Maa mujhe koi Lori suna do!

by deepika_divya on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
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«Reply #30 on: March 02, 2009, 11:33:04 AM »
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Thank You so so much Rajesh ji, Kaash & janasheen ..

& Thanks a lot to All the people who made it more Beautiful icon_flower
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«Reply #31 on: March 02, 2009, 01:37:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do
Apni mamta ka kuch hissa
Mujhpe ak baar fir barsaa do

Thak chuki hun mein
iss Zindagi ki daud mein
Apne komal komal haatho ko
Maa mere sar per fira do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa...
Mujhe koi lori suna do

Zindgai se kuch nahi chaiye mujhe
Na kabhi mein isse samaj paai hun
Bhul jaun har pareshani mein,
Maa mujhe apne Anchal mein chupa do

Mujhe need nahi aa rahi hai Maa..
Mujhe koi lori suna do...
mujhe koi lori suna do....

~~DiVyA~~

Bahut accha likha hai Sophi aapne... This poem really touched my soul.
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«Reply #32 on: March 02, 2009, 01:39:41 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 02, 2009, 06:22:53 AM
Applause Applause bahoot sunder rachna hai sophi aankhe nam hon aai...koi chahe kitna hi bada ho jaaye dard hone par maa ki god hi yaad aati hai

ek choti si koshish meri bhi aap jitna sunder to nahi likh paaya par maa ke liye aapko padhne ke baad jo bhav man me aaye wo kuch aise hi the jinhe shabdon me dhalne ki koshish kar raha hun..


chand choone ki zid meri aur,
thali se mujhe bahlana tera,
aaj fir namumkin ko pane ki,
khwahish kar baitha,
aa jao mujhe bahla do,


Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,

har baar gira, roya, machla,
har baar tune sambhal liya,
tere aanchal ne mere har bah-te,
aansoo ko sambhal liya,

fir aaj gira hun raahon par,
maa haath mujhe thama do,

Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai
Maa Mujhe koi lori suna do,


Bahut acche Bekarar ji
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«Reply #33 on: March 02, 2009, 01:48:37 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 02, 2009, 07:05:51 AM
Sophi Dear & Bekarar Brother,

 Applause  Applause  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Aap dono ne hi bahut aacha likha hai, bahut pyara...

Ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Bachpan me tu sulaya karti thi Maa,
To mein sapno ki duniyaa me kho jaata tha,
Aaj tu phir se mujhe sula de meri Maa,
Warna mein inn mushqil raahoo me kho jaounga,


Bachpan me tu khilaya karti thi Maa,
to mein pait bhar ke khaa jaata tha,
Aaj to phir se mujhe khila meri Maa,
Warna mein phir bhooke pait so jaunga,


Bachpan me tu hasaya karti thi Maa,
To mein dil kar muskurye jaata tha,
Aaj to phir se mujhe hassa Meri Maa,
Warna mein aansoo ke sailaabme doob jaounga...

Shally.


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«Reply #34 on: March 02, 2009, 02:53:25 PM »
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sophi,
jas bhai,
jaanasheen bro,
khwaish bro
shally
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sabhi ko shukriya ki aapne ise pasand kiya baaton hi baaton me is thread ka teesare panne par pahunch jana is baat ka saboot hai ki aaj bhi maa shabd par koi bhi kavita poori nahi ho saki hai na kabhi ho sakegi.......sabhi logon ka aabhar
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«Reply #35 on: March 02, 2009, 05:01:10 PM »
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great effort by all. wonderful thoughts.
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«Reply #36 on: March 02, 2009, 06:19:50 PM »
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MERI GALTIYA SIRF AAP NEY CHUPAYI
HAR DHOOP MEH DI AAP NEY PARCHAYI
KYA KYA KAHU AAP KEY LIYE MAIN MAA
MERI JINDAGI HAI SIRF AAP KI KARZDAYI



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #37 on: March 03, 2009, 03:59:37 AM »
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Thanks Roja & prateek ji..

Again Nice ne jas ji
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«Reply #38 on: March 04, 2009, 05:55:55 PM »
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Shally,Sophi,Azeem Bro,Sanjeev Bro,Prateekji..Aap Sab Ne Meri Koshish Ko Saraha..Aap Sab ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. icon_salut

Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2009, 11:33:04 AM


& Thanks a lot to All the people who made it more Beautiful icon_flower

Thanks To You Sophi..You Wrote A Beautiful & a meaningful Poetry and we all followed you..Thanks.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: March 07, 2009, 08:49:09 AM »
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MY pleasure Khwaish JI
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«Reply #40 on: March 07, 2009, 08:53:47 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 02, 2009, 01:48:37 PM
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Shukriya Roza didi,

Shally.
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«Reply #41 on: March 07, 2009, 08:54:33 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on March 02, 2009, 02:53:25 PM
sophi,
jas bhai,
jaanasheen bro,
khwaish bro
shally
roja
sabhi ko shukriya ki aapne ise pasand kiya baaton hi baaton me is thread ka teesare panne par pahunch jana is baat ka saboot hai ki aaj bhi maa shabd par koi bhi kavita poori nahi ho saki hai na kabhi ho sakegi.......sabhi logon ka aabhar
sanjeev



Shukriya Sanjeev brother,

Shally.
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«Reply #42 on: March 07, 2009, 08:56:05 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2009, 05:55:55 PM
Shally,Sophi,Azeem Bro,Sanjeev Bro,Prateekji..Aap Sab Ne Meri Koshish Ko Saraha..Aap Sab ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. icon_salut

Thanks To You Sophi..You Wrote A Beautiful & a meaningful Poetry and we all followed you..Thanks.. Usual Smile

Shukriya Khwaish Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #43 on: March 21, 2009, 02:45:42 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 03, 2009, 03:59:37 AM
Thanks Roja & prateek ji..

Again Nice ne jas ji

THANKS SOPHI

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #44 on: March 23, 2009, 07:29:23 AM »
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Very nicely written by all the preceding writers,

Here's something from my side:

Maa ke liye karna koi rachna hai mushqil,
Uski bepanaah muhabbat se bachna hai mushqil,
Bach jaoge saare jahaan ko fareb dekar,
Par maa ki nazron se bachna hai mushqil !

- Sanjay karndhar
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