Loktantr mein yeh kamaal dekh....soudagar

by soudagar on June 06, 2013, 04:20:38 PM
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desh ka bura haal dekh darr sa lagta hai
badli hui sabki chal dekh darr sa lagta hai

nari uthan ki batein to hoti hai har roj par
sach mein nari ka haal dekh darr sa lagta hai

paisa kha gaya samaj ki iman aur ijjat ko
insan apno ka bna dalal dekh dar sa lagta hai

muh pe Ram ka naam bagal mein rakhi chhuri
sabhi ka yeh khayal dekh darr sa lagtaa hai

har taraf failaa rakha hai darindgi ka manjar
insan odhe bhediye ki khal dekh dar sa lagta hai

koi nahi hai inhe rokne wala koi nahi hai tokne wala
hota loktantr mein yeh kamal dekh darr sa lagta hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2013, 04:38:07 PM »
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Nice.
Bde Dino Baad Kisi Ko Desh Ke Bare Me BaateiN Karte Dekha Hai...!
Warna Yahhan To Har Shaqs Ko Ishq Ke Piche Bhagte Dekha Hai...!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2013, 04:52:01 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2013, 05:49:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2013, 06:10:15 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2013, 04:20:38 PM
desh ka bura haal dekh darr sa lagta hai
badli hui sabki chal dekh darr sa lagta hai

nari uthan ki batein to hoti hai har roj par
sach mein nari ka haal dekh darr sa lagta hai

paisa kha gaya samaj ki iman aur ijjat ko
insan apno ka bna dalal dekh dar sa lagta hai

muh pe Ram ka naam bagal mein rakhi chhuri
sabhi ka yeh khayal dekh darr sa lagtaa hai

har taraf failaa rakha hai darindgi ka manjar
insan odhe bhediye ki khal dekh dar sa lagta hai

koi nahi hai inhe rokne wala koi nahi hai tokne wala
hota loktantr mein yeh kamal dekh darr sa lagta hai


Bahut Bahut Khooob Karan ji...

Khoobsurat Peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2013, 08:17:15 PM »
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bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2013, 10:49:57 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 06, 2013, 04:20:38 PM
desh ka bura haal dekh darr sa lagta hai
badli hui sabki chal dekh darr sa lagta hai

nari uthan ki batein to hoti hain har roz par
sach mein nari ka haal dekh darr sa lagta hai

paisa kha gaya samaj ki iman aur izzat ko
insan apno ka bna dalal dekh dar sa lagta hai

muh pe Ram ka naam bagal mein rakhi chhuri
sabhi ka yeh khayal dekh darr sa lagtaa hai

har taraf phailaa rakha hai darindgi ka manzar
insan odhe bhediye ki khal dekh dar sa lagta hai

koi nahi hai inhe rokne wala koi nahi hai tokne wala
hota loktantr mein yeh kamal dekh darr sa lagta hai

nice,sir one request that since you are one of the big poets of YOINDIA so take care of your spellings------thank you
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2013, 11:53:49 PM »
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waah waah Saudagar jee, kaafi achhe khyalaat zaahir kiye haiN aapne, bahut bahut khoob, meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2013, 01:20:43 AM »
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Khoobsurat Peshkash Saudagar Ji


Shad o Aaabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2013, 02:15:34 AM »
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shukriya ravinder ravi ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2013, 02:42:30 AM »
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nice 1!
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2013, 04:42:47 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 07, 2013, 02:15:34 AM
shukriya ravinder ravi ji
Ur Welcome!!Sir.
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2013, 11:30:39 AM »
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 Applause bahut khoob, soudagar ji.
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2013, 03:11:48 PM »
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waah bahut khoob soudagar ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2013, 02:48:08 PM »
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