat ake tujhay
Tu jo chaahay tu zamaanay k naam kar day mujhay
Tu meray hoshe k gardon pay damakta hay abhi
Meri chaahat ka chaman, tujh say mehekta hay abhi

Ye such hay k tu meray pyaar ka haqdaar nahi
Magar ye chaahaten tu jism ka byopaat nahi
Meray ehsaas main tu hay meri baanhon pay na jaa
Tu meri jaan hay honton kay kinaaron pay na ja

Meray ehsaas ki duniya main meray paas hay tu
Meray khaabon k jazeeron ko faqat raas hay tu
Haq nahi meri he khushbu-e-badan par mera
Meri taqdeer say hat kar hay muqaddar teraa?

Tu jahaan jaayay ga main saath teray aaun gi
Main tu wo hoon k khuda say bhe takar jaaun gi
Loug pathar say daraatay hain unhen khabar nahi
Main tu pathar k bhe seenay main utar jaaun gi

Meri maasoom tammana ka tamaskhar na uraa
Mujh ko logon ki nigaahon main tamaasha na bana
Main teri hoon tu teri ho k dikhaaoon gi tujhay
Main kisi aur janam main sahi, paaon gi tujhay

Tu ne phir khaai hay thokar aye meri jaan sambhal
Raah-e-ulfat main mujhay chhore k rasta na badal
Tu ne ye kis tarha socha k meray “saath na chal”
Raah-e-ulfat main mujhay chhore k rasta na badal

Raah dushwaar hay? kaantay bhe bichhanay day inhen
Log toofaan uthaatay hain, uthaanay day inhen

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ParwaaZ

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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2011, 01:38:41 PM »

VB jee Aadaab!

Waah janab bahut khoob kalaam pesh ki hai aapne..
Puri kalaam behad achchi rahi aur achche rythem meiN
rahi....

Sabhi stanza bahut khub rahe, Humari daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye....

Likhate rahiye..... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez

Mujhe rangeen khawaab na dikha Aey meri jane gazal
MaiN khayaloN meiN kahiN door jau.n naa nikal.........!!!!!!!!

Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... Aye meri Jaan e Gazal..... !!!!


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Kohinoor

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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2011, 01:51:34 PM »

Bahut acchi peshkash hai VB ji...bahut accha lga. (V-very..B-briliant,,aapke name ka full form..meri klam se)


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2011, 05:57:47 AM »

ParwaaZ jee! adab-bil-jawab

buhat shukriya parhnay ka pasand karnay ka aur taareefi kalemaat chhornay ka...


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2011, 05:59:38 AM »

Kohinoor jee! buhat shukriya parnay aur pasand karnay ka... taareefi kalemaat chhornay par bhe thankful hain hum aap k...

VB ka kya kya nahi banta... aap ka bhe jo jee chaahay bana lejay.. :]


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 11:06:12 AM »

kya khoob kaha hai VB ji..... isko kis tune me gungunaya jaye.... maine try kikiya par meri to waise hi rhym badi buri hai sur taal ki samjh k bhar.... masta hailekin iski feel aur aapki bayangi.... zabardasttt


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 11:28:30 AM »

shukriya comments ka...
gungunaanay ki zaroorat he kya hay? wesay qawali style men hay... aur tune wohi hay... jis k jawab men likhi gai hay...


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2012, 11:43:28 AM »

areeeeee zarurat kaise nahin hai..... maza to tab hi hai na jab puri tarah mehsus karke gaaya jaye kisi gazal ..kavita ya fir qawwali ko


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2012, 06:09:45 AM »

Main ne ye geet jo likha tha kisi ki khaatir
meray ehsaas ne dhokaa sa diya tha mujh ko


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Re: log toofan uthaatay hain... (by vb)

«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2012, 06:53:30 AM »

ehsaason ka kaam hai dil ko zinda rakhna
haan tere dil ne dhoka diya tha tujhko


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