main kavitayein likhti hun... charan..

by lovely_charan on February 06, 2013, 02:43:42 PM
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mujhe shayari nahi aati..
main kavitayein likhti hun..
aakarshak dairy nahi aati..

main kavitayein likhti hun..


dard jab hadd se guzar jata hai...
lahu aankhon mein utar aata hai..
dhadkan bhi saath nahi deti..tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

pyar jab darpan mein nazar aata hai..
chehra aap hi gulabi ho jata hai..
sadaayein paas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

bachpan ekdam se ubhar aata hai..
nishchhal man machal jata hai..
samajhdari raas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

mausam jab rang badalta hai..
kaliyon ka roop nikharta hai..
doori dil se sahi nahi jaati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

kuch kehne ko jab nahi bachta hai..
kisi ka sath hona bhi akharta hai..
apni chhaya bhi nazar nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun...
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 02:47:48 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah waah waah waah waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 02:50:22 PM »
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thank you saahill ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 03:02:09 PM »
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Bahut khoob..
Very nice...
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 03:03:43 PM »
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thanks rahul ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 03:05:41 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on February 06, 2013, 02:43:42 PM
mujhe shayari nahi aati..
main kavitayein likhti hun..
aakarshak dairy nahi aati..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

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dard jab hadd se guzar jata hai...
lahu aankhon mein utar aata hai..
dhadkan bhi saath nahi deti..tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

pyar jab darpan mein nazar aata hai..
chehra aap hi gulabi ho jata hai..
sadaayein paas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

bachpan ekdam se ubhar aata hai..
nishchhal man machal jata hai..
samajhdari raas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

mausam jab rang badalta hai..
kaliyon ka roop nikharta hai..
doori dil se sahi nahi jaati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

kuch kehne ko jab nahi bachta hai..
kisi ka sath hona bhi akharta hai..
apni chhaya bhi nazar nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun...

So so so beutiful lines ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 03:06:54 PM »
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thank you rajan ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 04:11:04 PM »
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Bahut achchii kavitaa hai lovely jee.
Esii tarah likhte rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 04:14:44 PM »
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thank you very very much masoom ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 04:32:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2013, 04:55:00 PM »
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mai bhi kavitayen likhunga
jab sahitya ki bhasa sikh jaunga
jab meri kalam ki bahegi dhaar tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga

jab paath ye jivan koyee padhaye
jab saamne adchan koyee aa jaye
muskil ghadi me jab fas jaun tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga

saans lahar dupahri ghani
peit ki aaj bujhaye paani
maarg kathin jab ho pag pag tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga
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aapki kavita baht achi h Lovely
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2013, 05:17:29 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 06, 2013, 04:32:08 PM
bahut khoob
thank you nand ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2013, 05:23:22 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on February 06, 2013, 04:55:00 PM
mai bhi kavitayen likhunga
jab sahitya ki bhasa sikh jaunga
jab meri kalam ki bahegi dhaar tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga

jab paath ye jivan koyee padhaye
jab saamne adchan koyee aa jaye
muskil ghadi me jab fas jaun tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga

saans lahar dupahri ghani
peit ki aaj bujhaye paani
maarg kathin jab ho pag pag tab--

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga
------ Usual Smile

aapki kavita baht achi h Lovely

apka jawaab bahut acha laga.. Usual Smile

hume vishwash hai..
aap kavita likhenge aisa
hume vishwash hai..

jab raah nayi roshan hogi..
jab prabhu milan ko ayenge..
tab aap kavita likhenge...

hume vishwash hai..

jab rang chaubaare khilenge..
jab preetam pyare dikhenge..
tab aap kavita likhenge..

hume vishwash hai..

jab din mein taare bhayenge..
apko manzil tak le jayenge..
tab aap kavita likhenge..

hume vishwash hai..

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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2013, 05:32:28 PM »
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very nice........ very beautiful... aise hi kavitaayen likhte rahiye, hume sunaate rahiye..
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thank you very very much vimmi ji Usual Smile Usual Smile
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