Maa mujhe koi Lori suna do!

by deepika_divya on March 02, 2009, 05:47:28 AM
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«Reply #45 on: March 23, 2009, 07:45:56 AM »
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Thank You Sanjay ji!

Nice one by U!
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«Reply #46 on: March 23, 2009, 07:47:38 AM »
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Quote from: karndhar on March 23, 2009, 07:29:23 AM
Very nicely written by all the preceding writers,

Here's something from my side:

Maa ke liye karna koi rachna hai mushqil,
Uski bepanaah muhabbat se bachna hai mushqil,
Bach jaoge saare jahaan ko fareb dekar,
Par maa ki nazron se bachna hai mushqil !

- Sanjay karndhar

Thanx Karan Ji,

& U also writte very good.

Maa tujhse jo ho jao ek pal ke liye bhi door,
To mera dil ghabra sa jaata hai,
Ek saya meri mushqiloon ka tere na hone par mujhpe
chaa sa jaata hai,

Tere wajood ke aage hasti iss duniya ki kuch nahi,
Tere naam me hi maa sara sansaar sama jaata hai,
Maa wo mera raat-raat bhar rona aur tera jagte rehna
aaj mujhe bahut hi yaad aata hai...

Shally.
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karndhar
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«Reply #47 on: March 23, 2009, 07:55:01 AM »
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Thanks Sophi ji and Shael Ji
-Sanjay Karndhar
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #48 on: March 23, 2009, 08:06:53 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 23, 2009, 07:47:38 AM

Maa tujhse jo ho jao ek pal ke liye bhi door,
To mera dil ghabra sa jaata hai,
Ek saya meri mushqiloon ka tere na hone par mujhpe
chaa sa jaata hai,

Tere wajood ke aage hasti iss duniya ki kuch nahi,
Tere naam me hi maa sara sansaar sama jaata hai,
Maa wo mera raat-raat bhar rona aur tera jagte rehna
aaj mujhe bahut hi yaad aata hai...

Shally.


Wow ! once again Very Nice Shally
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #49 on: March 23, 2009, 10:46:12 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 23, 2009, 07:47:38 AM
Thanx Karan Ji,

& U also writte very good.

Maa tujhse jo ho jao ek pal ke liye bhi door,
To mera dil ghabra sa jaata hai,
Ek saya meri mushqiloon ka tere na hone par mujhpe
chaa sa jaata hai,

Tere wajood ke aage hasti iss duniya ki kuch nahi,
Tere naam me hi maa sara sansaar sama jaata hai,
Maa wo mera raat-raat bhar rona aur tera jagte rehna
aaj mujhe bahut hi yaad aata hai...

Shally.


wah Shally, bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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k.shael
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«Reply #50 on: March 23, 2009, 11:12:55 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 23, 2009, 08:06:53 AM
Wow ! once again Very Nice Shally

Shukriya Sophi Dear,

Aap bhi agar kuch likhti to aacha lagta,

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #51 on: March 23, 2009, 11:13:45 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 23, 2009, 10:46:12 AM
wah Shally, bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh

Shukriya Jas Ji,

Aap bhi agar saath kuch likhte to aacha lagta,

Shally.
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«Reply #52 on: March 23, 2009, 11:26:57 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 23, 2009, 11:12:55 AM
Shukriya Sophi Dear,

Aap bhi agar kuch likhti to aacha lagta,

Shally.

Chand lamha hai zindagi ka bacha
maa mujhe sirf tera saath chaiye
Ruk nahi rahe hai mere ansu
maa mujhe sirf tera ashirwad chaiye

kar do maa Kuch aisa karishma
Marham ban jaaye har dard mera
haaru na kabhi mazil ki talaash mein
har manzil dena saath tum mera
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«Reply #53 on: March 23, 2009, 11:30:41 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 23, 2009, 11:26:57 AM
Chand lamha hai zindagi ka bacha
maa mujhe sirf tera saath chaiye
Ruk nahi rahe hai mere ansu
maa mujhe sirf tera ashirwad chaiye

kar do maa Kuch aisa karishma
Marham ban jaaye har dard mera
haaru na kabhi mazil ki talaash mein
har manzil dena saath tum mera




WAH SOPHI
BAHUT KHOOB, WAH


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #54 on: March 23, 2009, 11:31:47 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 23, 2009, 11:26:57 AM
Chand lamha hai zindagi ka bacha
maa mujhe sirf tera saath chaiye
Ruk nahi rahe hai mere ansu
maa mujhe sirf tera ashirwad chaiye

kar do maa Kuch aisa karishma
Marham ban jaaye har dard mera
haaru na kabhi mazil ki talaash mein
har manzil dena saath tum mera




Bahut Khoob Sophi dear,

Maa saari duniyaa ka gham jab iss dil me bhar jaata hai,
To aake teri gaud me sir rakh deti hoon,
Mujhe lagta hai wo bojh mera kahiin udd jaata hai,
Jab tujhse do baatein dil ki kar leti hoon,

Har insaan aaj ke waqt me mujh garib ko chidata hai,
Teri haath ki roti kha ke khud ko aamir kehti hoon,
Wo rehte honge aalishaan mehloon me bhi pareshaan,
Aur mein teri chaaw me bhi khush rehti hoon...

Shally.
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«Reply #55 on: March 23, 2009, 11:44:54 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 23, 2009, 11:31:47 AM
Bahut Khoob Sophi dear,

Maa saari duniyaa ka gham jab iss dil me bhar jaata hai,
To aake teri gaud me sir rakh deti hoon,
Mujhe lagta hai wo bojh mera kahiin udd jaata hai,
Jab tujhse do baatein dil ki kar leti hoon,

Har insaan aaj ke waqt me mujh garib ko chidata hai,
Teri haath ki roti kha ke khud ko aamir kehti hoon,
Wo rehte honge aalishaan mehloon me bhi pareshaan,
Aur mein teri chaaw me bhi khush rehti hoon...

Shally.


wah bahut khoob Shally

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #56 on: March 23, 2009, 11:46:02 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 23, 2009, 11:44:54 AM
wah bahut khoob Shally

Jasbir Singh

Shukriya Jas Ji,

Jas ji aap bhi kuch likhiye,

Shally.
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«Reply #57 on: March 23, 2009, 11:54:34 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on March 23, 2009, 11:46:02 AM
Shukriya Jas Ji,

Jas ji aap bhi kuch likhiye,

Shally.



RAB KI MARJI SEY MAIN YAHA CHALA AAYA HU
MAA KI GAOD MEH MAIN PAL PAYA HU
MUSHKILEY SAB ASAAN HO JATI HAI
MAA KEY ASHIRWAAD SEY YEH DIN DEKH PAYA HU


JASBIR SINGH
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #58 on: March 23, 2009, 11:56:22 AM »
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Thanks Shally Again very nice lines

& gud one by u too jasbir Ji
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«Reply #59 on: March 23, 2009, 11:57:46 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 23, 2009, 11:56:22 AM
Thanks Shally Again very nice lines

& gud one by u too jasbir Ji

THANKS SOPHI

JASBIR SINGH
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