Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

by Seattlite on August 08, 2005, 08:37:35 AM

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Seattlite

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I
....am a bookworm
....sleep all day
....talk during movies
....eat crackers in bed
....dance out of rhythm
....sing out of tune

etc, ect

main jessa hoon, jessa hoon

(let me know if I spelled that totally wrong...)


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Tosha

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2005, 08:54:42 AM »

This a topic More related to Chit Chat to is being moved from the miscelleneous shayari section to chit chat section...

may be it is a repeated thread so other mods may take further action.

Moved by : Tosha


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Seattlite

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2005, 09:00:45 AM »

No, that was poetry that I wanted some feedback on.

You should really be more careful, you know? I know it sucks, but if it was chit chat I would have put it there.


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Seattlite

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2005, 09:01:57 AM »

And it's not repeated either.

I think you are abusing your power a little, na?

think about it more carefully.


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Tosha

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2005, 09:14:24 AM »

OMG .. !! i never knew u'd be so agressive .. !!!
...
Please forgive me .. !!!
couldn't just make it out if it was a poem..!!!
...
I'm terribely sorry..!!!
...
Here it comes back !!


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Seattlite

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2005, 09:48:47 AM »

well, that's me.

main jesaa hoon.

matlab " I am who I am" right?


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Tosha

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2005, 10:20:37 AM »

Sorry to be a bit critical Amanda..!!
I hope you dont mind my words and take them for the better.
feel what you write and think carefully for words you use.
...
It was a beautiful atempt and i understand what you mean to say...but what you've written needs better and clearer expression and needs an emotional touch to it.
...
Wish you a pleasurble poetry writting..!!!
Yoindia is always there for you and i'm there if tou ever consider me worth any help.
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All the best!!


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sanya310

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2005, 05:34:05 PM »

seatlite, im nt sure if ur a male or a female
if ur a male, the correct words would be, main jaisa hoon, waisa hoon
and if female- main jaisi hoon, waisi hoon.
Usual Smile

good day, n keep writing!


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Seattlite

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Main jesaa hoon, jesaa hoon

«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2005, 08:41:31 PM »

no, I'm a girl.
thanks.
I am atill in the process of learning harder. It's even harder for me to write hindi with roman letters, I think it's easier using devanagari.

shukriyaa