~Main qabr ki orre barr gaya~by Rahim

by dead heart on December 18, 2010, 11:13:08 PM
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Mera janam dinn ho ya ek saal ka ant..mujhe yehi ehsaas hota hai kay maut kay kareeb agaye hai hum..
iss guzre hue saal main, kayi cheezein seekhi hai, mehsus kiya hai mager dekh jaye toh mere liye meri personal life ka ek toota hua saal guzra hai..maine jisse bahaut chaha, woh apni raah badal gaya..
Aur meri professional life jisse koi raah nahin dikh rahi thi woh sahi track par chal parri..Khuda ka shukar hai har cheez kay liye..
Bas kuch apne saal par likha hai..

Ek aur saal dekhte hi dekhte beet gaya,
Mera ek aur qadam meri qabr ki orre barr gaya..

Jisne thaam kay haath mera najane kitne vaade kiye the,
Woh shaks iss saal main najane kyun apni raah badal gaya..

Ek waqt aisa bhi tha kay dikh nahin rahi thi raah koi mujhe,
‘Khamosh’ ko sahi raah miljaye; najane kaun aisi dua kar gaya..

Maine apne apko kho diya kahin iss duniya ki bheed main,
Kyun ki jo kal tak mera tha, woh kisi aur ka hogaya..

Waqt beet kar kahi aur baatein seekha gaya mujhe,
‘Khamosh’ apni qabr ki orre bas qadam barra gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2010, 02:22:18 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2010, 04:07:26 AM »
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wah bahut khub Rahim Bhai jaan.
kya mast likha aapne ...aapki ye peshkash bilkul meri soch ke lafz hain.
wo bhi tab jab kal mera Bday hai
tab aapne ye likha ...
kasam se bahut khubsurat aur sachhi.
dil khus ho gaya ..
bahut umda
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2010, 09:25:43 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2010, 10:42:24 AM »
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Shukriya Bekarar jee, KillBill jee aur Rajesh jee..!

Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2010, 10:04:40 AM »
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are bhaii, abhi abhi to mile ho itni jaldi qabra ki bate na kro..dher saari daad aapne waqai bada achha likha hai~

zindagi jeene walon ki amanat hai..
maut ka khwab to murdon ko ata hai~

dost uparwale ne ham sabko ek or naseehaton se bhara saal baksha hai...yahi har janmdin par sochna chahiye...

khush rahiye..
likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2010, 11:02:58 AM »
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teh dil se shukriya Abhi bhai,.
Bahaut achi do lines..
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Khush rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2010, 11:03:48 AM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2010, 12:32:31 PM »
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rahim ji bht aacha likha he aur bht meaningful bhi he ........byt pyara likha hua he but dear ek baat kahna chahunga .....bas ye hi ki uperwala jo karta he aache ke liye karta he ye samajne ki koshish kare .....sab sahi ho jayega....
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2010, 12:54:10 PM »
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Wah wah wah Rahim-bhai....mast likha hai....janmdin ko ek aur naye nazariye se dekha hai aapne.....par ye negetive soch hai....aane waale pal ka abhi se kya sochna....jo pal maujud hai usse hassi khushee jeena chahiye....


Quote from: -Rahim- on December 18, 2010, 11:13:08 PM
Mera janam dinn ho ya ek saal ka ant..mujhe yehi ehsaas hota hai kay maut kay kareeb agaye hai hum..
iss guzre hue saal main, kayi cheezein seekhi hai, mehsus kiya hai mager dekh jaye toh mere liye meri personal life ka ek toota hua saal guzra hai..maine jisse bahaut chaha, woh apni raah badal gaya..
Aur meri professional life jisse koi raah nahin dikh rahi thi woh sahi track par chal parri..Khuda ka shukar hai har cheez kay liye..
Bas kuch apne saal par likha hai..

Ek aur saal dekhte hi dekhte beet gaya,
Mera ek aur qadam meri qabr ki orre barr gaya..

Jisne thaam kay haath mera najane kitne vaade kiye the,
Woh shaks iss saal main najane kyun apni raah badal gaya..

Ek waqt aisa bhi tha kay dikh nahin rahi thi raah koi mujhe,
‘Khamosh’ ko sahi raah miljaye; najane kaun aisi dua kar gaya..

Maine apne apko kho diya kahin iss duniya ki bheed main,
Kyun ki jo kal tak mera tha, woh kisi aur ka hogaya..

Waqt beet kar kahi aur baatein seekha gaya mujhe,
‘Khamosh’ apni qabr ki orre bas qadam barra gaya..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2010, 06:40:17 PM »
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Shukriya Matrix Guy aur Koyal di..!
Mujhe uss Rabb par hi toh bharosa hai..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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