mai jaisa tha !!!

by sarfira on December 24, 2011, 11:58:47 AM

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mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #1 on: December 24, 2011, 12:02:51 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on December 24, 2011, 11:58:47 AM

mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH Applause


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #2 on: December 24, 2011, 12:51:14 PM »

S FIraa Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... achchi aur khub koshish rahi aapki..
Khayaal bhi khoob rahe aur bayaani bhi..

Sabhi ashaar khoob hai janab daad ..
Par yeH ashaar waqai behad khoob laga hume..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khuhs O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #3 on: December 24, 2011, 03:46:06 PM »

Bahut khoob sarfira ji
Dil se daad


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2011, 05:20:16 AM »

nice

Quote from: sarfira on December 24, 2011, 11:58:47 AM

mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2011, 04:30:54 AM »

bahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhut khooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooob


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Re: mai jaisa tha !!!

«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2012, 01:44:13 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on December 24, 2011, 11:58:47 AM

mai jaisa tha wesa hi reh gaya
sar ke upar se magar paani, beh gaya Usual Smile

bade naazon se bithaya tha palkon par jise
chor gaya saath whi aur, mai dekhta reh gaya sad5

imaan ki kadar nhi daulat ke pujaari sab
kaisi hai ye bhookh,beth akele yhi sochta reh gaya !

behadd narm tha vo kisi resham sa
seene se lagaya jab, shool sa chubhhta reh gaya tongue3

nazron ki hqeeqat chupata rha tha ab tak
alfazon ki karigari me,raaz-e-dil deh gya

tandra tooti jab, muskura utha
lo--jane anjane me ye kya kya,keh gaya tongue3