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                    Maajhi ne dooboi kashti jab,na fir sambhalte bana,
                    Na lehre hi saath hui, Na khud hi ubarte bana.
            
                    Khamoshi ne diya hai sada hi saath mera,
                    Na mohabbat hi kahi gai, Na dard hi kehte bana.

                    Itne aitbaar se maanga tha faasla bhi usne,
                    Na haan hi kahi gai, Na na hi kehte bana.

                    Ek ajeeb si tasveer hai is rishte ki bhi,
                    Na Mujhse hi bigadi gai, Na tujhse hi sanwarte bana.

                    Samandar me bhatke parindo ki tadeer bhi kya hai,
                    Na manzil hi dhoondhi gai, Na thak k hi rukte bana.

                    Main me bhi dikhne lagi tasveer jab teri,
                    Na sheeshi hi todi gai, Na ghoont hi bharte bana.


                      
                              ---Tamanna---
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2010, 06:42:00 AM »
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har baar ki tarah bahut hi khoob bahut hi umda... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne apni is rachna ko... bahut bahut khoob Tamanna ji... bahut achcha likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2010, 06:48:47 AM »
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 Shukriya Kapil ji,Har baar ki tarah waqt dekar kalaam ko padhne or pasand karne k liy behad shukriya.

  *Thank u.
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har baar ki tarah bahut hi khoob bahut hi umda... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne apni is rachna ko... bahut bahut khoob Tamanna ji... bahut achcha likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

*1st line me kashti ki spelling thik kar lijiye pls.
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2010, 07:02:43 AM »
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Bahut khoob Tamanna ji,aapne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,very touching creation,excellent.keep up the good work Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2010, 07:10:07 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       TAMANAA.PT JI.....

MAAJHI NE DOOBOI KASHTI JAB ZINDAGI SE TOOTA GAYA
NA MAUT AAYI NA MANGIL PAAYI SIRF BATAKTA RAHA...
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2010, 07:16:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2010, 09:57:00 AM »
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 Applause Applause kya Qoobsoorti se apne jazbaton ka izhar kiya Aapne
                     tamanna ji Aapne
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2010, 11:56:15 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Tamannaji...

Kya Gehre Jazbaat pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..Kya Khoobsurti Se Aapne Lafzon Ko Sajaya Hai Kya Kahoon!!!Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 07:41:02 PM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 24, 2010, 06:36:05 AM
               
                    Maajhi ne dooboi kashti jab,na fir sambhalte bana,
                    Na lehre hi saath hui, Na khud hi ubarte bana.
             
                    Khamoshi ne diya hai sada hi saath mera,
                    Na mohabbat hi kahi gai, Na dard hi kehte bana.

                    Itne aitbaar se maanga tha faasla bhi usne,
                    Na haan hi kahi gai, Na na hi kehte bana.

                    Ek ajeeb si tasveer hai is rishte ki bhi,
                    Na Mujhse hi bigadi gai, Na tujhse hi sanwarte bana.

                    Samandar me bhatke parindo ki tadeer bhi kya hai,
                    Na manzil hi dhoondhi gai, Na thak k hi rukte bana.

                    Main me bhi dikhne lagi tasveer jab teri,
                    Na sheeshi hi todi gai, Na ghoont hi bharte bana.


                     
                              ---Tamanna---
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2010, 01:22:04 AM »
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  Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji.
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Bahut khoob Tamanna ji,aapne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,very touching creation,excellent.keep up the good work Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2010, 01:24:34 AM »
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 Very Nice lines Cara ji, Or kalaam padhne or pasand karne ka dhero shukriya.
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       TAMANAA.PT JI.....

MAAJHI NE DOOBOI KASHTI JAB ZINDAGI SE TOOTA GAYA
NA MAUT AAYI NA MANGIL PAAYI SIRF BATAKTA RAHA...
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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2010, 01:26:26 AM »
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 Shukriya Rayees ji.  notworthy
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«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2010, 01:28:07 AM »
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Kalaam ko padhne or pasand farmaane ka behad shukriya Arif ji.
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Applause Applause kya Qoobsoorti se apne jazbaton ka izhar kiya Aapne
                     tamanna ji Aapne
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2010, 01:30:38 AM »
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 Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji,aapne humesha hi apni daad se mera hausla badhaya hai.Dheron shukriya aapka.
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Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Tamannaji...

Kya Gehre Jazbaat pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..Kya Khoobsurti Se Aapne Lafzon Ko Sajaya Hai Kya Kahoon!!!Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab

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«Reply #14 on: May 26, 2010, 01:32:31 AM »
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  Manoj ji kalaam ko pasand karne k liy bahut bahut shukriya.  happy3
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