Maajhi ne...

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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2010, 07:57:53 PM »
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Wah kya sher hai bas naraazgi is baat ki hai ke tum spelling mistake ko bilkul seriously nahi le rahi ho.........I just loved this thought.

Samandar me bhatke parindo ki takdeer bhi kya hai,
Na manzil hi dhoondhi gai, Na thak k hi rukte bana.

Waise adaygi me bohat kami nazar aayee.......jo bhi likho use waqt do usme correction karo use gungunao dekho ke sahi bahr me hai ke nahi...........
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«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2010, 01:00:30 AM »
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   Shukriya Saajid ji,Aur aage se apni galtio ko sudharne ki puri koshish rahegi meri.Shukriya. Usual Smile
Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 09, 2010, 07:57:53 PM
Wah kya sher hai bas naraazgi is baat ki hai ke tum spelling mistake ko bilkul seriously nahi le rahi ho.........I just loved this thought.

Samandar me bhatke parindo ki takdeer bhi kya hai,
Na manzil hi dhoondhi gai, Na thak k hi rukte bana.

Waise adaygi me bohat kami nazar aayee.......jo bhi likho use waqt do usme correction karo use gungunao dekho ke sahi bahr me hai ke nahi...........
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