main buhat door hoon (by vb)

by vb on November 30, 2012, 04:32:24 PM
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Main buhat door hoon

Teri aaghoshe say, teri aankhon say bhe
Sang-e-mar-mar taraasheeda gaalon say bhe
Teray gul-faam honton say, baalon say bhe
Teray abroo ki junbish say banhon say bhe
Teray aariz say bhe, narm saanson say bhe
Ake veeraan say jeevan ko jeetaa hoon main
Tujh say kat kar jiyoon, kitna majboor hoon

Main buhat door hoon

Apnay daftar say jub ghar ko chalta hoon main
Maykaday ki taraf jaa nikaltaa hoon main
Haath men teri yaadon ki bottle liyay
Bay-waja koocha koocha bhatakta hoon main
Pee loon zyada tu foot-path ki gode men
Karvaten subuh-dam tak badalta hoon main
Tujh ko ehsaas hay tu mujhay mil bhe jaa
Raat din teri chaahat men jalta hoon main
Ake aawaaraa shaair hoon, saudaai hoon
Teri chaahat ko paanay say maazoor hoon

Main buhat door hoon

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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2012, 04:36:37 PM »
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waah waah laajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2012, 04:38:03 PM »
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umda peshkash hai janaab, ek taazgi si thi aapke is qalaam men... Is hassash qalaam ke liye dheron daal qubool farmaayen, aur aage v yuNhi likhte raheN...
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2012, 05:24:22 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2012, 05:25:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause
v.v.nice vb sb
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2012, 06:11:56 PM »
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padhte padhte ek alag hi mahoal me pahonch gai thi VB ji...... khatm kyun ho jati hai aapki gazal.. chalti kyun nahin rehti.... ye yunhi badhti rahen aur main padhti rahun .. ehsaason ke samandar me utarti rahun.......
uffffffffffffffff....... fir kuch bhi bol gai..... zabardast post hai aapki
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2012, 03:11:32 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2012, 09:12:42 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2012, 11:34:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 10:48:57 AM »
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shukriya aap sub ka...

Chaar lafzon ka hay shobdaa shaairi
Koi bujhtaa rahay, koi jaltaa rahay
Meri bay-kaar nazmon ki oqaat kya?
Koi aataa rahay chhup k parhta rahay?
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2012, 07:52:14 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 04, 2012, 10:32:22 AM »
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thanx...
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