~*~ Main likh nahin paya ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 06, 2011, 09:13:21 PM
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Kuch anginat ehsaason ko lavz de raha hoon..

Na usne ehsaas karaya, na maine ehsaas dilaya,
Uss bewaffa ka maine jee bhar ke saath nibhaya..

Main nahin kehta tum bhi doob jao brastachar main,
Mager kadva sach hai, imandar yahan koi tik nahin paya..

Woh bewaffa hi nikli, dil ne barson baad yeh sach mana,
Muskurahat toh aj bhi hai, afsos dil ab..dil na reh paya..

Duniya kehti hai insaan woh hai jo dhang se jeeya kare,
Fakr hai, main dunia kay woh dhang seekh nahin paya..

Kagaz kalam liye uske ghar kay samne baithe the,
Na usne apna deedar karaya, na main kuch likh paya..

Kehne ko toh kafi koshish ki kay soch kay jazbaton ko piroun,
Parra toh maloom hua, ‘Khamosh’ kuch bhi gehra nahin likh paya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 05:34:12 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 06, 2011, 09:13:21 PM
Kuch anginat ehsaason ko lavz de raha hoon..

Na usne ehsaas karaya, na maine ehsaas dilaya,
Uss bewaffa ka maine jee bhar ke saath nibhaya..

Main nahin kehta tum bhi doob jao brastachar main,
Mager kadva sach hai, imandar yahan koi tik nahin paya..

Woh bewaffa hi nikli, dil ne barson baad yeh sach mana,
Muskurahat toh aj bhi hai, afsos dil ab..dil na reh paya..

Duniya kehti hai insaan woh hai jo dhang se jeeya kare,
Fakr hai, main dunia kay woh dhang seekh nahin paya..

Kagaz kalam liye uske ghar kay samne baithe the,
Na usne apna deedar karaya, na main kuch likh paya..

Kehne ko toh kafi koshish ki kay soch kay jazbaton ko piroun,
Parra toh maloom hua, ‘Khamosh’ kuch bhi gehra nahin likh paya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 10:26:57 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on October 08, 2011, 05:34:12 AM

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Teh teh dil se shukriya Qalb jee..
Apne humara saath diya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2011, 10:28:50 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 06, 2011, 09:13:21 PM
Kuch anginat ehsaason ko lavz de raha hoon..

Na usne ehsaas karaya, na maine ehsaas dilaya,
Uss bewaffa ka maine jee bhar ke saath nibhaya..

Main nahin kehta tum bhi doob jao brastachar main,
Mager kadva sach hai, imandar yahan koi tik nahin paya..

Woh bewaffa hi nikli, dil ne barson baad yeh sach mana,
Muskurahat toh aj bhi hai, afsos dil ab..dil na reh paya..

Duniya kehti hai insaan woh hai jo dhang se jeeya kare,
Fakr hai, main dunia kay woh dhang seekh nahin paya..

Kagaz kalam liye uske ghar kay samne baithe the,
Na usne apna deedar karaya, na main kuch likh paya..

Kehne ko toh kafi koshish ki kay soch kay jazbaton ko piroun,
Parra toh maloom hua, ‘Khamosh’ kuch bhi gehra nahin likh paya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Dost Rahim, aisa kyon kaha aapne ke aap kuch gehra Nahi likh paaye..Bahuttttt hi acha likha hai aapne Khaas Taur pe 4rth Ashaar Bahuttt Khoob Hai..

Bahut bahut khoob dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2011, 11:09:54 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 06, 2011, 09:13:21 PM
Kuch anginat ehsaason ko lavz de raha hoon..

Na usne ehsaas karaya, na maine ehsaas dilaya,
Uss bewaffa ka maine jee bhar ke saath nibhaya..

Main nahin kehta tum bhi doob jao brastachar main,
Mager kadva sach hai, imandar yahan koi tik nahin paya..

Woh bewaffa hi nikli, dil ne barson baad yeh sach mana,
Muskurahat toh aj bhi hai, afsos dil ab..dil na reh paya..

Duniya kehti hai insaan woh hai jo dhang se jeeya kare,
Fakr hai, main dunia kay woh dhang seekh nahin paya..

Kagaz kalam liye uske ghar kay samne baithe the,
Na usne apna deedar karaya, na main kuch likh paya..

bahut hi khoobsurat ye sher lagaa

Kehne ko toh kafi koshish ki kay soch kay jazbaton ko piroun,
Parra toh maloom hua, ‘Khamosh’ kuch bhi gehra nahin likh paya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 11:22:49 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 08, 2011, 10:28:50 AM
Dost Rahim, aisa kyon kaha aapne ke aap kuch gehra Nahi likh paaye..Bahuttttt hi acha likha hai aapne Khaas Taur pe 4rth Ashaar Bahuttt Khoob Hai..

Bahut bahut khoob dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Bas kuch aisa hi laga kay itna gehra nahin likh paya..
Saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2011, 11:23:24 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 08, 2011, 10:36:43 AM
Wah bahut khub rahim bhai...

Shad o aabad rahiye

Shihab...
Teh teh dil se shukriya Shihab jee..
Saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2011, 11:24:29 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 08, 2011, 11:09:54 AM

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause sabhi ache hain
Teh teh dil se shukriya Sheba jee..
Haan woh shaer hi sabse pehle likha tha maine..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2011, 05:41:20 PM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2011, 07:15:15 PM »
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wah Rahim sahab--
bahot khoob...

aapke kalaam ko parh kar aaj fir mai comnt me kuch likh nahi paya-- sad5

Rahim aap likhte ho aise
alfaazo me sachai baste ho jaise

dil se daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen iss nachij sarfire ki taraf se -

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
Usual Smile han aise
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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2011, 09:38:32 PM »
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Quote from: Rajah rohan on October 08, 2011, 05:41:20 PM
Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
Shukriya Rohan jee..
Bas saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2011, 09:40:00 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 08, 2011, 07:15:15 PM
wah Rahim sahab--
bahot khoob...

aapke kalaam ko parh kar aaj fir mai comnt me kuch likh nahi paya-- sad5

Rahim aap likhte ho aise
alfaazo me sachai baste ho jaise

dil se daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen iss nachij sarfire ki taraf se -

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
Usual Smile han aise
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Ap bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega mera.. Usual Smile
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2011, 03:51:24 AM »
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RAhim Ji Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Dil Se Daaaad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2011, 08:00:20 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on October 09, 2011, 03:51:24 AM
RAhim Ji Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Dil Se Daaaad Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Sanjeev jee..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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