MAHKE BISTAR ........................................ HASAN

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Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar


Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar


Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar


Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2013, 03:55:53 PM »
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Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar


Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar


Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar


Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar


Waah Waah waah...

Bahut bahut Khooob Saheb..Niraala Andaaz...

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Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  , Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  , Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  , Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar

2nd sher..padhkar barbas hansee aa jaati hai..
bahut gahre.maayno vaali hai ye ghazal Sir
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2013, 12:57:48 AM »
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Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar

wah wah wah kya lafzoN ki jadugari hai,wah wah wah Applause Applause Applause

Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar

wah wah wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kachchi UmreiN , Pakki NeendeiN , Khwaab Suhaane , Mahke Bistar,

 
Pakki UmreiN , Kachchi NeendeiN , Khwaab Daraone , Ujde Bisatar.

sir is shair ke liye khususan daaaaad qubool kareN.


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,


Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar,


kya baat hai bohut khoob umda hasil e ghazal shair hai.. DherrooN daad aur dili mubarakbaad aur ek rau qubool kareN
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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2013, 01:08:12 AM »
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wah wah, anokha andaj, dhero dad
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 19, 2013, 03:38:07 PM

Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar


Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar


Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar ONE RAU BOSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar


Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar


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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2013, 07:25:28 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 19, 2013, 03:38:07 PM

Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar


Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar


Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar


Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar

Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar

WAAAAAAH HASAN SAHAB YE DO LINES KA KOI JAWAAB NAHI HAI,,,ANMOL HAI,,,,,,,
TAREEF BHI KAM PDH JAYE,,,
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2013, 08:44:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 19, 2013, 03:55:53 PM

Waah Waah waah...

Bahut bahut Khooob Saheb..Niraala Andaaz...

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Khwaish ji , bahut shukriya .
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Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut hi alag andaz raha aapka hasan ji. Kaise tareef karoon. alfaaz nahi mil rahe. Ek alag andaz mein likhi hui is ghazal par hamari dili  mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2013, 10:10:10 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



WallaaH janab kia kahne jee waaH behad umdaa aur behad gehre khayaalaat
ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhalaa hai aapne... Usual Smile

Mazahiyaa andaaz meiN kalaam kahi hai par gazab ki sachchi aur khoob gehre
khayaalaat ka muzahera kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile Behad umdaa kalaam rahi Sahaab
Meri hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye, bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... aap is
bazm ke woH chamakte sitare haiN jinki gair hazeri se Poonam ki raat meiN bhi
ujaale ki kami rahti hai... Usual Smile


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 19, 2013, 03:38:07 PM

Kachchi  UmreiN , Pakki  NeendeiN  , Khwaab  Suhaane , Mahke  Bistar  ,
Pakki  UmreiN  ,  Kachchi  NeendeiN , Khwaab  Daraone , Ujde  Bisatar

Tajurbe ki baat kahi hai janab, Kachchi umreN pakki neeNdeN khawaab suhaane wallaaH kia kahne...
Aur sani ka bhi aur koi saani nahi hai janab behad laa jawaab matla raha
daad daad daad... Usual Smile

Pardes  Sajan  ,  Apne  meiN  Magan , Pyasa  Jouban , Tan Man  meiN  Agan ,
Tanhaai  meiN  , Neend  na  Aave  , Machchar  kaateiN  , kaate  Bistar


WaaaH jee waaaH bahut umdaa sher hai shayari ka shahkaar hai
daad daaad daad .... Usual Smile

Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  ,
Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar


Bahut khoob janab... KayiN kahawatoN par kharaa sher kaha hai
aapne daad ... Usual Smile

Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,
Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar


Hahahahahahah kia kahne jee waaH bahut khoob daad daad daad...

Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  ,
Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar


Achcha sher hai jee daad...


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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2013, 10:17:55 AM »
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naya andaj, very nice
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2013, 11:14:53 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 19, 2013, 06:32:55 PM
Footpath  pe , SadkoN , Pul , NaaloN , MaidaanoN  meiN  so  jaate  haiN  , Aakaash  ki  chhat  ke  neeche  haiN  ,  Mazdoor  ke  ye  saare  Bistar Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  , Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar Tumko   Mubarak   Mushk -o- Ambar  ,  Belay - Chameli ,  Gende -o- Gulaab  , Ham  Khaak - NasheenoN  ki  qismat  meiN  kahaaN  aise  Mahke  Bistar

2nd sher..padhkar barbas hansee aa jaati hai..
bahut gahre.maayno vaali hai ye ghazal Sir
Mukesh ji , bahut shukriya aur duaaein .
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bahut khooooooooooooooooob hai siddiqui ji kabile taareef daaad hazir hai ....bahut khoob.
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2013, 01:44:54 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 20, 2013, 12:57:48 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kachchi UmreiN , Pakki NeendeiN , Khwaab Suhaane , Mahke Bistar,

 
Pakki UmreiN , Kachchi NeendeiN , Khwaab Daraone , Ujde Bisatar.

sir is shair ke liye khususan daaaaad qubool kareN.


Footpath   pe   Dera  ,  Ghor  Andhera  ,  Wahshi  Darinde  ChaaroN  Ore  ,


Jab   Aahat   ho  ,  Ghabrahat   ho  ,  PaaoN   sikode  ,  Odhe   Bistar,


kya baat hai bohut khoob umda hasil e ghazal shair hai.. DherrooN daad aur dili mubarakbaad aur ek rau qubool kareN


Aarish  ,  bahut  shukriya  ki  is  sanjeeda  ghazal  ki  aapne pazeerai  ki .  Kuchh  talkh  haqeeqaton  ki  taraf  ishara  kiya  hai  , aap ne  mahsoos  kiya  to  main  ise  apni  kaamyabi  samajhta  hoon .  duaaein.
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boht khub hasan siR wah wah wah
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