Magar apna jo tha chala gaya.......

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on January 23, 2014, 01:25:23 AM
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THI JO KAL ZAMEE'N WAHI AASMA'N, DONO HAIN JAHAN ME AAJ BHI
WAHI CHAND HAI WAHI CHANDNI, MAGAR APNA JO THA CHALA GAYA

                .............Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2014, 02:46:18 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on January 23, 2014, 01:25:23 AM
THI JO KAL ZAMEE'N WAHI AASMA'N, DONO HAIN JAHAN ME AAJ BHI
WAHI CHAND HAI WAHI CHANDNI, MAGAR APNA JO THA CHALA GAYA

                .............Syed Mohd Mahzar


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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2014, 02:54:44 AM »
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Great one.
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2014, 04:03:43 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2014, 08:23:03 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2014, 01:47:13 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2014, 02:11:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on January 23, 2014, 02:46:18 AM

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Sheba ji,
                  bahut bahut shukriya.........3 November ko meri ghazal " Hum to nikle the kahi aur hi jaane ke liye" per aapne "rau" ka wayda kiya tha , aaj tak aapke anmol inaam ka intezar hai........
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2014, 02:12:44 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on January 23, 2014, 02:54:44 AM
Great one.
        Thanks for compliments........
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2014, 02:14:11 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 23, 2014, 08:23:03 AM
waah waah


  DR.S.K.Saini Saheb,
                Behad Shukrguzar Hoon Aapkaa.....
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2014, 02:15:41 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 23, 2014, 01:47:13 PM
very nice


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              Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaa
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    Surindarn ji,
                 bahut shukrguzar hoon aapkaaa...
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2014, 02:26:49 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooob...
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2014, 07:15:29 PM »
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waah khoob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2014, 01:42:33 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 23, 2014, 02:26:49 PM
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          Mohtaram F.H.Siddiqui saheb,
                     behad shukrguzar hoon.......
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