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Sheba

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darmiyaa.n hamaare kuch aisa hisaab bane!
meri asmat ka tu hi hijaab bane!

lafz tere, khyaal tere, andaaz tere rahein.
ho kar moqammal wo meri kitaab bane!

qadam her sawaal pe bhatkte rahein mere.
mile raah koi jo mera jawaab bane!

daastaan-e-dard-e dil kah bhi do ab.
za'eef hua zakham phir na shabaab bane!

pukaare MAHJABEEN mujhe bhi zamaana sheba!
mehboob mera jab roshni-e- aaftaab bane!!

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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2013, 11:18:28 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on March 21, 2013, 11:01:23 PM

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Kya Baat Hai Sheba Ji...

Humeshaaaaa Ki Tarah Umda peshkash...Lajawaab

Bahut Khooooo!!!!!!!


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2013, 11:30:37 PM »

Shebaji.Itni khubsurat ghazal pe samajh mein nahin aata kya likhoon.Bahut bahut bahut haseen , meyaari , baa maani ashaar hain.Matla aur maqta ki khubsurti ke liye alfaaz nahin .doosra sher bhi bahut hi achha hai.Poori ki poori ghazal ka jawaab nahin . Aur phir title aisa diya jo ghazal ki khubsurti mein 4 chand laga de.Bahut bahut mubarakbad aur 1 Rau jiska istemal main lagbhag nahi karta hoon lekin is ghazal par bhi na karna nainsafi hogi.Bahut duaaein.Hasan


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2013, 11:36:34 PM »

boht khub sheba ji


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2013, 11:59:28 PM »

bahut achchha likha hai aapne sheba ji...
kahin kuchh samjha aur kahin to ulajhkar hi rah gaya....


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2013, 12:45:26 AM »

Wah.Wah,Wah
Bahtreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen ghazal hai.Mubarak ho aapko.


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2013, 12:47:01 AM »

ur words touched my heart... Applause


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2013, 02:48:34 AM »

Gud........


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2013, 05:23:57 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on March 21, 2013, 11:01:23 PM

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buht khoob buht umda,, daad qabool kijeye


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2013, 12:11:44 PM »

ek rau ke saath


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2013, 04:15:38 PM »

Kya baat hai sheba ji. bahut achchi ghazal likhi hai aapne. har sher lajawab rahe. meri dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare..


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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2013, 09:34:21 PM »

Buht Khoob Buht Umda Ghazal,, Dheeron Daad sheba g...

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Re: mahjabeen..........sheba

«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2013, 02:21:56 AM »

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Wallaah Kia baat hai jee, kia kahne aapke is gehri soNch O khayaaloN ke...
Lagta hai Shebaa sahibaa padhai chhod kar shayari ki padhai kar rahi hai.. Is it SO!

Badi achchi kalaam kahi hai jee behad khoob ashaar rahe sabhi... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Quote from: Sheba on March 21, 2013, 11:01:23 PM

darmiyaa.n hamaare kuch aisa hisaab bane!
meri asmat ka tu hi hijaab bane!

Behad khoooob matla kaha hai jee behad umdaa, Aik aalaa soNch ka muzaheraa kiya
hai aapne...

lafz tere, khyaal tere, andaaz tere rahein.
ho kar moqammal wo meri kitaab bane!

Bahut khoob jee daad... Aur aameen

qadam her sawaal pe bhatkte rahein mere.
mile raah koi jo mera jawaab bane!

WaaH waaH behad khoob bada achcha sher hai kafi gehra aur umdaa... par Bhatki
aatma ki tarhaa mat bhatka kijiye...

daastaan-e-dard-e dil kah bhi do ab.
za'eef hua zakham phir na shabaab bane!

Hmmmm kia baat hai Aunty jee bade hi khoob sher farmaa rahi hai aap...

pukaare MAHJABEEN mujhe bhi zamaana sheba!
mehboob mera jab roshni-e- aaftaab bane!!

WaaH bahut khoob bada achcha maqta raha jee behad khoob daad daad daad...
Ab koi aaftaab bane toH log kahiN aapko sunflower na kah deN...

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