Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 31, 2010, 03:36:00 PM

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«Reply #15 on: January 02, 2011, 02:08:49 PM »

Mamtaa Ji ... Aadaab !

aapne bahut accha likha hai ... qafiya aur radeef ka bahut khoobi se istemaal kiya hai ... ashaar ke ehsaas bhi behad umdaa aur asardaar lage hume ...

dil se daad hazir hai ...

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #16 on: January 02, 2011, 03:08:45 PM »

Rishi jee nayaa saal aap kobhee bahut bahut mubarak ho saath hee housla afzai kaa behad shukriyaa...


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Re: Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #17 on: January 02, 2011, 03:14:27 PM »

Subhash jee agar aap jaise qadradaan hume milte raheN to hum yuN hee likhte raheN...kalaam pasand farmaane or duaoN kee sougaat bhejne ke liye dil se behad shukriyaa....nayaa saal aap ke liye dher see khushiyaa laaye ...bahut bahut mubaarak...


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Re: Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #18 on: January 02, 2011, 03:14:57 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 31, 2010, 03:36:00 PM

Mai ik nayaa khayaal mujhe sochnaa sahee
jaNzeer e paa banooN to ise toRnaa sahee

sach jhooth ke jhamele se bach hee naheeN sakaa
insaan hooN zameer meraa toulnaa sahee

dekhaa huaa jo aaNkhoN se hardam hee ho sahee
ye sach naheeN ye baat kabhee maananaa sahee

shaayad kisi ke kahane se ho jaayegaa yaqeeN
mai bewafaa naheeN hooN use bolanaa sahee

geetoN me yaa gazal me kitaabon me bas rahaa
shayar kaa raaz e dil hooN use kholnaa sahee

Mamta Bajpai

Waah, Behtareen Kalaam Hai, Good Work Mamja Ji,.
Har Baar Ki Taraah


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Re: Mai ik nayaa khayaal......Mamta Bajpai

«Reply #19 on: January 02, 2011, 03:22:12 PM »

Arun jee
Pranaam,
Aap ko apnee thread par dekh kar behad khushee hui...aap ne gazal ko paRha pasand kiyaa ..iske liye dil se aabhaari hooN...behad shukriyaa...