main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

by soudagar on July 22, 2012, 04:57:11 PM

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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2012, 12:47:48 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji...!!!


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Re: main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2012, 04:46:01 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya khawahish ji......


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Re: main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2012, 05:24:35 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji...


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Re: main ghar ka mukhiya hoon... soudagar

«Reply #18 on: July 24, 2012, 05:31:02 PM »

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sochta hoon gar meri bhi yahi raah hoti to naa aaj koi pareshani oti
dekhkar khud ki haalat yahi lagta hai achhai par burai bhaari hai

mujhe mouke par chunna tha gandhi ji ki photo lage note ko
maine chuna gandhi ji ke aadarsh ko yahan galti meri sari hai

lagta hai mujhe gandhi ji ke to aadarsh chale gaye sath unke
ab to gandhi ki photo lagi note se hi chalti dunia sari hai

I think beta, this one is the BEST from your end. whole creation is too good, effective, touching lines.and the above lines LAJAWAB ..EXCELLANT, WONDERFUL. Applause