MAA...............................Aqsh

by aqsh on November 30, 2012, 10:18:13 AM
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Maa ki aankhoN se, mamta barasti
Maa se pyaari nahi, kahiN koi hasti

Apne dil ko, tatol kar dekho
Woh hai hamare, dil meiN basti

Chal pada hai, yeh kaisa chalan
Biwi ke fareb meiN hai, maa fansti

Paise se tum, kya tol paaoge
Mohabbat nahiN uski, itni sasti

Gaur se dekhoge, toh jaan paaoge
KadmoN meiN hai, uske jannat basti

Duaen jo uski, saath le jaaoge
Nikal aayegi, toofan se kashti

Saare jahan meiN, nahiN hai kahiN
Maa se badhkar, koi bhi hasti
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 10:21:09 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 30, 2012, 10:18:13 AM
Saare jahan meiN, nahiN hai kahiN
Maa se pyaari, koi bhi hasti

Apne dil ko, tatol kar dekho
Woh hai hamare, dil meiN basti

Chal pada hai, yeh kaisa chalan
Biwi ke fareb meiN hai, maa fansti

Paise se tum, kya tol paaoge
Mohabbat nahin uski, itni sasti

Gaur se dekhoge, toh jaan paaoge
KadmoN meiN hai, uske jannat basti

Duaen jo uski, saath le jaaoge
Nikal aayegi, toofan se kashti

Saare jahan meiN, nahiN hai kahiN
Maa se badhkar, koi bhi hasti

each and evry words true true true... i love my mom
bahut acha likha hai aapne aqsh jee.
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 10:27:27 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on November 30, 2012, 10:21:09 AM
each and evry words true true true... i love my mom
bahut acha likha hai aapne aqsh jee.
thank you so much suman jee
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 10:37:42 AM »
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Bohut Khoob aqsh jee bohut khoob daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2012, 10:39:17 AM »
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Aapne to Maa ki yaad ki siddat me ijafaa kar diya. Ham bad-naseeb Maa se door rahte hai na?
Khair.... Bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne. Mubaarakbaad kabool kii jaaye.
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2012, 10:40:16 AM »
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Wah wah bahot kamaal ki poem likhi hai aqsh ji. Daad aur rau pesh hain.  do lines main bhi jodta hun:

bachhe ki khata ko karti hai muaaf
Kabhi nahi us par  shikanja kasti
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2012, 10:43:44 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 30, 2012, 10:37:42 AM
Bohut Khoob aqsh jee bohut khoob daaad qubool kareN
thank you so much aarish jee
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2012, 10:44:33 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 30, 2012, 10:39:17 AM
Aapne to Maa ki yaad ki siddat me ijafaa kar diya. Ham bad-naseeb Maa se door rahte hai na?
Khair.... Bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne. Mubaarakbaad kabool kii jaaye.

thank you so much masoom
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2012, 10:45:17 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on November 30, 2012, 10:40:16 AM
Wah wah bahot kamaal ki poem likhi hai aqsh ji. Daad aur rau pesh hain.  do lines main bhi jodta hun:

bachhe ki khata ko karti hai muaaf
Kabhi nahi us par  shikanja kasti
thank you so much riyaz jee and thanks a lot for the rau
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2012, 11:03:21 AM »
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beshak beshak dheron daad
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 30, 2012, 11:03:21 AM
beshak beshak dheron daad
thnx saini sir
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«Reply #11 on: November 30, 2012, 12:55:46 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2012, 01:07:45 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 30, 2012, 12:55:46 PM
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thnx hriday jee
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«Reply #13 on: November 30, 2012, 01:13:48 PM »
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BAhut Khub Likha Hai Aqsh Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 30, 2012, 01:27:02 PM »
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Maa ki baateN acchi lagti hai..bahut
tees bhi rahti hai saath meN.
Maa ke liye bahut ijjat hai mere dil meN. Maa ka asheerwaad ho to ..kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
mujhe to mamta ke siwa, uske pyaar ke siwa kuch dikha hi naheeN.
aur vo sab aapne apne kalaam me udel diya hai..
bahut sundar.
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