maan lee haar mohabbat ne (NM)

by vb on October 06, 2010, 04:42:47 PM

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Re: maan lee haar mohabbat ne (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 05:13:12 PM »

har baar kee tarah yeh kosish bhi khoob rahi...ajeeb sa manzar hay ke kya imagine kiya jaye and kya nahin

kisi insaan ke wajood ki,
kya keemat lagayega yeh jahaan
yahan kabhi kismat, kabhi dastoor
tu kabhi wakt ka mara hay insaan

woh jalwon ki baatein,
woh ghataon ke kissay
kya ghesu kya sadayein
apnay andar kee awaz ko sun
ansuna kar deta hay insaan

shama jalay jo kisi lehed pe
khud jalti hay, pighalti hay aik moti kee soorat
bezuban hay jo, pankh nahin patange ke samaan
woh pathar say naQsh phir bhi daya kee moorat

likhtay rahiye...warna shama ke paas jalnay ke bahanay nahin rahenge


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ParwaaZ

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Re: maan lee haar mohabbat ne (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 06:03:52 PM »

VB jee it's realy mindblowing creation....

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob kahe hai aapne.... par aapki kalaam itni badi hai ke hum is par apni style meiN reply nahi de sake...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye...
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush o aabaad rahiye....
Khuda hafez.......


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saans

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Re: maan lee haar mohabbat ne (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2010, 03:32:43 PM »

thanks... last two lines aapnay bahut hee asardaar kaheen...!!!

hamari khushiyon pe gila hay unko
kehtay hain beghana-e-dard hain ham
suna yeh bhi kehtay unko
na aankh royee kabhi, na koyay nam

ham kehtay hain na hamsa koi hay
na sogwar zamanay mein, na ham jaisay gham
fasal-e-bahar ke sapnay nainon mein
seench'tay rahay aansoo'on say ham

aitbaar nahin aata hay unko
zakhm khud main chupayay jo baithay hain ham
rub-a-ru hone kabhi fursat mein
saat janamon ke ashk abhi ro denge ham

correct me, as my words are all over the place...