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So Kyon Manda Aakhiye
Jis Jamme Rajaan!!!!

Dhan Guru Nanak Dev Ji Ne Yeh Anmol Bachan Uchaare The Ke Hum Usse Kaise Bura Keh sakte hai Jo Ek Janani hai,Yeh Insaan Ko kabhi nahi Bhoolna Chahiye Ke Bade-Bade Raje-Mahraajo,Peer-Paighambar,Sant-Avtaar Ko Janam Dene Wali Ek Aurat Hi Hai..

Aaj Ka Sach.....

“She was Thrown in the garbage dump outside the village for dogs that ate her.

Her only fault — she was the fourth girl born in a poor family,” said By
paediatric doctor here, recalling the first time she witnessed discrimination against female infants.

Even today In Modern Times Birth of girl child is viewed as a bad investment for future..

India’s female to male ratio is 100 males to 93 females compared to a world average of 100 males to 105 females......

Yeh Hai Aaj ke daur Ka Ghinona Sach..Main Iss Kavita Ko Kavita Naa Maankar Sirf Ek Pukaar ka Darja Dunga,Ek Aisi Pukaar Jo Ek Ladki Apni Maa,Apne baap se Kardi hai Ke Aakhir Kyon Usse Hi Janam Milne Se Pehle Maar Diya Jaata Hai..

Iss Kavita Par Comments dena Na Dena,Shayad Zaroori nahi hai Par Iss Kavita Ke Dard Ko,Ehsaas Ko Samjhna Bahut Zaroori Hai,Agar Yeh kavita Kisi Ke dil Mein Dard paida kar sake,Aur Hum Yeh sab Hone Se Rok sake Jisse Jeev Hatya Ya Female Infanticide Kehte Hai to Bas Wahi Ek Anmol Inaam Hi Iss Kavita Ka..Shukriya..

Maa Teri saanson se meri saansein chalti Rahi
par pata Nahi kyon aaj saanso Ka Aana Band sa ho gaya
Ek Rooh Thi Main Tere Jism Ki
Par pata Nahi Kyon Aaj Iss Rooh Se Jism Hi Juda Ho Gaya

Maa Main Tujhse Kuch Kehna Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Jaane Kyon Mujhe Woh Tera Pyaar Naa Mila
Teri Balayen, Tera Woh Dulaar Naa Mila
Maa Main Teri Aanhkon Ka Tara Bankar Jhilmilana Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Maa main thi To ek Beti Par Kisi Bete Sa Kam naa Thi
Ek Baar Sach Kehna,Mujhe maarne Par Kya Teri Aankhein Nam Na Thi..
Maa Main Bhi tere Kadmon se Kadam Milakar chalna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Ek Beti ko Hi kyon Har baar Parkha Jaata Hai
eK jageh par janam Dete waqt Kehte Ho ghar Ki laxmi Ne Janam liya
Aur Dusre Hi pal usse paraya Dhan Kaha Jaata Hai
Maa Main Teri Dost, Teri Sakhi, Tera Hi Roop Bana Chahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Betiyan To Papa ki Laadliyan Hoti hai
Betiyan to papa Ke Liye Jaan Se Pyaari Hoti hai
Main Aap Dono Ki Izzat Bankar Duniya Mein Rehna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi..

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Har Ek Jeev Ko haq Hai Zindagi Ko Jeene Ka
Kisi Ke haq Ko Cheena gunaah hai,
Ek masoon Si Jaan Ka Qatl karna, Kya Woh Insaan Hai??

Beti To Ek Phool Bankar Ghar-Aangan Mein Khilna Chaahti Thi..
bas..Uski Pukaar Yehi Thi..."Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi..."

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 09:20:34 AM »

kwaish jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

sach me aap ne to aaj ek dam se rone ko majbur kar diya
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jis aatarah se aap ne samaj ki buraiyon ko samaketit karty hue is rachna ko aakar diay hai

wo sach me lajawab hai

mujhe b apni aaj ek poorani kavita yaad aai hai jo maine isi topic pe karib 3 saal pehle schhol me likhi thi shayad kahin mil jaye to aap logon ko sunaonga

magar mujhe yakin hai ki wo isse jyada umda aur dilnashin nahi ho sakti

isme ubhara hua hjar dard , har shabd mere dil ko kachot raha hai aur jaise kah raha hai ki is burai se ladna hai tumhen ....................

bhut mushkil me dal diya aap ki rachna ne

kisi ne sach kaha hai

"kalam ki takat talwar se tej hai "

aap ka shubhchintak

"Raahi"


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 09:43:20 AM »

khwaish ji........
kuch kehna possible hi nahin iske liye...

ye feling hi apne aap me sharmindgi bhari hai k hamare aas pas ye ho raha hai aur hum ise rok nahin pa rahe...

kuch nahin keh paungi....


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 12:36:49 PM »

Speechless............Mook


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2010, 03:00:00 PM »

Marvellous Creation Khwahish Ji...

Very Nice Feelings...

Aaj Ke Samaaj Ke Ghatanaaon Par Aina Rakhne Ka Aapke Koshish... Dil Bhar Aaya..


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 03:27:09 PM »

Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Khwaish Bhi,.

its very touching


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2010, 03:49:27 PM »

Bahut khoob khwaish ji bahut hi gehri aur sahi baat kahi hai apne..aksar log aese topics pe sochte tou hai per likhte kuch nhi apne kuch benaam se ehsaso ko itni khubsuarti se naam diya hai..apki kavita kaabil-e-tareef hai...bahut khoob...


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2010, 06:32:00 PM »

Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 26, 2010, 09:20:34 AM

Raahi Ji, Yeh kavita Likhte waqt Meri bhi Aankhein bhar Aayi Thi Aur Aisa bahut kam Hota hai,Ke Apne Khud Ki kavita Ko hum Yuh Mehsoos Kare..

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya, Aapka Teh Dil Se shukriya..Aur Aapne Bilkul Sach kaha Kalam Ki Taakat Kabhi bhi talwaar Se Tez Hi rehti hai


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2010, 07:20:34 PM »

Kapil Dost ne mujse ek kavita par ek bada pyaara jumla kaha tha jo aj apko kehna chahta hoon Dost..

"Kuch nazmein parri nahin jaati..Mehsoos ki jati hai.."

I felt the vibration of this poem dear friend..Beautifully written..bahaut ache, nek, saaf ehsaas..ek sacchai par likhna wakei muskhil hota hai aur jabke woh sachayi ap par na biti ho..
Auron pe likhne wale bahaut bade dil kay malik hote hai..

Bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob Dost..I salute your poem.!

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2010, 03:05:05 PM »

Khwaish ji aapki iss poem ko jitna ho sake failana chahiye....logon se share karna chahiye.....iss jagah aakar ek maa majbur ho jaati hai....uss se uski bachi ko cheen liya jaata hai aur wo khuch nahi kar paati.....i hope inn alfaazon ko padh kar uss maa mein hausla aaye aur wo apni bachi ko haq de sake jeene ka.....jisse padhkar hamari aankhe nam hai...uss se ek maa ki ruh hi kaap jaaye.....i'll definetly share dis poetry as much as i can.....aur baaki members se bhi yahi gujarish hai meri.....Shukriya khwaish ji....iss aur hamein le jaane ka.....dheron daad kabul kijiye.....


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2010, 09:18:32 PM »

Khaawish sahab aadab ,,

wah kya talq haqeeqath bayan ki hai apne .. ap beeti chor jagbeeti jo bayan kare shayad wohi shaair hai ..dad hazir jazbat se labrez is takhleeq pe khobool karen .. allah apko khush rakhe ..

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 02:09:08 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2010, 09:13:32 AM

So Kyon Manda Aakhiye
Jis Jamme Rajaan!!!!

Dhan Guru Nanak Dev Ji Ne Yeh Anmol Bachan Uchaare The Ke Hum Usse Kaise Bura Keh sakte hai Jo Ek Janani hai,Yeh Insaan Ko kabhi nahi Bhoolna Chahiye Ke Bade-Bade Raje-Mahraajo,Peer-Paighambar,Sant-Avtaar Ko Janam Dene Wali Ek Aurat Hi Hai..

Aaj Ka Sach.....

“She was Thrown in the garbage dump outside the village for dogs that ate her.

Her only fault — she was the fourth girl born in a poor family,” said By
paediatric doctor here, recalling the first time she witnessed discrimination against female infants.

Even today In Modern Times Birth of girl child is viewed as a bad investment for future..

India’s female to male ratio is 100 males to 93 females compared to a world average of 100 males to 105 females......

Yeh Hai Aaj ke daur Ka Ghinona Sach..Main Iss Kavita Ko Kavita Naa Maankar Sirf Ek Pukaar ka Darja Dunga,Ek Aisi Pukaar Jo Ek Ladki Apni Maa,Apne baap se Kardi hai Ke Aakhir Kyon Usse Hi Janam Milne Se Pehle Maar Diya Jaata Hai..

Iss Kavita Par Comments dena Na Dena,Shayad Zaroori nahi hai Par Iss Kavita Ke Dard Ko,Ehsaas Ko Samjhna Bahut Zaroori Hai,Agar Yeh kavita Kisi Ke dil Mein Dard paida kar sake,Aur Hum Yeh sab Hone Se Rok sake Jisse Jeev Hatya Ya Female Infanticide Kehte Hai to Bas Wahi Ek Anmol Inaam Hi Iss Kavita Ka..Shukriya..

Maa Teri saanson se meri saansein chalti Rahi
par pata Nahi kyon aaj saanso Ka Aana Band sa ho gaya
Ek Rooh Thi Main Tere Jism Ki
Par pata Nahi Kyon Aaj Iss Rooh Se Jism Hi Juda Ho Gaya

Maa Main Tujhse Kuch Kehna Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Jaane Kyon Mujhe Woh Tera Pyaar Naa Mila
Teri Balayen, Tera Woh Dulaar Naa Mila
Maa Main Teri Aanhkon Ka Tara Bankar Jhilmilana Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Maa main thi To ek Beti Par Kisi Bete Sa Kam naa Thi
Ek Baar Sach Kehna,Mujhe maarne Par Kya Teri Aankhein Nam Na Thi..
Maa Main Bhi tere Kadmon se Kadam Milakar chalna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Bhi Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Ek Beti ko Hi kyon Har baar Parkha Jaata Hai
eK jageh par janam Dete waqt Kehte Ho ghar Ki laxmi Ne Janam liya
Aur Dusre Hi pal usse paraya Dhan Kaha Jaata Hai
Maa Meri teri Dost, teri sakhi, Tera Hi Roop Bana Chahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Betiyan To Papa ki Laadliyan Hoti hai
Betiyan to papa Ke Liye Jaan Se Pyaari Hoti hai
Main Aap Dono Ki Izzat Bankar Duniya Mein Rehna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi..

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Har Ek Jeev Ko haq Hai Zindagi Ko Jeene Ka
Kisi Ke haq Ko Cheena gunaah hai,
Ek masoon Si Jaan Ka Qatl karna, Kya Woh Insaan Hai??

Beti To Ek Phool Bankar Ghar-Aangan Mein Khilna Chaahti Thi..
bas..Uski Pukaar Yehi Thi...Maa Main Jeena Chaahti thi...

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Khwaish ji,

Aapke ehsaas aur usme simta hua dard darasl ek aise vishay par roshani daalta hai jispar poori manavta sharmsaar hai. Aaj ham sabhyata ke aise padav per aa khade hue hain ki jahan se door-door tak andhera hi andhera nazar aa raha hai, roshani ki koi umeed nahin dikhai deti. Khair aapke maanviye samvedna par main aapko hazaron saadhuvaad deta hun aur ishwar se prarthana karta hun ki yahi ehsaas hamare samaj mein aajaye.

Aapke is utkrisht kriti ke liye aapko badhai. Aaj-kal main research mein bahut vyast hun isliye forum per time nahin de pata. Umeed hai aap logon ka pyar aise hi bana rahega aur jald hi wapas aaunga.

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2010, 05:50:26 PM »

kya kahem khwaish ji aap ne to hume ashaqon se bhigo diya.sach bahut achhi aur touching kavita.jaisa socha tha usse to bahut behtreen hai.
kaise aapne nanhi kali ke zazbaaton ko likha hai wakai daad ke kabil hai .daad kubool kijiye.

wo bhi waqt aayega jab dast-e-dua uthenge betiyon ki khatir.
wo bhi waqt aayega jab bajenge badhawe betiyon ki khatir.
gulshan mein phool mehkenge betiyon ki khatir.
chand sitare to kya ,maa baap tarsenge betiyon ki khatir.

Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2010, 09:13:32 AM

So Kyon Manda Aakhiye
Jis Jamme Rajaan!!!!

Dhan Guru Nanak Dev Ji Ne Yeh Anmol Bachan Uchaare The Ke Hum Usse Kaise Bura Keh sakte hai Jo Ek Janani hai,Yeh Insaan Ko kabhi nahi Bhoolna Chahiye Ke Bade-Bade Raje-Mahraajo,Peer-Paighambar,Sant-Avtaar Ko Janam Dene Wali Ek Aurat Hi Hai..

Aaj Ka Sach.....

“She was Thrown in the garbage dump outside the village for dogs that ate her.

Her only fault — she was the fourth girl born in a poor family,” said By
paediatric doctor here, recalling the first time she witnessed discrimination against female infants.

Even today In Modern Times Birth of girl child is viewed as a bad investment for future..

India’s female to male ratio is 100 males to 93 females compared to a world average of 100 males to 105 females......

Yeh Hai Aaj ke daur Ka Ghinona Sach..Main Iss Kavita Ko Kavita Naa Maankar Sirf Ek Pukaar ka Darja Dunga,Ek Aisi Pukaar Jo Ek Ladki Apni Maa,Apne baap se Kardi hai Ke Aakhir Kyon Usse Hi Janam Milne Se Pehle Maar Diya Jaata Hai..

Iss Kavita Par Comments dena Na Dena,Shayad Zaroori nahi hai Par Iss Kavita Ke Dard Ko,Ehsaas Ko Samjhna Bahut Zaroori Hai,Agar Yeh kavita Kisi Ke dil Mein Dard paida kar sake,Aur Hum Yeh sab Hone Se Rok sake Jisse Jeev Hatya Ya Female Infanticide Kehte Hai to Bas Wahi Ek Anmol Inaam Hi Iss Kavita Ka..Shukriya..

Maa Teri saanson se meri saansein chalti Rahi
par pata Nahi kyon aaj saanso Ka Aana Band sa ho gaya
Ek Rooh Thi Main Tere Jism Ki
Par pata Nahi Kyon Aaj Iss Rooh Se Jism Hi Juda Ho Gaya

Maa Main Tujhse Kuch Kehna Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Jaane Kyon Mujhe Woh Tera Pyaar Naa Mila
Teri Balayen, Tera Woh Dulaar Naa Mila
Maa Main Teri Aanhkon Ka Tara Bankar Jhilmilana Chaahti Thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Maa main thi To ek Beti Par Kisi Bete Sa Kam naa Thi
Ek Baar Sach Kehna,Mujhe maarne Par Kya Teri Aankhein Nam Na Thi..
Maa Main Bhi tere Kadmon se Kadam Milakar chalna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Bhi Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Ek Beti ko Hi kyon Har baar Parkha Jaata Hai
eK jageh par janam Dete waqt Kehte Ho ghar Ki laxmi Ne Janam liya
Aur Dusre Hi pal usse paraya Dhan Kaha Jaata Hai
Maa Meri teri Dost, teri sakhi, Tera Hi Roop Bana Chahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi...

Betiyan To Papa ki Laadliyan Hoti hai
Betiyan to papa Ke Liye Jaan Se Pyaari Hoti hai
Main Aap Dono Ki Izzat Bankar Duniya Mein Rehna Chaahti thi
Maa Main Jeena Chaahti Thi..

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Har Ek Jeev Ko haq Hai Zindagi Ko Jeene Ka
Kisi Ke haq Ko Cheena gunaah hai,
Ek masoon Si Jaan Ka Qatl karna, Kya Woh Insaan Hai??

Beti To Ek Phool Bankar Ghar-Aangan Mein Khilna Chaahti Thi..
bas..Uski Pukaar Yehi Thi...Maa Main Jeena Chaahti thi...

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2010, 03:08:37 AM »

khwaish bro......behad dardnaak pukaar ko shabdo ka jama pahnane me aap kamyaab rahe....aapki kavita ka sandesh jaroor kuch jindagiyon ko bachayega kyunki shabd kabhi khali nahi jaate.............is rachna ke liye aapko sadhuwad.....


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