maa udaas nazar aati hai,,,jeet jainam saini

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mere jism  se  yuh jaa,n  nikal-nikal  see  jati  hai,
jab bhee  meri  maa   mujhe   udas  nazar  aati hai,

uskee godh main  seer rakh jab bhee soya hoo,n,
akser chain o sukoon kee neend aankhon aati hai,

khilaya jab  bhee niwala  meree maa  ne mujh ko,
har niwale main uske pyaar kee mithaas aati hai,

maa ke kadmo,n kee dhool jab bhee maathe lagaee,
tab ye   duniya  mujhe  junnat see  nazar aati hai,

jab se aa   gaya  hoo,n  main  dayaar e ghair main,
tabse  yaad    meri maa kee  aankho  chali aati hai,

kar na bethoo,n galti koi bhee anjane  main kabhee,
uske sanskaar giyaan kee  baate mun main  aati hai,
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2015, 05:47:48 AM »
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ye  jism  se  jaa,n  nikal-nikal  see  jati hai,
jab bhee  meri  maa   mujhe   udas  nazar  aati hai,

uskee godh main  seer rakh jab bhee soya hoo,n,
akser chain o sukoon kee neend aankhon aati hai,

khilaya jab  bhee niwala  meree maa  ne mujh ko,
har niwale main uske pyaar kee mithaas aati hai,

maa ke kadmo,n kee  dhool   jab bhee  mathe lagaee,
tab ye   duniya  mujhe  junnat see  nazar aati hai,

jab se aa   gaya  hoo,n  main  dayaar e ghair main,
tabse  yaad    meri maa kee  aankho  chali aati hai,

kar na bethoo,n galti koi bhee anjane  main kabhee,
uske sanskaar giyaan kee  baate mun main  aati hai,

Bahut hi khoob liha hai aapne, Tahe dil se daad deta hu kabool kijiyega. Maa ki mamta ki baat hi alag hai, I love Mom so much, is par mujhe bhi do lines yaad aa gayi ki,

Meri Ek Chhoti Si Galti Par Maa Naraz Na Ho Jaaye Kahin,
Sar Par Maa Ka Aanchal Nahi Hota To Dar Lagta Hai....
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2015, 06:43:10 AM »
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shukriya prabha ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2015, 06:46:43 AM »
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shukriya raja ji dil se  daaadd kabool
bohat khub likha apne
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2015, 07:40:17 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaaa kehne Jeet ji, bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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rau ke saath daaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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Bohat bohat shukriya hriday ji apka
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Bohat bohat shukriya suresh ji daaaddd or rau kabool
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mere jism  se  yuh jaa,n  nikal-nikal  see  jati  hai,
jab bhee  meri  maa   mujhe   udas  nazar  aati hai,

uskee godh main  seer rakh jab bhee soya hoo,n,
akser chain o sukoon kee neend aankhon aati hai,

khilaya jab  bhee niwala  meree maa  ne mujh ko,
har niwale main uske pyaar kee mithaas aati hai,

maa ke kadmo,n kee dhool jab bhee maathe lagaee,
tab ye   duniya  mujhe  junnat see  nazar aati hai,

jab se aa   gaya  hoo,n  main  dayaar e ghair main,
tabse  yaad    meri maa kee  aankho  chali aati hai,

kar na bethoo,n galti koi bhee anjane  main kabhee,
uske sanskaar giyaan kee  baate mun main  aati hai,
 






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i know sheba ji shukriya apka
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