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«Reply #45 on: July 17, 2012, 01:25:04 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on January 31, 2011, 03:11:25 PM

Khwaish jee! antarmann kee gahan vedanaa aap kee lekhni me is had tak utar gayee hai jisko paRh kar har sudhijan kee aatmaa cheetkaar kar uthee hai...samaaj kaa ye kutsit or veebhats sach srishti ke bhoutiki santulan ko dwast karne kee dishaa me kis qadar sahaayak hai iskaa anumaan kisi ko naheeN... aaj kaa boyaa kal kaatnaa hee padegaa...aap ko janmanas ko hilaa dene wali utkrisht rachnaa likhne ke liye sadhuwaad.....

Mamta Ji...Aapne Apna waqt Diya yeh jaankar behad Khushi Hui Hai..Aapki Daad,Aapke Sache lafz Mujhe Bahut Prerit kar Gaye..

Aapka Main bahut bahut Abhaari Hoon..


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Amarjeet Kaur

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #46 on: July 19, 2012, 12:08:28 PM »

Kamaal ki baat hai khwaaish jk....being a man ....aapne ek ajanmi ladke dard ko itni baareeki se mehsoos kiya....per main kahoongi ke is maamle main bhi maa ke haath main zyaada kuch nahi hota apni beti ko bachaane ke lie...koi maa apne shreer ke dil ke tukde ko kaat ker fenkna nahi chahfi...despite its being a girl.....
per jo bhi hai....gunaah ki bhagidaar to vo banti hai ....beshak apne apno ko khush karne ke lie....
is lie yahaan is ghinoune apraadh ke lie main aurat ki vaqaalat nahi kar sakti....

Aapko bahut bahut mubaarakbaaf....aisa zabardast kalaam kehne ke lie


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Shireen Hakani

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #47 on: August 24, 2012, 06:57:51 AM »

Bohat hi aacha aur sach likha hai aap ne!!! Aaj kal log yeh jazbaat kaha samajhte hai!!! Is desh mein ladkiyon ko bhoj samjha jata hai. Husband apni wife par haath uthana apna adhikar samajte hai. Educated or ya illiterate is se farak nahi padta. Beta ho ya beti yeh do logo ke pyar ki nishani hoti hai...log yeh nahi samajhte hai...

Ya pad kar aacha laga ke is desh mein aap jaise log ab bhi hai jo itne aache khayal rakhte hai.

Applause


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laaiba

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #48 on: September 11, 2012, 04:52:47 PM »

hats of u khwaish ji....bemisal likhte hain aap ...maashallah...
aap ki qalam to heere motee se lafz ugaltee hai ..or iske peeche in heeron ko tarashne wala sangtarash aapkaa hasaas qalam hai .....iss be misal shayer ko meri taraf se bohat c daad kesath yeh dua hai ke allah kare zor e qalam or zyada...aamin....salute 2 u ............


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aqsh

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Re: Main Jeena Chaahti Thi.. "Ek Pukaar" "Khwaish"

«Reply #49 on: March 07, 2013, 02:43:44 PM »

Truly touching one khwaish ji. dil bhar aaya is padhte padhte. beti ko woh hi samajh sakta hai jiski apni beti ho. bahut khoob koi alfaaz nahi ke tareef kar sakoon.


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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«Reply #50 on: March 25, 2013, 04:01:59 AM »


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Saara S

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Main jeena chahti hu

«Reply #51 on: June 12, 2014, 09:47:29 PM »

Heart touching lines Kgawahish ji bt still it happened in our society...sukriya


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suman sheoran

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