-----// Main ab dawaa nahi maangtaa //----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on February 21, 2013, 06:50:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 22, 2013, 12:48:53 AM »
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kya bat  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: February 22, 2013, 05:01:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diyaa, padhaa aur pasand kiyaa.. aur main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa kartaa hoon jo apne itnaa khoobsurat saa jawaab deke meri rachna ki sundartaa ko badhaayaa.... bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

aut bahut khoobsurat jawaab diyaa hai aapne... bahut achcha lagaa padh ke....!!!


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ab paas hone yaa duur jaane mein kyaa rakhaa hai
ab tumse judaa hoke zingadi mein kyaa rakhaa hai

duhaai naa do apne aansuon ki tum mujhe is tarhaa
tod ke dil ab aansuu bahaane mein kyaa rakhaa hai

main jaantaa hoon ki mumkin nahi milan ab apnaa
tumhe paane ki duwaa maangne mein kyaa rakhaa hai

aansu aankh se nikalke waapas aankh mein nahi jaate
kasmon waadon mein ab baandhne mein kyaa rakhaa hai

khush raho tum jahaan ho apne naye ghar mein ab jaanaa
naa roko mujhe, tumhaare paas rehne mein kyaa rakhaa hai

bas dard hi hogaa tumhe ab mujhe apne kareeb dekh ke
jaane do mujhe, ab jhoote khwaabon mein kyaa rakhaa hai...

*****HRIDAY*****

Waaaaah! Mahakavi Hriday ji aapka jawab bhi lajawab hai. bahut bahut khoob.Padhkar maza aa gaya.


duhaai naa do apne aansuon ki tum mujhe is tarhaa
tod ke dil ab aansuu bahaane mein kyaa rakhaa hai

kya baat hai.

Dil nahi toda hai humne, is tarah ka ilzaam toh na dijiye
Meri wafa ko badnaam karke, mujhe bewafa ka naam to na dijiye
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«Reply #17 on: February 22, 2013, 11:01:54 PM »
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bahut khoob...
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«Reply #18 on: February 23, 2013, 06:22:28 PM »
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waah...waah...bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: February 25, 2013, 11:51:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Premdeep ji.....!!!

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«Reply #20 on: February 27, 2013, 11:58:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anmol ji.....!!!

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«Reply #21 on: February 28, 2013, 12:12:59 AM »
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Wah wah wah wah love guru jii just superb  ...... Vde se massoom tarike se drd ko bayan kiya hai..... Aapki romantic shayri ke to kayal the hii is drd ne bhi aapka fan bna dia...
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«Reply #22 on: February 28, 2013, 09:18:45 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji.....!!!

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«Reply #23 on: March 05, 2013, 12:48:14 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Miru ji.....!!!

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«Reply #24 on: March 05, 2013, 03:39:56 PM »
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thank u soooo much Ambalika ji.....!!!

fantastic...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: March 08, 2013, 05:10:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
masoom dard ka dariya baha diya aapne..
dil ke bahut kareeb se likhi hui peshkash.

Sab kuch hai is jahaan me par vo nahee jiskee talaash hai
khula aasmaan, ye chamakte sitaare, phir bhi dil udaas hai

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«Reply #26 on: March 09, 2013, 04:20:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Hasan ji......!!!

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«Reply #27 on: March 10, 2013, 03:14:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Farhan ji......!!!

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wah wah wah wah wah kya kehnay janab k "DAAD Qabool Kijeye" Buht Khoob
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«Reply #28 on: March 11, 2013, 07:25:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aru ji.....!!!

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«Reply #29 on: March 13, 2013, 12:34:28 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji.....!!!

bahut bahut khoobsoorat
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