MAA...............................Aqsh

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«Reply #15 on: November 30, 2012, 01:28:18 PM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on November 30, 2012, 01:13:48 PM
BAhut Khub Likha Hai Aqsh Ji  Applause Applause Applause
thanks sanjeev jee
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«Reply #16 on: November 30, 2012, 01:28:52 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 30, 2012, 01:27:02 PM
Maa ki baateN acchi lagti hai..bahut
tees bhi rahti hai saath meN.
Maa ke liye bahut ijjat hai mere dil meN. Maa ka asheerwaad ho to ..kuch bhi ho sakta hai.
mujhe to mamta ke siwa, uske pyaar ke siwa kuch dikha hi naheeN.
aur vo sab aapne apne kalaam me udel diya hai..
bahut sundar.
thanks to you so much mukesh jee
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«Reply #17 on: November 30, 2012, 01:35:27 PM »
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Janab-e-mann Aqsh Sahib ,, Aadab

Nasihat Amez Takhleeq hai ,,,Ek nahi balke hazarah dad ,, Isme koi shak nahi ke aap ek hassas shaks maloom parhte hai'n ......Allah khoob nawaze....
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«Reply #18 on: November 30, 2012, 03:40:34 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 30, 2012, 01:35:27 PM
Janab-e-mann Aqsh Sahib ,, Aadab

Nasihat Amez Takhleeq hai ,,,Ek nahi balke hazarah dad ,, Isme koi shak nahi ke aap ek hassas shaks maloom parhte hai'n ......Allah khoob nawaze....
thank you soooooooooo much qadeer junaid jee
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«Reply #19 on: November 30, 2012, 04:24:36 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Aqshji ,  aur  bahut  sach .
Mubarakbaad is sher ke sath :

Umr  tujh ko lage meri , ye dua kis ki hai ,
Hasti sub se badi Maa , tere siwa kis ki hai.
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«Reply #20 on: November 30, 2012, 04:33:16 PM »
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aqsh saheeba, umda vishay, umda soch aur ek udma peshkash, Jab bhi maa lafz aata hai to jehan me hazaaron cheezen aa kar sar sirf jhuk jata hai dua me, waise mera maan.a]na hai ki is lafz ka patent Munnawar Rana ji ke paas hai, waise ek ahchi kosish rahi aapki, yunhi aage v aap aur khush raheN...
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«Reply #21 on: December 01, 2012, 03:16:25 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #22 on: December 01, 2012, 03:45:10 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 30, 2012, 04:24:36 PM
Bahut khoob , Aqshji ,  aur  bahut  sach .
Mubarakbaad is sher ke sath :

Umr  tujh ko lage meri , ye dua kis ki hai ,
Hasti sub se badi Maa , tere siwa kis ki hai.


thank you so much hasan sir
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«Reply #23 on: December 01, 2012, 03:46:00 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 30, 2012, 04:33:16 PM
aqsh saheeba, umda vishay, umda soch aur ek udma peshkash, Jab bhi maa lafz aata hai to jehan me hazaaron cheezen aa kar sar sirf jhuk jata hai dua me, waise mera maan.a]na hai ki is lafz ka patent Munnawar Rana ji ke paas hai, waise ek ahchi kosish rahi aapki, yunhi aage v aap aur khush raheN...
thnx lucky jee
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«Reply #24 on: December 01, 2012, 03:46:42 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 01, 2012, 03:16:25 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad
thnx prashad jee
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«Reply #25 on: December 01, 2012, 09:17:56 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #26 on: December 01, 2012, 10:39:52 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 01, 2012, 09:17:56 AM
very nice
thnx nandbahuji
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«Reply #27 on: December 01, 2012, 10:46:03 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 30, 2012, 10:18:13 AM
Maa ki aankhoN se, mamta barasti
Maa se pyaari nahi, kahiN koi hasti

Apne dil ko, tatol kar dekho
Woh hai hamare, dil meiN basti

Chal pada hai, yeh kaisa chalan
Biwi ke fareb meiN hai, maa fansti

Paise se tum, kya tol paaoge
Mohabbat nahiN uski, itni sasti

Gaur se dekhoge, toh jaan paaoge
KadmoN meiN hai, uske jannat basti

Duaen jo uski, saath le jaaoge
Nikal aayegi, toofan se kashti

Saare jahan meiN, nahiN hai kahiN
Maa se badhkar, koi bhi hasti





wonderful, superurb ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #28 on: December 01, 2012, 11:40:37 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on December 01, 2012, 10:46:03 AM
wonderful, superurb ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
thank you so much sahal jee
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«Reply #29 on: December 28, 2012, 09:26:27 AM »
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