***MAA TU BATA KYU TU HAMSE ITNI NAARAJ HAI***

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Maa tujh bin kuch acha nahi lagta
Tere baton k siwa kuch bhi sacha nahi lagta
Bhai bhi rehta udaas hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Papa bhi gumsum se rehte hain
Sab ghar mei khoye khoye se rehte hain
Bas ek tujhse milne ki aas hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Tu gar rahi hamse khafa
To ham bhi zindgi se kar lenge zafaa
Kya tujhko nahi aata hampar taras hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Jab tak na sun le ham teri aawaj
Na jaane kyu kuch bhi nahi aata hai raas
Chutki bhi tujhi se karti pyaar hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Tu gayi hai jabse chod kar hamei yaha
Waqt le raha hai sekdon imthaan
Ab aur dard hota na bardaash hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Laut aa maa tu ham na phir tujhe satayenge
Jo tu kahegi use haskar maan jaayenge
Tu aaja ek baar bas yahi fariyaad hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2008, 09:20:39 AM »
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aahista se aapne maa ke na hone ke dard ko shabdon ka jama pahnaya hai....aur jo bhi likha hai sab dard me doobne sa laga hai....
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2008, 09:26:56 AM »
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bekarar ji maa ko yaad kar bas jo shabd dil se nikalte gaye ham wo likhte gaye
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2008, 10:21:45 AM »
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Maa tujh bin kuch acha nahi lagta
Tere baton k siwa kuch bhi sacha nahi lagta
Bhai bhi rehta udaas hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Papa bhi gumsum se rehte hain
Sab ghar mei khoye khoye se rehte hain
Bas ek tujhse milne ki aas hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Tu gar rahi hamse khafa
To ham bhi zindgi se kar lenge zafaa
Kya tujhko nahi aata hampar taras hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Jab tak na sun le ham teri aawaj
Na jaane kyu kuch bhi nahi aata hai raas
Chutki bhi tujhi se karti pyaar hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Tu gayi hai jabse chod kar hamei yaha
Waqt le raha hai sekdon imthaan
Ab aur dard hota na bardaash hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai

Laut aa maa tu ham na phir tujhe satayenge
Jo tu kahegi use haskar maan jaayenge
Tu aaja ek baar bas yahi fariyaad hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai
Maa tu bata kyu tu hamse itni naaraj hai




Baar baar likha, aur phir baar baar mitaaya...
"Maa.." ke siwa koi lafz naa hothon par aaya,
Main lauti ek baar phir bheegi palkein le kar,
Bahut tanha khud ko, Maa.. tum bin maine paaya...



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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2008, 11:09:02 AM »
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maahiya ji bohut bohut shukriya
aapke alfaaz dil ki gehraiyo ko choo gaye
thnk u so much to written these wonderful line on my post
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2008, 11:20:41 AM »
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"Maa" ..... Isko padhe ke baad mere paas aankhon main aansuon ke siwa kuch bhi nahin hai...Bhawna...Mahiya...."Maa" ki kami ke aapke is ehsaas ko main apne dil main utarta dekh rahi hoon......aaj mere paas kehne ko kuch nahin hai.
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2008, 03:25:59 AM »
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KYA YAAR SUBAH SUBAH RULA DIYA
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 06:09:42 AM »
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shukriya celmira ji shukriya saajid ji
par hamara irada aapko rulane ka na tha
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2008, 07:25:13 PM »
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Yeh hai sachcha dard Maan ke liye,
Maan ki mamta uski santaan ke liye suraksha kabaj hoti hai, jab woh yeh duniya chhod deti to woh kabaj toot jata hai.
Ham na rok paye aansu apne.
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 07:27:35 PM »
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Good work Bhawna and Mahiya!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 08:02:42 PM »
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bhaawna ji aur maahiya ji,

aapki peera ko dilaasa to nahi de sakte mere shabd pur fir bhee.....

na laana aankhon mein fir aansu
na kabhi adhron pe koi baan
''maa''-jiski mamta devta bhee tarse
kar gayi he ''amaratav'' ke maarg par prayaan.

jeevan-maran ka chakra chor kar saara
''maa'' bani hogi aasaman ka taara
roshan kiya karti thee pehle aapki bagiya
ub roshni paata he jahaan saara.

unkey bataaye-dikhlaaye puth pur chalna
thokar lage-to unhe yaad kar sambhalna
unki sehanshakti aur un ki samta mein dhalna
ukni baat jub karo-to muskura ke karna.

Prateek

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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2008, 08:30:11 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji, bahoot sahi likhna hai apne!! Good creation!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 10:57:07 AM »
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apne sundar alfaazon ko hamari post par likhne k liye bohut bohut shukriya prateek ji
shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 11:03:39 AM »
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Bhawna dear buhat khoob likha hai very nice lines... Clapping Smiley

Prateek ji buhat acha likha hai aapne .... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2008, 11:09:36 AM »
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thnk u honeyrose ji
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