Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 31, 2010, 03:36:00 PM
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Mai ik nayaa khayaal mujhe sochnaa sahee
jaNzeer e paa banooN to ise toRnaa sahee

sach jhooth ke jhamele se bach hee naheeN sakaa
insaan hooN zameer meraa toulnaa sahee

dekhaa huaa jo aaNkhoN se hardam hee ho sahee
ye sach naheeN ye baat kabhee maananaa sahee

shaayad kisi ke kahane se ho jaayegaa yaqeeN
mai bewafaa naheeN hooN use bolanaa sahee

geetoN me yaa gazal me kitaabon me bas rahaa
shayar kaa raaz e dil hooN use kholnaa sahee


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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2010, 04:01:29 PM »
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Andaj shayeri ka aapka aaj bhi hai wahee
sher jo kahti ho wo apne mei hota hai sahee

    wisising u a very happy 2011 year
                      Manoj(cset)
Mai ik nayaa khayaal mujhe sochnaa sahee
jaNzeer e paa banooN to ise toRnaa sahee

sach jhooth ke jhamele se bach hee naheeN sakaa
insaan hooN zameer meraa toulnaa sahee

dekhaa huaa jo aaNkhoN se hardam hee ho sahee
ye sach naheeN ye baat kabhee maananaa sahee

shaayad kisi ke kahane se ho jaayegaa yaqeeN
mai bewafaa naheeN hooN use bolanaa sahee

geetoN me yaa gazal me kitaabon me bas rahaa
shayar kaa raaz e dil hooN use kholnaa sahee


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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2010, 05:36:59 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2011, 07:29:50 AM »
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Manoj jee ! aap ko bhee Nav-Varsh kee haardik shubh-kaamnaayeN! saath hee houslaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa...aap kaa bhee ek alag hee andaaz hai....bahut khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2011, 07:31:14 AM »
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Shukriyaa Nirala jee! Nayaa saal aap ko bahut bahut mubaarak...
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2011, 07:36:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mamta ji bht khubsurat likha hai aapne..har ek aashar bht achcha ban pada hai....dil lubhati rachna hai ye aapki
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2011, 08:05:06 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob..

ek ek ashar dil se wah lekar gaya dii..

me bhool jaun to unhe kaun puchhega
meri dhadkano se unki rawaani chalti hai~



apko dheeer saarii waaaliiii badi badi shubhkamnaaye naye saal kiiii~

bhagwan aap sabhi ko khush rakhe...
allah hafiz, satnaam guru dev ji, jai jinendra, jai bhawani

or ant mai sabhi me souhardra bana rahe~
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2011, 08:50:25 AM »
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Superb poem Mamta-di.....sochne par majboor kar diya aapke ess kalaam ne.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mere paas hai khush rehne ka raaj tum kisi se kehna nahee
Par jab bhee ho tum pareshaan usse khol kar dekhnaa sahee

Yu tou sakhi har marz ki dawa hai mere paas ghabraana nahee
Jab bhee ho koi apna beemaar tum mujh se dawa maangna sahee

Mai ik nayaa khayaal mujhe sochnaa sahee
jaNzeer e paa banooN to ise toRnaa sahee

sach jhooth ke jhamele se bach hee naheeN sakaa
insaan hooN zameer meraa toulnaa sahee

dekhaa huaa jo aaNkhoN se hardam hee ho sahee
ye sach naheeN ye baat kabhee maananaa sahee

shaayad kisi ke kahane se ho jaayegaa yaqeeN
mai bewafaa naheeN hooN use bolanaa sahee

geetoN me yaa gazal me kitaabon me bas rahaa
shayar kaa raaz e dil hooN use kholnaa sahee


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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2011, 09:58:18 AM »
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Behad khubsurti se likhi hui dil ki baat.
wah Mamta jee  aapka jawaab nahi.
aapke nagme gazab ka ehsaas dilati hai.
hazaaron daad aur naye saal ki badhaiyan.
khus rahe hamesha..
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2011, 01:07:20 PM »
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Kasak jee! behad shukriyaa! nirantar aap sabhee se mile hue housale hee lafz ban kaagaz par utar aate haiN...shukriyaa
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2011, 01:17:58 PM »
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shukriyaa Abhi ! tumheN bhee humaree or se naye saal kee dher see mubarak baad!
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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2011, 05:23:28 AM »
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"geetoN me yaa gazal me kitaabon me bas rahaa
 shayar kaa raaz e dil hooN use kholnaa sahee"

 बेहद शानदार ग़ज़ल|नव वर्ष की ढेर सारी मंगलकामनाएं 'ममता'जी!
- अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #12 on: January 02, 2011, 06:03:31 AM »
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Koyal sachmuch tum zinda tilismaat ho ,tumhaare paas har marz kee dawaa hai...baat kitanee bhee sanjeedaa ho aadatan tum use haasya kee or le jaatee ho.....tumhaaree baateN paRh kar sach me bada bazaa aa gayaa....shukriyaa Koyal ...saath hee naye saal kee haardik shubh-kamnaayeN.....
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2011, 06:09:03 AM »
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Shihab jee ! naye saal kee bahut saaree mubaarakbaad woh bhee dil se!

sooraj ko kasam hai wo nikalnaa chhor de
tere aangan me jo na kiraneN khushiyoN kee bikhereN
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«Reply #14 on: January 02, 2011, 02:00:02 PM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta Ji
Happy New Year 2011
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