Mai chhoone ko ab aasmaaN chaahtee hooN.................Mamta Bajpai -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: September 05, 2010, 02:16:05 PM »

Mamta saheba salam masnoon..

Ap Ik achi shaaira ke saath saath ik Badi khushmizaj shaqsiyat ki Malik bhi hai.N ,, Waise apki dono hi Ghazal.en Gareeb ko Bahed pasand aai. Dad hi dad ..

Taham dono hi Ghazle.N Murassa hai.N so Dono pe nachiz ki daad Hazir hai .. Pahele Wali Ghazal me jo Ik chute si Noon Gunnah ki Khaami hai So Mujhe ILm hai ke app jub chahengi usse durust kar hi lengi .

Ik bar phir se dili dad o Mubarak baad Apki Pur-acar o murassa ghazal pe .. Ap sukhriyah Kahe ke Sharmindah na Kare.N .. Waise ap Khud hi Itni Achi Sukhan shinaas Hain ke apko Parhne Ko baar baar Karne Laga hai ..Allah apki Maujodgi Khayam rakhe .. Apki maujodgi Bazm ki khushnaseebi hain ..

Khadim o Khaddam

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Re: Mai choone ko ab aasmaaN chaahtee hooN.................Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #16 on: September 05, 2010, 03:18:50 PM »

QADEER SAAHEB,
Namaskaar o aadaab
zarrah zawaazish kaa behad shukriyaa.ye aap ka baddapan hai .taareef ke hiNdole me jhooltee hui me saataweN aasmaan par ja pahuNchee hooN.aap ko ilm hai?aisee tareef se koi magroor ho saktaa hai or uskaa ilzaam aap ke sar.......
Haqeeqat to ye hai keh aaj jo bhee likh rahee hooN woh aap kee sohbat kaa asar hai ....waqt waqt par yuN hee rahnumaayee karte raheN.....

khush raheN ........
khushiyaaN baaNteN........
mamta bajpai


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Re: Mai choone ko ab aasmaaN chaahtee hooN.................Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #17 on: September 08, 2010, 07:23:15 AM »

Mamata ji aapne bari achhi ghazal murattab ki hai. Daad.. Aapke sabhi qafiye sahi hain. Albatta matle ko beher me karne ke liye ek tajveez hai:

In aankhon mein sapne jawaa.n chaahti hun
Labon se main naghme rawaa.n chaahti hun


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Re: Mai choone ko ab aasmaaN chaahtee hooN.................Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #18 on: September 08, 2010, 08:10:40 AM »

Aseer jee behad umdah tajveez pesh kee hai aap ne...baat chootee see par humaaree samajh se khaarij hee rahee...beahd shukriyaa ..nazar e inaayat ka behad shukriyaa...


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