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by Ruchika Singh on February 18, 2015, 02:06:52 PM
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oh maa mujhe tum kitna rulati ho,
Bhulati hu main ..fir bhi yaad aati ho..
oh maa mujhe tum kitna rulati ho..
kabhi dekha nhi maine tujhe..
kabhi jaana nhi maine tujhe..
Tujhse hokar bhi kbhi...
Pehchana nhi maine tujhe..
Oh maa mujhe tum kitna rulati ho..
Bhulati hu main
Fir bhi yaad aati ho..
Hote hai chhote sab bachpan me..
Par main to BACHPAN se hi badi thi..
Aur kyu na hoti..??
Tere saaye se door jo pali thi..
Nishchhal teri aankhon ka saaya na pada mujhpe kbhi..
Jo dekha kisi ne nigaah bhar k to paaya ke main hu mannbadi...
Lori sun k to sab so jaya kertey the..
Per main taare gina kerti thi...
Kb neend aa jaye tere bina...
Iski baat joha kerti thi..
Oh maa tum kitni door thi...
Tab bhi aur ab bhi...
Tum kitni majboor thi...
Tb bhi...aur ab bhi..
Aaj bhi jab dekhti hu kisi nanhe ka muskurata chehra..
To yaad aata hai mujhe mera BACHPAN...
Jinki parchhaiyo se bhi tu bahut door thi....shayad tu majboor thi...
"RUCHI"
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2015, 04:18:55 PM »
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Behad dard bhari post waaaaahhhhhhhh
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2015, 08:19:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut sundar rachnaa, shabdon mein ehsaason ko badi hi sundartaa se piroyaa hai aapne, dil ko chhoooo gayi aapki yeh rachnaa....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2015, 10:14:10 PM »
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bahut dil ko chune waalee rachnaa hai yeh aap kee, bahut achee tarah se likhaa hai bayaan kiyaa hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2015, 03:34:18 AM »
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I love your poem...nice work..... Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2015, 08:14:47 AM »
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Dil ko choo gyi aapki ye rachna
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2015, 12:35:01 PM »
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Dil ko chhune wale ehsas. bahut sunder.
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