Maa mujhe koi Lori suna do!

by deepika_divya on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
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Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do
Apni mamta ka kuch hissa
Mujhpe ak baar fir barsaa do

Thak chuki hun mein
iss Zindagi ki daud mein
Apne komal komal haatho ko
Maa mere sar per fira do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa...
Mujhe koi lori suna do

Zindgai se kuch nahi chaiye mujhe
Na kabhi mein isse samaj paai hun
Bhul jaun har pareshani mein,
Maa mujhe apne Anchal mein chupa do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa..
Mujhe koi lori suna do...
mujhe koi lori suna do....

~~DiVyA~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2009, 06:07:59 AM »
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Very very nice sophi sis Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2009, 06:09:57 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do
Apni mamta ka kuch hissa
Mujhpe ak baar fir barsaa do

Thak chuki hun mein
iss Zindagi ki daud mein
Apne komal komal haatho ko
Maa mere sar per fira do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa...
Mujhe koi lori suna do

Zindgai se kuch nahi chaiye mujhe
Na kabhi mein isse samaj paai hun
Bhul jaun har pareshani mein,
Maa mujhe apne Anchal mein chupa do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa..
Mujhe koi lori suna do...
mujhe koi lori suna do....

~~DiVyA~~

gud one sophiee.....
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2009, 06:10:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..Kin Jazbaaton Mein Aakar Aapne Yeh Kavita Likhi,Pata nahi Par Dil ko Chuti Hai..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2009, 06:14:25 AM »
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Thanks u Salma , Pandit ji  & khwaish ji.

Bas kal yuhin gir gai thi pareshanni mein
aane wale kal ka dar sata raha tha
chahati thi koi mujhe samale
isse aabaas mein yea dil keh raha tha

ki mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai
Maa koi lori suna do......
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2009, 06:16:21 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 06:14:25 AM
Thanks u Salma , Pandit ji  & khwaish ji.

Bas kal yuhin gir gai thi pareshanni mein
aane wale kal ka dar sata raha tha
chahati thi koi mujhe samale
isse aabaas mein yea dil keh raha tha

ki mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai
Maa koi lori suna do......

Again Nice lines sophie jeee...
wow
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2009, 06:22:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause bahoot sunder rachna hai sophi aankhe nam hon aai...koi chahe kitna hi bada ho jaaye dard hone par maa ki god hi yaad aati hai

ek choti si koshish meri bhi aap jitna sunder to nahi likh paaya par maa ke liye aapko padhne ke baad jo bhav man me aaye wo kuch aise hi the jinhe shabdon me dhalne ki koshish kar raha hun..


chand choone ki zid meri aur,
thali se mujhe bahlana tera,
aaj fir namumkin ko pane ki,
khwahish kar baitha,
aa jao mujhe bahla do,


Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,

har baar gira, roya, machla,
har baar tune sambhal liya,
tere aanchal ne mere har bah-te,
aansoo ko sambhal liya,

fir aaj gira hun raahon par,
maa haath mujhe thama do,

Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2009, 06:25:11 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on March 02, 2009, 06:16:21 AM
Again Nice lines sophie jeee...
wow

Thanks pandit ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2009, 06:27:10 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 02, 2009, 06:22:53 AM
Applause Applause bahoot sunder rachna hai sophi aankhe nam hon aai...koi chahe kitna hi bada ho jaaye dard hone par maa ki god hi yaad aati hai

ek choti si koshish meri bhi aap jitna sunder to nahi likh paaya par maa ke liye aapko padhne ke baad jo bhav man me aaye wo kuch aise hi the jinhe shabdon me dhalne ki koshish kar raha hun..


chand choone ki zid meri aur,
thali se mujhe bahlana tera,
aaj fir namumkin ko pane ki,
khwahish kar baitha,
aa jao mujhe bahla do,


Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,

har baar gira, roya, machla,
har baar tune sambhal liya,
tere aanchal ne mere har bah-te,
aansoo ko sambhal liya,

fir aaj gira hun raahon par,
maa haath mujhe thama do,

Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,





Bhaoot bahoot shukriya.. tareef k liye..

Bekarar ji bahoot khoob likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2009, 06:54:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do
Apni mamta ka kuch hissa
Mujhpe ak baar fir barsaa do

Thak chuki hun mein
iss Zindagi ki daud mein
Apne komal komal haatho ko
Maa mere sar per fira do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa...
Mujhe koi lori suna do

Zindgai se kuch nahi chaiye mujhe
Na kabhi mein isse samaj paai hun
Bhul jaun har pareshani mein,
Maa mujhe apne Anchal mein chupa do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa..
Mujhe koi lori suna do...
mujhe koi lori suna do....

~~DiVyA~~

wah sophi, bahut hi khoob .. wah



JINDAGI KI DHOOP MEH JAL RAHA HU
APNEY AACHAL KI KOMAL CHAYA KAR DOH
NAHI SAAMNA KAR PA RAHA HU ISS DUNIYA SEY
APNI MAMTA KI FIR SEY BARISH KAR DOH
MUJHEY NEEND NAHI AA RAHI HAI MAA
MUJHEY KOI LORI SUNA DOH




JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2009, 06:55:38 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 02, 2009, 06:22:53 AM
Applause Applause bahoot sunder rachna hai sophi aankhe nam hon aai...koi chahe kitna hi bada ho jaaye dard hone par maa ki god hi yaad aati hai

ek choti si koshish meri bhi aap jitna sunder to nahi likh paaya par maa ke liye aapko padhne ke baad jo bhav man me aaye wo kuch aise hi the jinhe shabdon me dhalne ki koshish kar raha hun..


chand choone ki zid meri aur,
thali se mujhe bahlana tera,
aaj fir namumkin ko pane ki,
khwahish kar baitha,
aa jao mujhe bahla do,


Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,

har baar gira, roya, machla,
har baar tune sambhal liya,
tere aanchal ne mere har bah-te,
aansoo ko sambhal liya,

fir aaj gira hun raahon par,
maa haath mujhe thama do,

Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,





WAH BEKARAAR, BAHUT KHOOB

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2009, 07:04:34 AM »
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Thank u so much jasbir ji.. Nice one by u too..
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2009, 07:05:51 AM »
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Sophi Dear & Bekarar Brother,

 Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Aap dono ne hi bahut aacha likha hai, bahut pyara...

Ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Bachpan me tu sulaya karti thi Maa,
To mein sapno ki duniyaa me kho jaata tha,
Aaj tu phir se mujhe sula de meri Maa,
Warna mein inn mushqil raahoo me kho jaounga,


Bachpan me tu khilaya karti thi Maa,
to mein pait bhar ke khaa jaata tha,
Aaj to phir se mujhe khila meri Maa,
Warna mein phir bhooke pait so jaunga,


Bachpan me tu hasaya karti thi Maa,
To mein dil kar muskurye jaata tha,
Aaj to phir se mujhe hassa Meri Maa,
Warna mein aansoo ke sailaabme doob jaounga...

Shally.
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2009, 07:06:35 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 07:04:34 AM
Thank u so much jasbir ji.. Nice one by u too..

thanks sophi

jasbir singh
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2009, 07:14:14 AM »
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Sanjeev Bro,Aapne bhi Dil Ko Chunne Wali Baatein Khai Hia..Bahut Bahut Koob Bhai.. Applause Applause Applause

Wah Wah Bahut Bhaut khoob Shally, Jasbir Paaji..Sab ne Khoob Likha.. Applause Applause

Kuch Main Bhi Koshish karta hoon..aur phir se Thanks Sophi,aapne itne ache Khayaalat Pesh kiye hai.. Applause Applause

Maa Main Jab bhi Girta Tha,
Aap Mujhe sambhaal liya Karte ho,
Chot Pahunchne Par Zakhmo Par Dawaa Laga liya karte ho,
Aaj bhi gira hoon,par Zakhm ab Dikhte Nahi,
Rota Bahut Hoon Par Inn Aansuo Ki Kadar,
Koi Yahan Par Karte Nahi

Maa Mujhe Apne Aanchal Mein Panaah Do,
Mujhe Apni God Mein Sula Do....

Duniyadaari Mere Bas Ki Nahi,
Meri Zimmedariyan Mujhe Daraati hai,
Zindagi Ko Mushkilo Mein Jeena Ek Kadwa Sach Hai,
Yeh Sachi Baatien Hai Aur
Yeh Sachai Meri Aankhon ko Aur rulaati hai..

Maa Mujhe ek baar Hassa Do,
Mujhe apni god mein sula Do...

Maa Sirf Teri Ek Nazar Hi Mujh Par Ho,
To Mujhe Jeene Ka Hausla Deti Hai,
Mujhe Zindagi Mein Chalte rehne ki Nayi Raah Deti hai,

Meri Har Dard,Dukh,Takleef Ko Apne Duaon Ke Sadke Mita Do,
Maa, Mujhe Apni God Mein Sula Do....
     
         ~~~~~ Khwaish~~~~~
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