Main kya hu...

by brokenbyluv on March 02, 2010, 07:52:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 03, 2010, 03:19:40 PM »
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bahut khoob koshish hai rahiim ji...


Ye tou kismat ka lekha hai dost,
dilo ka mel hamare hatho ki lakiro mein hai,
mhbt ka intezaar ashiqo ki taqddeer hai..
aur sitam dhaana uski taseero mein hai......
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«Reply #16 on: March 03, 2010, 04:28:38 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 02, 2010, 07:52:21 PM
Aaj baithe baithe khud k baare mein soch rahi thi tou kuch itna hi khud k baare mein likh paayi hu..ummeed karti hu aap sabko naa pasand hoke bhi pasand aaungi...


Main kya hu ye main aaj tak nhi jaan payi,
kehne ko tou ek bahut hi smjhdaar insaan hu main,

logo se karti hu badi badi baate,
kuch naa mile tou unhi logo se anjaan hu main,

dusro se aas lagate thakti nhi hu,
aur unki ummeedo k waqt banti nadaan hu main,

karti hu wafaa aur imandaari ki baate,
per sach mein bahut hi beimaan hu main,

bahut si galtiya ki hai maine bhi,
har us galti k liye bahut hi pashemaan hu main,

yu tou hasaya hai kayi rote chehro ko,
haqiqat main kho chuki apni hi muskaan hu main,

iss duniya ki gandagi ne aesa bana diya hai aaj,
ki khud k liye bhi uljhi si pehchaan hu main,

merra astitwa kayi rishto se bandha hai,
ek bahut hi adhura sa baaghbaan hu main,

zamana bhar jo samjhe vo uski soch,
per apne har sawaal ka khud hi paayaan hu main,

karti hu kayi mushkilo ka saamna muskurake,
per koi ye nhi janta kitni tanha aur viraan hu main......



paayaan-conclusion,hal
pashemaan-ashamed,sharminda...





Bohot Khoob BBL Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: March 03, 2010, 04:30:15 PM »
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Khwaish Dost and Muskaan Ji..Bohot khoob !!  icon_thumleft

NIce one from you too, Rahim
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #18 on: March 03, 2010, 04:44:02 PM »
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thnx alot celmira ji..
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dead heart
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«Reply #19 on: March 03, 2010, 05:16:56 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di aur Geet jee..

Nice one once again Geet jee!
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #20 on: March 03, 2010, 05:53:40 PM »
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thnx alot rahiim ji...
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riyaz106
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«Reply #21 on: March 04, 2010, 05:39:08 AM »
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Bahut achhi lagi aapki poem BBL JI. Nice creation of a new style.
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dead heart
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«Reply #22 on: March 04, 2010, 11:47:11 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 04, 2010, 11:22:38 AM
hmhm Geet Ji Aap Sabne Inti Badi Badi
Aur Pyaari Pyaari Baaten Likhi Hain Ki
Bhala Main Usme Apni Chhoti Baat Kya Rakhta.!
Khair Aapne Kaha Hai So Chalo Kuch Hum Bhi
Koshish Kar Lete Hain Galti Maafo Ho Ji...!


Kya Kahen Zindagi Se Kaise Larhe Hain
Bas Qiston Qiston Men Hum Mare Hain.
 
Waqt Be Waqt Hoti Rehti Hai Barsaten
Dil Pe Aaj Bhi Kuch Zakhm Hare Hain.
 
Karto Dete Hain Yun Badi Badi Baatein
Mgar Tanhaai Men Hum Bhi Dare Hain.
 
Aur Kya Kahun Haal -e-Dil Aey Doston
Bas Kabhi Sambhle To Kabhi Gire Hain.
 
Aaj Likh To Diya Hai Mehfil Men Mgar
Mera Sach  Ab Bhi Lafzon Se Pare Hai.!


            ~Shihab~
Arey apki chotti baatein?Huh? Arey mere bhai ap toh humse kayi zada acha likte ho...Bahaut khoob!! Applause
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«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2010, 01:44:32 PM »
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thnx alot riyaz ji for lovely comment...shihab ji aap aese hi behetarin chhoti chhoti baate likhte rahiye...bahut khoob lagta hai...iska jawab main thodi mein lautke deti hu....
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«Reply #24 on: March 04, 2010, 06:56:27 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 04, 2010, 11:22:38 AM


Kya Kahen Zindagi Se Kaise Larhe Hain
Bas Qiston Qiston Men Hum Mare Hain.
 
Waqt Be Waqt Hoti Rehti Hai Barsaten
Dil Pe Aaj Bhi Kuch Zakhm Hare Hain.
 
Karto Dete Hain Yun Badi Badi Baatein
Mgar Tanhaai Men Hum Bhi Dare Hain.
 
Aur Kya Kahun Haal -e-Dil Aey Doston
Bas Kabhi Sambhle To Kabhi Gire Hain.
 
Aaj Likh To Diya Hai Mehfil Men Mgar
Mera Sach  Ab Bhi Lafzon Se Pare Hai.!


            ~Shihab~




lijiye aa gyi...
 
Bus chalti jaa rahi hu waqt k sath main,
koi taqdir mein nhi hai chal rhi hu khali hath main,
ek chah ubahrti hai use pane ki per daba deti hu..
poori karti hu sapno mein har adhuri mulaqat main......
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«Reply #25 on: March 04, 2010, 07:22:00 PM »
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bahut khoob shihabji aur bahut sach kaha apne..


Ansu dikhaoge tou ye zamana hasega,
muskaan dhikaoge tou ye zamana jalega,
phir bhi bat'te raho khushiyo ko merre dost..
isi ada se ye zamana chalega chalta hi rahega......
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«Reply #26 on: March 04, 2010, 08:13:39 PM »
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Mujhe bhi apni rahe mil jayengi ek din,
main bhi dekhungi nidar hoke koi sapna,
jahan har phool khilega ek alag ji tazgi se..
jahan haqiqat hogi aur hoga koi sirrf merra apna.....
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«Reply #27 on: March 04, 2010, 08:47:05 PM »
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bahut khoob abhi ijazat chahungi..laut k jwab dungi..gud nite ji...
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«Reply #28 on: March 05, 2010, 12:26:31 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 04, 2010, 08:41:39 PM

Kabhi To Koi Mera Bhi Humsafar Hoga
      Jiske Aagosh Men Haay Mera Sar Hoga.

           Barsengi Jahan Khushiyan Hi Khyshiyan
                Aisa Khoobsurat Ek Mera Bhi Ghar Hoga.!

Mhbt ka diya aksar ek waqt k baad bujh jata hai,
per uski roshni barso tak hamare dilo mein jalti hai,
terri bhi har khwaish poori hogi ae dost..
kyunki aksar manzile thokar khane k baad hi tou milti hai......
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«Reply #29 on: March 06, 2010, 02:14:30 PM »
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bahut khoob ji...aur shukriya....


Merra jahan aaj kuch abaad hai,
ye uske pyar ka asar hai mujhpe,
vo ek jhalak se hi merra har dard mita deta hai..
uski chahte meherbaan iss kadar hai mujhpe......
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