mahjabeen..........sheba

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«Reply #15 on: March 23, 2013, 02:24:20 PM »
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                                 darmiyaa.n hamaare kuch aisa hisaab bane!
                                 meri asmat ka tu hi hijaab bane!


                                 lafz tere, khyaal tere, andaaz tere rahein.
                                 ho kar moqammal wo meri kitaab bane!



                                 qadam her sawaal pe bhatkte rahein mere.
                                 mile raah koi jo mera jawaab bane!


                                 daastaan-e-dard-e dil  kah bhi do ab.
                                 za'eef hua zakham phir na shabaab bane!


                                 pukaare MAHJABEEN mujhe bhi zamaana sheba!
                                 mehboob mera jab roshni-e- aaftaab bane!!
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WOW WONDERFUL ,,AWSOME...SHEBA JI,,
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«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2013, 02:44:38 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai Sheba Ji...

Humeshaaaaa Ki Tarah Umda peshkash...Lajawaab

Bahut Khooooo!!!!!!!

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shukria............!
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«Reply #17 on: April 01, 2013, 01:51:45 AM »
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Shebaji.Itni khubsurat ghazal pe samajh mein nahin aata kya likhoon.Bahut bahut bahut haseen , meyaari , baa maani ashaar hain.Matla aur maqta ki khubsurti ke liye alfaaz nahin .doosra sher bhi bahut hi achha hai.Poori ki poori ghazal ka jawaab nahin . Aur phir title aisa diya jo ghazal ki khubsurti mein 4 chand laga de.Bahut bahut mubarakbad aur 1 Rau jiska istemal main lagbhag nahi karta hoon lekin  is ghazal par bhi na karna nainsafi hogi.Bahut duaaein.Hasan


bahut bahut bahut shukria fazal sahab for this kind and beautiful note...............!
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«Reply #18 on: April 03, 2013, 04:05:38 AM »
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boht khub sheba ji


shukria sahill......!
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«Reply #19 on: April 03, 2013, 04:22:23 AM »
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Bahut Khub Ji...

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #20 on: April 03, 2013, 12:59:31 PM »
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                                 darmiyaa.n hamaare kuch aisa hisaab bane!
                                 meri asmat ka tu hi hijaab bane!


                                 lafz tere, khyaal tere, andaaz tere rahein.
                                 ho kar moqammal wo meri kitaab bane!



                                 qadam her sawaal pe bhatkte rahein mere.
                                 mile raah koi jo mera jawaab bane!


                                 daastaan-e-dard-e dil  kah bhi do ab.
                                 za'eef hua zakham phir na shabaab bane!


                                 pukaare MAHJABEEN mujhe bhi zamaana sheba!
                                 mehboob mera jab roshni-e- aaftaab bane!!
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wah wah sheba bahut bahut khoob.... bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #21 on: April 07, 2013, 03:42:29 PM »
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Bahut badhiya kalaam..
ghazab ke ashaar.. bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal
bahut bahut mubarakbaad
matla.aur maqta to kahna hi kya..wah wah wah
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«Reply #22 on: April 17, 2013, 02:40:15 AM »
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bahut achchha likha hai aapne sheba ji...
 kahin kuchh samjha aur kahin to ulajhkar hi rah gaya....

acha , main itna bura likhti hoon.phir bhi padhne ke liye shukria icon_flower...!
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«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2013, 09:03:03 PM »
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Wah.Wah,Wah
Bahtreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen ghazal hai.Mubarak ho aapko.


shukria.........!
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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2013, 04:14:29 AM »
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ur words touched my heart... Applause Applause

shukria......!
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