Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

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«Reply #30 on: March 03, 2011, 08:52:50 AM »
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khwaishji yakin karenge ki aansu aa rahe hain..... kuchh kah na sakungi..... par....... kya kahun sachaiyan rulati hi hain....Huh???
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«Reply #31 on: March 23, 2011, 08:15:42 AM »
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khwaish ji waqt badlne me samay lagega aapki ye koshish kabile taarif hai
ALL THE BEST
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«Reply #32 on: May 09, 2011, 08:16:21 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on August 28, 2010, 02:09:08 PM
Khwaish ji,

Aapke ehsaas aur usme simta hua dard darasl ek aise vishay par roshani daalta hai jispar poori manavta sharmsaar hai. Aaj ham sabhyata ke aise padav per aa khade hue hain ki jahan se door-door tak andhera hi andhera nazar aa raha hai, roshani ki koi umeed nahin dikhai deti. Khair aapke maanviye samvedna par main aapko hazaron saadhuvaad deta hun aur ishwar se prarthana karta hun ki yahi ehsaas hamare samaj mein aajaye.

Aapke is utkrisht kriti ke liye aapko badhai. Aaj-kal main research mein bahut vyast hun isliye forum per time nahin de pata. Umeed hai aap logon ka pyar aise hi bana rahega aur jald hi wapas aaunga.

HP Pandey 

Drpandeyji...Aapka Tehhhhhh dil se Dhanyawaad jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya iss kavita ko..aapke Aasitwaad aur pyaar ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...yuhi humesha saath dete Rahiyega
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«Reply #33 on: May 09, 2011, 09:39:19 AM »
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 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tumhare alfaaz ab rula gaye mujhe.
              main bhi ladki hoon ye bataa gaye mujhe.


           khawaish ji you r great.......i really mean it
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«Reply #34 on: August 11, 2011, 08:12:48 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 28, 2010, 05:50:26 PM
kya kahem khwaish ji aap ne to hume ashaqon se bhigo diya.sach bahut achhi aur touching kavita.jaisa socha tha usse to bahut behtreen hai.
kaise aapne nanhi kali ke zazbaaton ko likha hai wakai daad ke kabil hai .daad kubool kijiye. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wo bhi waqt aayega jab dast-e-dua uthenge betiyon ki khatir.
wo bhi waqt aayega jab bajenge badhawe betiyon ki khatir.
gulshan mein phool mehkenge betiyon ki khatir.
chand sitare  to kya ,maa baap tarsenge betiyon ki khatir.



Kya Baat Kahi Hai Aapne Sureshji..Woh Din zaroor Aayega Sureshji jab Maa-Baap Khud Tarsenge Betiyon ke Liye..aapki yeh lines padhkar meri Aankhein Nam Ho gayi..Aur Dil Jaan se Shukriya aapka Jo Aapne Mujeh Yeh Likhne ko kaha..Izzat afzai Ke liye Bahut bahut Bahut shukriya Aapka icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #35 on: August 11, 2011, 08:43:58 PM »
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Khawahish jee Aadaab!

Janab kia kaheN aapke in anmol vicharoN par Usual Smile
Humare paas lafz nahi hai... Humne aapki yeH
kalaam tab bhi padhi thi par kuch kahte nahi ban
raha tha... Aur aaj bhi .. Is liye Bekaraar
sabaab ke lafzoN ka sahaara le raheN hai Usual Smile         


Quote from: bekarar on August 29, 2010, 03:08:37 AM
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khwaish bro......behad dardnaak pukaar ko shabdo ka jama pahnane me aap kamyaab rahe....aapki kavita ka sandesh jaroor kuch jindagiyon ko bachayega kyunki shabd kabhi khali nahi jaate.............is rachna ke liye aapko sadhuwad.....
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«Reply #36 on: October 12, 2011, 09:00:12 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 29, 2010, 03:08:37 AM
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khwaish bro......behad dardnaak pukaar ko shabdo ka jama pahnane me aap kamyaab rahe....aapki kavita ka sandesh jaroor kuch jindagiyon ko bachayega kyunki shabd kabhi khali nahi jaate.............is rachna ke liye aapko sadhuwad.....

Sanjeev Bro..Aapka Isse padhna Hi Mere Liye badi baat hai,Main Chahta Bhi yehi Hoon Ke Kaash isse padhne Se Koi yeh Kaam Karne se Khud Ko Roke Aur Kisi Nanhi bachi Ki jaan Bach Jaaye..Aapke Pyaar AUr Aashirwaad Ke Liye Tehhhhhhhhhhhhhh Dil Se bahut bahut Shukriya icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #37 on: December 24, 2011, 03:23:34 PM »
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Khwaish ji. Aap  ki  nazm  padhi. Aap  ne  bahut  khoobsurti aur  jazbzti  andaaz  mein  eik  aisi  haqeeqat  ko  bayaan  kiya  hai  jo  aisa  Qatl  hai  jiske  mujrim  hamaare  maseehaaon  ( doctors ) ki  madad  se  agle  qatl  ke  liye  talwaarein  taiyaar  rakhte  hain.Jis  mulk  mein  hum  Durga  aur  Lakshmi  ki  pooja  karte  hain , Seeta  , Maryam aur Fatima ke naam  per  sar  aqeedat  se  khum  kar  dete  hain  aur Jhansi  ki   raani  aur  Razia  Sultaan ki  bahaaduri  ka  bakhaan  kar ke  fakhr  mahsoos  karte  hain  unhi  ke  swaroop  ko  khatm  karne   mein  zara   nahi hichkichaate.Afsos  aur  zyada  iss  baat  ka  hai  ki  iss  mein  hamaari  maayein  aur  bahnein  sab  se  aage  rahti  hain.Kash  yeh  laanat  khatm  ho.Aap  ka  iss  khoobsurat  nazm  ke  liye  bahut  shukriya  aur  mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #38 on: December 24, 2011, 03:46:07 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on August 30, 2010, 09:21:49 AM
Wah Khwaish Ji wah wah
Kya soch hai, kya haqeeqat hai
Aaina dikhaya hai aapne, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI

Sarvesh Ji Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya,iss dard Ko mehsoos Kiya yeh Jaankar Bahut Shukriya

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«Reply #39 on: December 24, 2011, 03:54:22 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 30, 2010, 11:42:19 AM
Khwaish ji aapke ye sachai padke sirf main nahi sabhi dosto ne ro diya hoga.dil ko cheer ke rakh diya aapke kavita.aapki soch aur likhe ka ek alag andaaz hai . Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks A Lottttttttttt madhu...

Iss Sach par Agar Aankhein naa Bahe To Phir Seene Mein Dil nhai pathar Hoga..

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«Reply #40 on: February 06, 2012, 02:59:34 PM »
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Khuwahish Ji, Aap Ne Toh Ronghte'y Hi Khade'y Kardiye Hai'n,
Mai'n Nahi'n Samajhta Ke Iss Ko Padhkar Kaun Hoga Jis Ki Aankh Na Bhar AayeGi..!,
Bahuth Khhoob Likha Hai Aap Ne,

Sahir Ludhyanavi Ne Kabhi Kaha Tha Ke,
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Madad Chahati Hai yeh Hawwa Ki Beti..
Yashodha Ki HumJins Radha Ki Beti....
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Mai'n Toh LarazKar RahGaya Aap Ke Iss Kalaam Ko Padhkar,
Khhuda Kare Zor-e-Qalam Aur Ziyaada,
Shukriya
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«Reply #41 on: June 12, 2012, 10:31:27 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 01:11:36 AM
Good one Khwaish Ji

Ji Thanku
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«Reply #42 on: June 12, 2012, 04:53:22 PM »
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Really superb.
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«Reply #43 on: July 04, 2012, 03:26:21 PM »
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kya beti ke liyen likha yesa beti kesath har maa baap karengen to beti to bachegi nahin or wo is sansar ko nahi dekh paigin or uska is duniya ko dekhne ka sapna to sapna hi rah jayenga. :tearyeyed:
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«Reply #44 on: July 04, 2012, 03:52:27 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 03, 2010, 01:53:48 PM

Bahut hee jaandaar 'rachnaa' hai yah, Khwaish ji!
Waaqiyee aisee soch kee is 'samaaj' ko bhaaree zaroorat hai! Aisaa soch is desh ki hi nahin waqt ki bhi pukaar hai!

Main ney bahut pahile aik gazal likhee thee jiskaa 'matlaa'   kuchh yuun thaa:

Dilon key beech banee khaaiyon sey dartaa huun!
Main abaabeel huun: neechaaiyon sey dartaa huun!!

Is gazal kaa aik sher, aapki yah 'kavita / nazm' padhh kar mujhey yaad aa rahaa hai (isey main 'yo' par qaafee pahiley post bhi kar chukaa hun):

Lailiyaan qatl kareyn jo milaad key pahile:
Sang dil aisee sabhee daaiyon sey dartaa huun!

Ham jiskey wuzood sey wuzood mein aaye hain: usey qatl karney ki soch bhi kaisey leytey hain: samajh key baahar hai! Male kaa hissa, apnee aulaad mein naam bhar kaa hotaa hai! Shaayad 2-3 kilogram key 'naojaat' tifl mein, aik bataa aik arab gram sey bhi kam. Yah jo insaaniyat aaj tamaam kaainaat mein phailee hai, uskee paidaaish mein lagbhag sou feesadee hissaa aurat kaa hi hotaa hai! Usee key haad-maans sey ham sab baney hain - mard kaa hissaa aham to hai, par, hai 'naam-maatra' kaa hee!
Aapko 'aisey bahut hi achchhey 'wichaaroun' key liye 'haardik saadhuwaad'!
WOH aapko tanturustee sey bharpoor lambee umra ataa karey!

- abd bundeli




Abd Saheb Ji...Aapka Meri Iss Nazm Ko Waqt Dena Hi Mere Liye Kisi Inaam Se Kam Nahi..Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Yeh Jaankar behad se Bhi Zyaada Khushi Hui Hai..Iss Kavita Ko Sirf Padhkar Daad Paana Mera Maqsad nahi..Iss Kavita Se Koi Kuch Seekhle..Yehi Maqsad hai mera..

Aapki Likhi Hui Panktiyan Bahut bahut Khoooooooob Hai..

AUr Aapne Bilkul Sach Kahaa Hai..Yeh Haqeeqat hai....

Aapka Pyaar Aur Aahirwaad Yuhi Milte Rahe..yehi Umeed Rakhta Hoon..

Aapka Phir se Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad..

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