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Main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin kisika wishwas na toot jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin koi apna humse na ruth jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamari chaht benaqab na ho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamara har khuab na kho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamare rishte ki nazdiki per sawal na uth jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin tumhari pakeezgi per koi anch na ajaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin galti humse sar-e-aam na ho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
ek lamhe ki khatir hamari mhbt badnam na ho jaye.........





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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 02:23:22 AM »
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WAH BKYA BAAT HAI         BROKENBYLUV JI......


MAIN CHHU TOU LU TUMHE PAR DAR LAGTA HAI
KAHIN HAM HADD SE NA GUJAR JAYE.........
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 05:03:35 AM »
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dil me bht gehre utar gai tumhari ye nazm geet...
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kuch aise hi afsane hain dil me
jo zabaan pe ane se darte hain

hum chhate hain unhe baintehaan magar
unke paas aane se hum darte hain

ye nazdeeki kahin zindagi bhar ka dard na ban jaye
ab hum unhe kho dene k khyal se bhi darte hain

khud hi ho jayenge durr hum tumse kuch pal me
k tere bina jeene ki aadat se hum darte hain...
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 06:28:08 AM »
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Main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin kisika wishwas na toot jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin koi apna humse na ruth jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamari chaht benaqab na ho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamara har khuab na kho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin hamare rishte ki nazdiki per sawal na uth jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin tumhari pakeezgi per koi anch na ajaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
kahiin galti humse sar-e-aam na ho jaye,

main chhu tou lu tumhe per darr lagta hai,
ek lamhe ki khatir hamari mhbt badnam na ho jaye.........







Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob geetji..

Jo iss Nazm Ko Dil Se padhega,wahi isske dard ko mehsoos kar paayega..

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 06:30:46 AM »
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dil me bht gehre utar gai tumhari ye nazm geet...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


kuch aise hi afsane hain dil me
jo zabaan pe ane se darte hain

hum chhate hain unhe baintehaan magar
unke paas aane se hum darte hain

ye nazdeeki kahin zindagi bhar ka dard na ban jaye
ab hum unhe kho dene k khyal se bhi darte hain

khud hi ho jayenge durr hum tumse kuch pal me
k tere bina jeene ki aadat se hum darte hain...

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob!!!

Bahut Hi Ghehre Aur dil Ko Chuu jaane wale jazbaat,Insaan Ki Majbooriyon ko bahut khoobsurti se Darshaya Hai Aapne..kya kehne

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2010, 07:01:30 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Brokenbyluv Ji
Par Jo Sochte Hain Woh Sochte Hi Reh Jate Hain
Aur Kasak Sahiba Aapne Bhi Achha Saath Diya Hai Inka.

Good Job Both Of You.

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash.
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2010, 07:12:15 AM »
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wah jii geet di mast he ...sach bahut gehra likha he apne~
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2010, 07:28:01 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya cara ji,abhi ji,khwaish ji,yaash ji,shihab ji,aap sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya ada karti hu..........
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2010, 07:51:39 AM »
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dil me bht gehre utar gai tumhari ye nazm geet...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


kuch aise hi afsane hain dil me
jo zabaan pe ane se darte hain

hum chhate hain unhe baintehaan magar
unke paas aane se hum darte hain

ye nazdeeki kahin zindagi bhar ka dard na ban jaye
ab hum unhe kho dene k khyal se bhi darte hain

khud hi ho jayenge durr hum tumse kuch pal me
k tere bina jeene ki aadat se hum darte hain...

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji bahut khoob alfaz likhe hai ji..apke alfaz merra haal-e-dil bakhubi bayan kar rahe hai.....


Nazdeek aa jau tumhare tou door jane ka hausla nhi hota,
yahi ek aesa ehsas hai jo door hoke bhi juda nhi hota,

ek ajab si kashish ghere rakhti hai mujhe,
tumhari talab ki khwaish samete rakhti hai mujhe,

baar baar sochti hu ki tumse door chali jati hu,
per har dafa ho kar dil se majbur tumhare paas chali aati hu,

ye kaisi pyas hai jo bujhaye nhi bujh paati hai,
har lamha har peher bus badhti hi jati hai,

ek pal ki khatir main apna aashiya khona nhi chahti,
per merri majburi hai ki terre siwa main aur kisi ka hona nhi chahti.........

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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2010, 07:57:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji bahut khoob alfaz likhe hai ji..apke alfaz merra haal-e-dil bakhubi bayan kar rahe hai.....


Nazdeek aa jau tumhare tou door jane ka hausla nhi hota,
yahi ek aesa ehsas hai jo door hoke bhi juda nhi hota,

ek ajab si kashish ghere rakhti hai mujhe,
tumhari talab ki khwaish samete rakhti hai mujhe,

baar baar sochti hu ki tumse door chali jati hu,
per har dafa ho kar dil se majbur tumhare paas chali aati hu,

ye kaisi pyas hai jo bujhaye nhi bujh paati hai,
har lamha har peher bus badhti hi jati hai,

ek pal ki khatir main apna aashiya khona nhi chahti,
per merri majburi hai ki terre siwa main aur kisi ka hona nhi chahti.........




Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji..

Kitni khoobsurti se aapne apne lafzon ko sajaaya hai

bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 07:58:08 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 08:36:26 AM »
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bahut bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne darr ko shabdon me bayaan kiya hai... sach aisa darr kabhi kabhi dil me bahut dard dene lagta hai.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. too good hai ji...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 10:05:20 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji bahut khoob alfaz likhe hai ji..apke alfaz merra haal-e-dil bakhubi bayan kar rahe hai.....


Nazdeek aa jau tumhare tou door jane ka hausla nhi hota,
yahi ek aesa ehsas hai jo door hoke bhi juda nhi hota,

ek ajab si kashish ghere rakhti hai mujhe,
tumhari talab ki khwaish samete rakhti hai mujhe,

baar baar sochti hu ki tumse door chali jati hu,
per har dafa ho kar dil se majbur tumhare paas chali aati hu,

ye kaisi pyas hai jo bujhaye nhi bujh paati hai,
har lamha har peher bus badhti hi jati hai,

ek pal ki khatir main apna aashiya khona nhi chahti,
per merri majburi hai ki terre siwa main aur kisi ka hona nhi chahti.........



ye hubahu wahi baat hai jo mere dil me shor machati hai....geet mere dil k jazbaaton ko bht sundar bayaan kar gaye tumhare geet..
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 10:17:35 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... too good hai ji...!!!

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji bahut khoob alfaz likhe hai ji..apke alfaz merra haal-e-dil bakhubi bayan kar rahe hai.....


Nazdeek aa jau tumhare tou door jane ka hausla nhi hota,
yahi ek aesa ehsas hai jo door hoke bhi juda nhi hota,

ek ajab si kashish ghere rakhti hai mujhe,
tumhari talab ki khwaish samete rakhti hai mujhe,

baar baar sochti hu ki tumse door chali jati hu,
per har dafa ho kar dil se majbur tumhare paas chali aati hu,

ye kaisi pyas hai jo bujhaye nhi bujh paati hai,
har lamha har peher bus badhti hi jati hai,

ek pal ki khatir main apna aashiya khona nhi chahti,
per merri majburi hai ki terre siwa main aur kisi ka hona nhi chahti.........


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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2010, 10:42:53 AM »
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Muaafi chahata Hoon geetji, Bina Aapke Izzazat ke yahan Kuch Likh raha hoon, yahan kuch bin likhe raha nahi jaayega..

Mohabbat karne Ki, Tu Bhi Ek Aisi Saza Paayega
Tanhai mein Kabhi Tu Bhi Deewaro Se Takraayega...

Teri Jhooti Muskaan Ke peeche,Chupe hue Gham Ko Sab Jaanlenge
"Main Bilkul Theek Hoon" kehkar Tu Bhi sabse Nazrein Churayega.

Kisne Kaha Tha, Tujhse  Ke Jaa Mohabbat karle!!!!!
Aaj Iss Dil ki kahta Par Tu bhi Pachtayega...

Afsos Ke Main Badalte Hue Mausam Ki Tarah Nahi!!!!
Jo pal-Pal mein sab Roop-Rang Badal Jaayega...

"Khwaish" Mohabbat Ka Anjaam Itna Bura Bhi Nahi!!!
Ek Din Har Taraf Uski Nazron Ko Mera Naam Nazar Aayega...
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