-----/// Main muskuraataa chalaa hoon ///----- Hriday

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kabhi  main   sabhi  se   chhipaataa   chalaa  hoon
kabhi  main  har  kisi  ko  bataataa   chalaa   hoon

haseen   koi   chehraa, jo  pasand  mujhko  aayaa
dil  ko  main   apne,  bas   lagaataa   chalaa  hoon

hai  kabhi  chot   khaai,  kabhi   dhokhey  khaaye
magar  fir  bhi  main   muskuraataa  chalaa  hoon

lakeeron  mein  dhundaa  hoon   apni  jo  kiismat
main  kismat   bhi  apni,   banaataa  chalaa  hoon

koi  kaagaz   ki   kashti,   hai   jawaani   yeh  meri
main  paani  mein  isko,   bahaataa   chalaa  hoon

woh dost  ho  meraa, yaa koi  dushman rahaa ho
main  seene  se  sab   ko,  lagaataa  chalaa  hoon

ret  par  samundar  ke  main  naam  apnaa  likhke
lehron  se   us  ko,  main   mitaataa  chalaa  hoon

main   gaataa  hoon  wohi jo  aayaa 'Hriday' mein
mohabbat  ke dhunn main, sunaataa chalaa hoon

koi  kehtaa  hai paagal,  koi  kehtaa   deewaanaa
har  baat  ko   hasi  mein,  udaataa  chalaa  hoon





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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2014, 04:09:03 AM »
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khubsurat ghazal hai Hriday ji . bahut bahut mubarakbad
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2014, 04:31:06 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub hridayji....
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2014, 05:31:57 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Gazal Kahi hai. Dheron Daad.
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2014, 06:33:03 AM »
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वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही खूब.....

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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2014, 04:29:06 PM »
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kabhi  main   sabhi  se   chhipaataa   chalaa  hoon
kabhi  main  har  kisi  ko  bataataa   chalaa   hoon

haseen   koi   chehraa, jo  pasand  mujhko  aayaa
dil  ko  main   apne,  bas   lagaataa   chalaa  hoon

hai  kabhi  chot   khaai,  kabhi   dhokhey  khaaye
magar  fir  bhi  main   muskuraataa  chalaa  hoon

lakeeron  mein  dhundaa  hoon   apni  jo  kiismat
main  kismat   bhi  apni,   banaataa  chalaa  hoon

koi  kaagaz   ki   kashti,   hai   jawaani   yeh  meri
main  paani  mein  isko,   bahaataa   chalaa  hoon

woh dost  ho  meraa, yaa koi  dushman rahaa ho
main  seene  se  sab   ko,  lagaataa  chalaa  hoon

ret  par  samundar  ke  main  naam  apnaa  likhke
lehron  se   us  ko,  main   mitaataa  chalaa  hoon

main   gaataa  hoon  wohi jo  aayaa 'Hriday' mein
mohabbat  ke dhunn main, sunaataa chalaa hoon

koi  kehtaa  hai paagal,  koi  kehtaa   deewaanaa
har  baat  ko   hasi  mein,  udaataa  chalaa  hoon





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achchcha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2014, 06:22:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi ko jo aapne meri is koshish ko padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!

khubsurat ghazal hai Hriday ji . bahut bahut mubarakbad

Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub hridayji....

Bahut Khoobsurat Gazal Kahi hai. Dheron Daad.

वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही खूब.....

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



achchcha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2014, 07:29:51 PM »
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woh dost  ho meraa, yaa koi  dushman rahaa ho
main seene  se  sab ko,  lagaataa chalaa hoon

Bahut Khub Hriday Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2014, 03:58:02 AM »
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wah wah...bahut khub....  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2014, 04:57:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Shihab ji aur Jnyana ji....!!!

woh dost  ho meraa, yaa koi  dushman rahaa ho
main seene  se  sab ko,  lagaataa chalaa hoon

Bahut Khub Hriday Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab

wah wah...bahut khub....  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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