MAAN KEE NAZR.............................................SAINI

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Apne hisse kee bhee maaN mujhko khilaa detee thee.
Khud ne khaalee hai vo waalid ko bataa detee thee.

MaiN bhatakne lgaa jab-jab bhee kabhee raste se.
Kheench kar mujhko maaN raste pe lagaa detee thee.

Meree shaitaaniyoN se hoke khafaa maaN aksar.
Peet kar meraa buraa haal banaa detee thee.

KhwaahisheN maine agar saamne maaN ke rakh dee.
Sabko manjoor vo waalid se karaa detee thee.

Mujhko jab- jab kisee ne tedhee nazar se dekhaa.
Uskee pal bhar meN vo auqaat dikhaa detee thee.

MaiN pareshaaniyoN meN jab bhee ghiraa hotaa thaa.
MaaN mujhe thapkiyaaN dekar ke sulaa detee thee.

Aaj bhee yaad haiN ‘saini’ ko vo saaree baateN.
MaaN mujhe bhaaiyo-bahno se sawaa detee thee.

Dr.Surendra Saini      

अपने हिस्से की भी माँ मुझको खिला देती थी ।
ख़ुद ने खाली है वो वालिद को बता  देती थी ॥

मैं भटकने लगा जब-जब भी कभी रस्ते से ।
खींच कर मुझको माँ रस्ते पे लगा  देती थी ॥

मेरी शैतानियों से होक ख़फ़ा माँ अक्सर ।
पीट कर मेरा बुरा हाल बना  देती थी ॥

ख़्वाहिशें  मैंने अगर सामने माँ के रख दी ।
सबको मंजूर वो वालिद से करा  देती थी ॥

मुझको जब-जब किसी ने टेढ़ी नज़र से देखा ।
उसकी पल भर  में वो औक़ात दिखा  देती थी ॥

मैं परेशानियों में जब भी घिरा होता था ।
माँ  मुझे थपकियाँ देकर के सुला  देती थी ॥

आज भी याद है 'सैनी' को वो सारी बातें ।
माँ मुझे भाइयों बहनों से सवा  देती थी ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी  
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2013, 03:17:27 PM »
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मेरी शैतानियों से होक ख़फ़ा माँ अक्सर ।
पीट कर मेरा बुरा हाल बना  देती थी ॥

ख़्वाहिशें  मैंने अगर सामने माँ के रख दी ।
सबको मंजूर वो वालिद से करा  देती थी ॥

मुझको जब-जब किसी ने टेढ़ी नज़र से देखा ।
उसकी पल भर  में वो औक़ात दिखा  देती थी ॥

मैं परेशानियों में जब भी घिरा होता था ।
माँ  मुझे थपकियाँ देकर के सुला  देती थी ॥

वाह वाह क्या बात है सर,बहुत उम्दा!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2013, 03:30:53 PM »
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Is sundar sneh bhari maarmik rachna par daad aur badhaayee Saini sahab
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2013, 03:31:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saini saheb . Maa jaisi azeem hasti ka pyara bayaan kiya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2013, 04:54:03 PM »
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Sir ji aapke in asharon se aankhen bheeg gain...

Apne hisse kee bhee maaN mujhko khilaa detee thee.
Khud ne khaalee hai vo waalid ko bataa detee thee.

KhwaahisheN maine agar saamne maaN ke rakh dee.
Sabko manjoor vo waalid se karaa detee thee.

MaiN pareshaaniyoN meN jab bhee ghiraa hotaa thaa.
MaaN mujhe thapkiyaaN dekar ke sulaa detee thee.

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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2013, 05:37:31 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 03, 2013, 02:34:48 PM
Apne hisse kee bhee maaN mujhko khilaa detee thee.
Khud ne khaalee hai vo waalid ko bataa detee thee.

MaiN bhatakne lgaa jab-jab bhee kabhee raste se.
Kheench kar mujhko maaN raste pe lagaa detee thee.

Meree shaitaaniyoN se hoke khafaa maaN aksar.
Peet kar meraa buraa haal banaa detee thee.

KhwaahisheN maine agar saamne maaN ke rakh dee.
Sabko manjoor vo waalid se karaa detee thee.

Mujhko jab- jab kisee ne tedhee nazar se dekhaa.
Uskee pal bhar meN vo auqaat dikhaa detee thee.

MaiN pareshaaniyoN meN jab bhee ghiraa hotaa thaa.
MaaN mujhe thapkiyaaN dekar ke sulaa detee thee.

Aaj bhee yaad haiN ‘saini’ ko vo saaree baateN.
MaaN mujhe bhaaiyo-bahno se sawaa detee thee.

Dr.Surendra Saini       

अपने हिस्से की भी माँ मुझको खिला देती थी ।
ख़ुद ने खाली है वो वालिद को बता  देती थी ॥

मैं भटकने लगा जब-जब भी कभी रस्ते से ।
खींच कर मुझको माँ रस्ते पे लगा  देती थी ॥

मेरी शैतानियों से होक ख़फ़ा माँ अक्सर ।
पीट कर मेरा बुरा हाल बना  देती थी ॥

ख़्वाहिशें  मैंने अगर सामने माँ के रख दी ।
सबको मंजूर वो वालिद से करा  देती थी ॥

मुझको जब-जब किसी ने टेढ़ी नज़र से देखा ।
उसकी पल भर  में वो औक़ात दिखा  देती थी ॥

मैं परेशानियों में जब भी घिरा होता था ।
माँ  मुझे थपकियाँ देकर के सुला  देती थी ॥

आज भी याद है 'सैनी' को वो सारी बातें ।
माँ मुझे भाइयों बहनों से सवा  देती थी ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी 



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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2013, 05:41:39 PM »
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waah waah waaah DR sahab bohut umda kalaam
MAA ke naam kiya hai apne , lafz e MAA ka matlab
aisa hi hota hai,

dil se har baat leti hain,
dil se samjhti hain
dil se karti hain.
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2013, 05:44:28 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saini Sir,
Bahut khoobsurat andaaz me Mother to tribute dee hai aapne.Really,Aankhein bhar aayeen.
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आज भी याद है 'सैनी' को वो सारी बातें ।
माँ मुझे भाइयों बहनों से सवा  देती थी ॥

Bahut khoob Sir
ye sher bahut accha laga
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2013, 06:26:50 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab behad umdaa peshkash rahi ... khoobsurat khayaaloN ko achche lafz diye haiN aapne...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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Bahut hi umda aur aala kalaam se nawaza hai aapne.. kya kahoon mai isse aage.. aapko bahut bahut bahut mubarak ho...
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Sir bahut bahut khoob, bahut bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne maaN ki mamta.
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«Reply #12 on: October 04, 2013, 12:19:45 AM »
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a very nice and a very touching poem...as always
ek rau k saath


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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2013, 01:32:56 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 03, 2013, 02:34:48 PM
Apne hisse kee bhee maaN mujhko khilaa detee thee.
Khud ne khaalee hai vo waalid ko bataa detee thee.

MaiN bhatakne lgaa jab-jab bhee kabhee raste se.
Kheench kar mujhko maaN raste pe lagaa detee thee.

Meree shaitaaniyoN se hoke khafaa maaN aksar.
Peet kar meraa buraa haal banaa detee thee.

KhwaahisheN maine agar saamne maaN ke rakh dee.
Sabko manjoor vo waalid se karaa detee thee.

Mujhko jab- jab kisee ne tedhee nazar se dekhaa.
Uskee pal bhar meN vo auqaat dikhaa detee thee.

MaiN pareshaaniyoN meN jab bhee ghiraa hotaa thaa.
MaaN mujhe thapkiyaaN dekar ke sulaa detee thee.

Aaj bhee yaad haiN ‘saini’ ko vo saaree baateN.
MaaN mujhe bhaaiyo-bahno se sawaa detee thee.

Dr.Surendra Saini       

अपने हिस्से की भी माँ मुझको खिला देती थी ।
ख़ुद ने खाली है वो वालिद को बता  देती थी ॥

मैं भटकने लगा जब-जब भी कभी रस्ते से ।
खींच कर मुझको माँ रस्ते पे लगा  देती थी ॥

मेरी शैतानियों से होक ख़फ़ा माँ अक्सर ।
पीट कर मेरा बुरा हाल बना  देती थी ॥

ख़्वाहिशें  मैंने अगर सामने माँ के रख दी ।
सबको मंजूर वो वालिद से करा  देती थी ॥

मुझको जब-जब किसी ने टेढ़ी नज़र से देखा ।
उसकी पल भर  में वो औक़ात दिखा  देती थी ॥

मैं परेशानियों में जब भी घिरा होता था ।
माँ  मुझे थपकियाँ देकर के सुला  देती थी ॥

आज भी याद है 'सैनी' को वो सारी बातें ।
माँ मुझे भाइयों बहनों से सवा  देती थी ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी 



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