!!!..Main laut aaunga..!!!

by nashwani on August 16, 2013, 01:51:03 AM
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Ikk awaaz dil se kabhi laga ke dekhna, main laut aaunga,,
Ansu kaa ek katra chhalka ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Ishq me sau baar jale hain, abto raakh bhi bikhri padi hai,,
Magar ishq me phir se aazma ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Tujhko khush dekh, apni khushiya.N luta aaye the ham,,
Chehre par kabhi shikan la ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Teri hi adaa pe mar mite, usi wajah se ham shaayar bane,,
Kabhi meri ghazal gunguna ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Door na jane ki sau kasame.N di thi tumne, ham na mane,,
Ek dafa khud me mujhko jaga ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Naa paaya hai naa khoya hai kuchh raah-e-ishq me maine,,
Kabhi dard apna hampe lutaa ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Zinda hun jab tak, saanso.N me mere rawani hai jab tak,,
Ikk baar haath apna badha ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..!!! Ñ
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2013, 02:56:46 AM »
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.................... matlab poori tayyaari ke saath aaye hain aaj do chaar murder karne ke liye, aapki is rachnaa ne jaan hi le li hamaari , kyaa taarif karun, kuch bhi likhun kam hi hogaa, shabd nahi mil paa rahe hain iski taarif ke liye, uuuuffff, kyaa kehne janaab, bas baar baar padhne ka mann kar rahaa hai, bahut bahut khoob Ashwani ji...!!!

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Nashwani ji ab ham kya kahen! aapki is ghazal ki tareef karna Hriday ji ke liye bhi mushkil hogai hai to meri kya majal ke main aapki tareef kar paon - bas hamesha ki tarha waaaaah waaaah aur waaah hi kahonga Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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Waaaaaaaaaah... khoobsurat ehsaas nashwani... ek se badhkar ek sher.. dil ko chhoo gayi tumhari yeh rachna... ek dam dhamakedaar peshkash. hazaron hazaron daaaaad..

Ikk awaaz dil se kabhi laga ke dekhna, main laut aaunga,,
Ansu kaa ek katra chhalka ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Ishq me sau baar jale hain, abto raakh bhi bikhri padi hai,,
Magar ishq me phir se aazma ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..

Zinda hun jab tak, saanso.N me mere rawani hai jab tak,,
Ikk baar haath apna badha ke dekhna, main laut aaunga..!!! Ñ

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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 01:29:56 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub

Bahut shukriya rajan jee..happy9
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.................... matlab poori tayyaari ke saath aaye hain aaj do chaar murder karne ke liye, aapki is rachnaa ne jaan hi le li hamaari , kyaa taarif karun, kuch bhi likhun kam hi hogaa, shabd nahi mil paa rahe hain iski taarif ke liye, uuuuffff, kyaa kehne janaab, bas baar baar padhne ka mann kar rahaa hai, bahut bahut khoob Ashwani ji...!!!

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Pasand karne ke liye Thankyou ! a lot..happy9
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Nashwani ji ab ham kya kahen! aapki is ghazal ki tareef karna Hriday ji ke liye bhi mushkil hogai hai to meri kya majal ke main aapki tareef kar paon - bas hamesha ki tarha waaaaah waaaah aur waaah hi kahonga Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Bahut shukriya iqtedar jee..happy9
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