main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

by soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:57:11 PM
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namaskar,
main yeh jo post kar raha hoon wo mere ek uncle ke khayalat hai jinhe maine baton mein suna aur ek shayri ke tarike se pesh kar rha hoon wo kafi pareshan hokar apni dastan suna rahe the,,

isme last ki 4 lines shayad aapko bahut buri lagein par jo unhone kaha use hi bta raha hoon aur shayad aaj ke samay mein bahut se logo k aise hi vichar ho gaye phir bhi agar kisi ko bura lage to main dil se mafi chahta hoon..


Main ghar ka mukhiya hoon is ghar ki mujhpar jimmedari hai
meri khushi kuch nahi mere pariwar ki khushiyan hi mujhe pyari hai

teen betiyan hai meri teeno hi samjhdhar aur meri aakhon ka noor hai
teeno badi ho gai aa gaya samay badi beti ki shadi ki tayari hai

jeewan bhar ki mehnat se bhi dahez ek ka jamma kar paya
sochta hoon aage kya hoga aage do ladki aur kunwari hai

umr bhar chala main imandari se to kuch bhi hasil na hua mujhe
mere sathiyon ne thaggi aur rishwt se khride bangle aur gaadi hai

sochta hoon gar meri bhi yahi raah hoti to naa aaj koi pareshani oti
dekhkar khud ki haalat yahi lagta hai achhai par burai bhaari hai

mujhe mouke par chunna tha gandhi ji ki photo lage note ko
maine chuna gandhi ji ke aadarsh ko yahan galti meri sari hai

lagta hai mujhe gandhi ji ke to aadarsh chale gaye sath unke
ab to gandhi ki photo lagi note se hi chalti dunia sari hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2012, 05:03:55 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2012, 05:09:30 PM »
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Sach me Saudagar jee
aaj ke aapke is kalaam me kuch khaas hai.
theme to acchi hee hai..par aapke chuninda alphaajo ne ise aur khoobsurat bana diya hai..
Bahut umda Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2012, 05:26:51 PM »
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shukriya saini sir..
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2012, 06:04:06 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:57:11 PM
namaskar,
main yeh jo post kar raha hoon wo mere ek uncle ke khayalat hai jinhe maine baton mein suna aur ek shayri ke tarike se pesh kar rha hoon wo kafi pareshan hokar apni dastan suna rahe the,,

isme last ki 4 lines shayad aapko bahut buri lagein par jo unhone kaha use hi bta raha hoon aur shayad aaj ke samay mein bahut se logo k aise hi vichar ho gaye phir bhi agar kisi ko bura lage to main dil se mafi chahta hoon..


Main ghar ka mukhiya hoon is ghar ki mujhpar jimmedari hai
meri khushi kuch nahi mere pariwar ki khushiyan hi mujhe pyari hai

teen betiyan hai meri teeno hi samjhdhar aur meri aakhon ka noor hai
teeno badi ho gai aa gaya samay badi beti ki shadi ki tayari hai

jeewan bhar ki mehnat se bhi dahez ek ka jamma kar paya
sochta hoon aage kya hoga aage do ladki aur kunwari hai

umr bhar chala main imandari se to kuch bhi hasil na hua mujhe
mere sathiyon ne thaggi aur rishwt se khride bangle aur gaadi hai

sochta hoon gar meri bhi yahi raah hoti to naa aaj koi pareshani oti
dekhkar khud ki haalat yahi lagta hai achhai par burai bhaari hai

mujhe mouke par chunna tha gandhi ji ki photo lage note ko
maine chuna gandhi ji ke aadarsh ko yahan galti meri sari hai

lagta hai mujhe gandhi ji ke to aadarsh chale gaye sath unke
ab to gandhi ki photo lagi note se hi chalti dunia sari hai


infact this is fact
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2012, 06:17:14 PM »
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BEHAD UMDA
HER EK SHABD MAN TO CHUTA HAI
Quote from: soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:57:11 PM
namaskar,
main yeh jo post kar raha hoon wo mere ek uncle ke khayalat hai jinhe maine baton mein suna aur ek shayri ke tarike se pesh kar rha hoon wo kafi pareshan hokar apni dastan suna rahe the,,

isme last ki 4 lines shayad aapko bahut buri lagein par jo unhone kaha use hi bta raha hoon aur shayad aaj ke samay mein bahut se logo k aise hi vichar ho gaye phir bhi agar kisi ko bura lage to main dil se mafi chahta hoon..


Main ghar ka mukhiya hoon is ghar ki mujhpar jimmedari hai
meri khushi kuch nahi mere pariwar ki khushiyan hi mujhe pyari hai

teen betiyan hai meri teeno hi samjhdhar aur meri aakhon ka noor hai
teeno badi ho gai aa gaya samay badi beti ki shadi ki tayari hai

jeewan bhar ki mehnat se bhi dahez ek ka jamma kar paya
sochta hoon aage kya hoga aage do ladki aur kunwari hai

umr bhar chala main imandari se to kuch bhi hasil na hua mujhe
mere sathiyon ne thaggi aur rishwt se khride bangle aur gaadi hai

sochta hoon gar meri bhi yahi raah hoti to naa aaj koi pareshani oti
dekhkar khud ki haalat yahi lagta hai achhai par burai bhaari hai

mujhe mouke par chunna tha gandhi ji ki photo lage note ko
maine chuna gandhi ji ke aadarsh ko yahan galti meri sari hai

lagta hai mujhe gandhi ji ke to aadarsh chale gaye sath unke
ab to gandhi ki photo lagi note se hi chalti dunia sari hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2012, 08:00:41 PM »
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Saudagar Jee Aadaab!

Waqai haqeekhat bayaaN ki hai aapne.... achche khayaaloN ko
sahiN lafz diye hai... Usual Smile

K A Jee ne jo farmaya sahiN hai infact it's realy todays fact...
Imandaari se jeene waloN ka jeena mushkil hai...
Par beimaani karna bhi aasaaN nahi yeH bhi fact hai... tongue3

Wel aapki is kalaam par dheroN daad ...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2012, 01:53:42 AM »
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Bohut Khoob Saudagar jee, isme muafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai , aapne zindagi ki kadwi haqiqat ko ujagar kiya hai,  dheerrron daad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 02:46:00 AM »
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BAhut Hi Umda likha hai Soudagar Ji Daad Qabul Farmayeen
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Aapke in keemti shabdo ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad mkv ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2012, 12:54:07 PM »
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Shukriya K.A ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2012, 01:31:00 PM »
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Baht bahut shukriya manoj ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2012, 02:52:54 PM »
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Justtttttt Excellent!!!!!!

Zabardast peshkash Saudagar Ji..

Har Ek Sher Lajawaab.....

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 23, 2012, 05:37:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaz ji.........
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bahut bahut shukriya aarish bhaijan,,,,
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