Mai shamaa hooN..............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on June 07, 2011, 05:46:03 AM
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Jalne bujhane kaa silsilaa hogaa
mai shamaa hooN naseeb kyaa hogaa

phir pashemaaN hai ashq aaNkhoN me
apnee nazaroN se gir gayaa hogaa

baatoN baatoN me bah gayeeN aaNkheN
kuchh to halkaa saa mann huaa hogaa

itanaa naazuk nahee keh sah naa sake
dil ye aahoN se hee jalaa hogaa

badalee nazreN haiN sar jhukaa saa hai
wo raqeeboN se jaa milaa hogaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2011, 06:29:14 AM »
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Wow Mamta ji bahut baddiya.mindblowing creation.bahut hi khoob. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2011, 06:53:24 AM »
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Waah..waah Mamta Ji kya baat hai..bahut khoob

Last she'r dil chhoo gaya..

shayad raastey mein hoga abhee tak Juhu(Mumbai)
naheen pahuncha.

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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2011, 07:01:11 AM »
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mamta sahibah aadab ,,,

apki is aabdaar o tabdaar , shandaar o jaandar , katdhaar o dhardaar ghazal pe mai apko dad o mubarak baad pesh karta hon ..mai kaafi mahezooz howa .. do sher eak hi kaafiye pe howe hain apki ghazal ko khiraj-e-akhidat ..allah apko khush rakhe ...


raat lagti hai ab udaas bahoth
chand badal me chup gaya hoga

dekho roone lage farishte bhi
koi mazloom marr gaya hoga


dua go

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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2011, 07:03:44 AM »
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wah wah wah.... bahut khub mamtaji... khub...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2011, 07:06:42 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 07, 2011, 05:46:03 AM
Jalne bujhane kaa silsilaa hogaa
mai shamaa hooN naseeb kyaa hogaa

phir pashemaaN hai ashq aaNkhoN me
apnee nazaroN se gir gayaa hogaa

baatoN baatoN me bah gayeeN aaNkheN
kuchh to halkaa saa mann huaa hogaa

itanaa naazuk nahee keh sah naa sake
dil ye aahoN se hee jalaa hogaa

badalee nazreN haiN sar jhukaa saa hai
wo raqeeboN se mil gayaa hogaa

Mamta Bajpai


aakhri sher bahut pasand aaya. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


                   ek sher meri tarf se.

                buzdili mera nasib hai shayad,
                rakh kar talwaar sar kata liya humne
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2011, 07:23:20 AM »
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Qadeer saaheb!

Walaikum aadaab!

Aap ke ishaare ke mutaabik humne do sher jo humkaafiye the unheN durust kar liyaa hai....ek baar phir aap kee nazr e inaayat kee muntazir hai humaaree gazal........bahar kaif jis aan baan or shaan ke saath aap ne kalaam kee pazirai kee hai woh qaabil e taareef hai.........samajh nahee paa rahee ki kin alfaazoN me aap kaa shukriyaa adaa karooN....aap ne jo khiraaj e aqeedat me sher pesh kiye wo bemisal haiN.....aap kee khayaaloN kee yahee naazukee or reshmeepan mujhe andar tak chhoo jaa taa hai.......aap kaa baddappan hai jo aap ne is naacheez ko itanaa maan diyaa ...behad shukriyaa.......
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2011, 08:16:27 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2011, 08:50:23 AM »
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Mamtaji, bahut khoobsoorat Ashaar se nawaaza.Sshukriya bhi Daad bhi.FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2011, 09:04:16 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2011, 12:34:21 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!


Waah kia kaheN hum Mamtaa jee tareef ke liye lafz hi nahi
mil rahe haiN... Usual Smile Aisa kah lete hai samjh lijiye lafz
Qadeer sahaab ke aur Ahsaas humare haiN Usual Smile

Behad umdaa Gazal se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne ...
HazaaroN daad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         




Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 07, 2011, 05:46:03 AM
Jalne bujhane kaa silsilaa hogaa
mai shamaa hooN naseeb kyaa hogaa

Kia kahne waah waah waah bahut umdaa matla kaha hai.. Usual Smile         

phir pashemaaN hai ashq aaNkhoN me
apnee nazaroN se gir gayaa hogaa

Kia kahne Mamtaa jee behad sahiN farmaya daad Usual Smile         

baatoN baatoN me bah gayeeN aaNkheN
kuchh to halkaa saa mann huaa hogaa

Waah waah waah Masha Allah kai ashaar kahe hai daad daad daad           

itanaa naazuk nahee keh sah naa sake
dil ye aahoN se hee jalaa hogaa

Bahut khoob daad ... bada sadgi bhara sher hai Usual Smile         

badalee nazreN haiN sar jhukaa saa hai
wo raqeeboN se jaa milaa hogaa

Kia kahne Mamtaa jee waah bahut khoob Usual Smile         

Mamta Bajpai

Is umdaa aur murrasa Gazal par dil se daad o
mubarakbad kabul kijiye Mamta jee...
Aapki bayaani ki sadgi aur rawaan sa andaaz aapke har kalaam ko
behad khub bana deta hai, Usual Smile

Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor e kuwat bakhse Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye...
khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2011, 02:57:52 PM »
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Madhu jee housla baRhaane kaa behad shukriyaa..........
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2011, 03:10:50 PM »
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Ha ha ha ha Sstish jee achchha mazaaq kar lete haiN aap.......
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