mai kadam badhata gaya !!!

by sarfira on June 02, 2012, 07:33:43 PM
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mai kadam badhata gaya
gira kai baar sambhal fir khud ko chalata gaya--

na tha wajood koi saya e zism ka
rumaniyat ka mgr khwab dil me basata gaya--

ruswaiyon ke dagar pe chal bhr aati aankhe kabhi
anjan sa me sang apno ke hans kar zakhm dbata gaya--

kismat se na koi gila thi
zidd jeene ki lekr me takdeer se panja ladata gaya--

kesa hoga woh sukh jeet jane ke bad ka
chah yhi bas pane ki me khud me lalak jagata gaya--

ho jate hain dur kese ik hi nkami pr log sf
ik ik thokr pe mai khud ko
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2012, 02:31:22 AM »
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mai kadam badhata gaya
gira kai baar sambhal fir khud ko chalata gaya-- Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

na tha wajood koi saya e zism ka
rumaniyat ka mgr khwab dil me basata gaya-- Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ruswaiyon ke dagar pe chal bhr aati aankhe kabhi
anjan sa me sang apno ke hans kar zakhm dbata gaya-- icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

kismat se na koi gila thi
zidd jeene ki lekr me takdeer se panja ladata gaya-- Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

kesa hoga woh sukh jeet jane ke bad ka
chah yhi bas pane ki me khud me lalak jagata gaya-- Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ho jate hain dur kese ik hi nkami pr log sf
ik ik thokr pe mai khud ko


bahut hi khubsurat rachna...... ek du lajawab .......ossume... par adhuri kyun.....



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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2012, 06:57:27 AM »
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bohot khub sir....
ek rau aur lijie....
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2012, 07:02:15 AM »
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mai kadam badhata gaya
gira kai baar sambhal fir khud ko chalata gaya--

na tha wajood koi saya e zism ka
rumaniyat ka mgr khwab dil me basata gaya--

ruswaiyon ke dagar pe chal bhr aati aankhe kabhi
anjan sa me sang apno ke hans kar zakhm dbata gaya--

kismat se na koi gila thi
zidd jeene ki lekr me takdeer se panja ladata gaya--

kesa hoga woh sukh jeet jane ke bad ka
chah yhi bas pane ki me khud me lalak jagata gaya--

ho jate hain dur kese ik hi nkami pr log sf
ik ik thokr pe mai khud ko

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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2012, 08:11:42 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 04:55:06 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Sarfira ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2012, 05:21:38 AM »
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bahut hi khubsurat rachna...... ek dum lajawab .......ossume... par adhuri kyun.....



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thanx--
sarfire ke likhe ko itna pasanad krne ke lie bht bht sukriya

wo asal me space na tha to poora nhi hua--
ab adhure jagah pr kya likha tha wo bhi bhul gaya tongue3

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2013, 07:57:05 PM »
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bohot khub sir....
ek rau aur lijie....
thanx Akash
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