Maa ki khokh se......

by manjum on January 24, 2011, 04:52:02 AM
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Dosto aaj rashtriya balika divas hai is uplaksh par aap logon ki nazar ek chhoti kavita hai.... pasand aaye daad zarur dijiega.....

Maa,
main mahsus kar rahi hun
tumhara dard
tumhara dar,
tumne saha jo zindgi main
akele, chup rah kar
munh si kar,
wah sab na dohraya jaye
mere sath bhi
islie tum darti ho
ghut ghut kar jiti ho
chupchap marti ho....

par maa,
ab main aa rahi hun
jaldi hi tumhare pas
tumhari baanhon main.
tumhari god main.
ab main tumhe,
akele na sahne dungi.
aansuno ki nadi main
aur na bahnr dungi.
yah sab na hone dungi dobara
main banugi tumhara sahara
tumhari andheri duniyan
main karungi roshan
mahka dungi
tumhara ghar aangan.

ham milkar badlenge duniyan.
Maa!!
bas ek baar
mujhe aane do
is duniyan main
Maa!!
bas ek baar
mujhe aane do..........

manjum "mann"

mera sath dijie  
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2011, 05:02:47 AM »
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Maa ke dwand ko shakti pradaan karti ... manjum ji ! aapki yeh kavita mujhe behad pasand aai ... aaj ke marm ko ji tarha ujagar kiya hai .. woh padhte hi bantaa hai ...

bahut khoob ...dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Applause Applause

aise hi umdaa kalamm ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen ... khush rahe ... !

duaaon ke saath .... !
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2011, 05:06:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji...yun hi daad dete rahae... kyon ki daad aur duayon se achha likhne ka hosla milta hai...

shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2011, 05:44:49 AM »
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mai ab kya kahun iss kavita par.
bas Maa ki beawaaz dard ko ujagar kiya tumne.
ek bachhi jise janam lena hai duniya me uski apni Maa ko iss prakar sahara aur bharosa dene ke shabd wakai lajawaab hai.
aapko aur sabhi Balikaon ko meri Hardil subhkamnaye
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 05:53:45 AM »
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bahoot marmik hai aapki rachna...bahoot hi behtreen manjum ji......dil se badhai  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2011, 06:07:07 AM »
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Wah wah Manjum jee aapki is kavita ko Ghayel ka Koti Koti pranaam..........aapki yeh peshkash Poetry of the Month hai..................main chahuga aapko is peshkash ke liye "ADMIN aur MONITORS" ki taraf se special awards diya jaye.

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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 11:41:24 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji......

aap is abhiyan main sath den hamari ye parthana hai aapse....
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 11:43:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya bakararji....

yun hi sath rahen daad dete rahen...

balikao ko aage lane ke lie sahyog karen..
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 11:46:19 AM »
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bahut bahut ghayalji....

nahin koi award mile ya na mile kya fark padta hai par meri is koshish main aap sab ke sath ki bahut zarurart hai sath rahen

aap logon ne meri kavita ko pasand kiya yahi bahut bada award hai.. sarh rahen duae dete rahen.....
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 12:00:08 PM »
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hum to saath hai ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2011, 12:06:29 PM »
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thanks niralaji.... yun sath hi rahiyega...
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2011, 12:15:00 PM »
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wo to hain hi
aap aise achhe achhe likhte rho
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«Reply #12 on: January 24, 2011, 12:17:49 PM »
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badhai sundar rachna ke liye ..jai shree krishna
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2011, 12:24:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya krishnaji...

yun hi daad dete rahen...
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 06:22:27 PM »
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Nice Work Manjum Ji
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